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Posted: 11 years ago
Very nice update. After reading the previous update i thought lexie was the girl who helped arnav from come out of drugs but after reading this chapter scene toh ulta ho gaya. My serial mind didnt think this way. Khushi here is very kind hearted girl.I like this khushi.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved it .. what to say .. i dont know .. very well written .. i am so angry on arnav before but now i dont know what to say ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
absolutely amazing update.. my heart fell very heavy after reading this.. so arnav is still in love with his ex and what he feels for his wife is mere responsibility...waiting for the future updates dear..
Edited by lovebarun... - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Somehow drugs are always involved in the artistic world... but at least a little glad that Arnav had his head screwed on slightly. He really loved Lexie but unfortunately in the midst of giving her freedom, he did lose her.

In all these days of being in the hospital, did he even give a thought to Khushi who has been listening to Arnav's edited past from Aman?
Edited by jessjazz - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: satiisparvati

You know all the comments are just as awesome as the story. Why does Lexie remind me of Amy Winehouse😕


Not only Amy, it reminded me of Michael Jackson, Whitney Houston and many others who wasted their lives away.
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Posted: 11 years ago
That was awesome
Loved the way you showed their life n problems
Edited by -afsha- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
So Il not repeat the much felt and already mentioned many times things like being sad for a beautiful life wasted. I am also in favour of Arnav having gone to meet her, though I am still pissed at his brushing away Khushi. Thats that okay. Now important things which I want to comment about-
1. Firstly, I want to give two to Aman. He realized in last chapter too that maybe Anjali and he shouldnt have meddled and put their plan of bringng Arnav Khushi closer into action. Though anyways it would have happened anyhow as Khushi was already falling for Arnav. But I am talking about Aman here. So Il give him two joote for telling Khushi not to turn Arnav down. So what does he want? that insspite of the things that rolled out just in front of him, inspite of knowing how hurt she herself is, she should just go and put salve on Arnav s' wounds? I think that was very insensitive on his part.
2. Khushi, quite a realistic potrayal of her character. She loves him and ofcourse I totally understand that she would be by his side still. I think if not for anything then atleast for the sake of humanity she understands why her husband went away right now. It was the call of a dying person. What irritated me, I realized , was the line 'She would resurrect the waning flame in her husband'. What does she mean by that? I hope its not with respect to herself. I really pray to God that she has some self respect right now and doesnt go all bringing life to his soul back and love for herself. Its beyond me how could she be okay with being called his responsibility. All that I feel right now for is not oh wow for her misplaced bravery but pity. 3. Because that man himself thinks that he wished he could turn back and undo all the wrong. What does that say about Khushi s' place in his life.? If he had thought this in the past then it was okay since he hadnt known Khushi at that time and it wouldnt have hurt me at all. But Khushi is there now and married to him. This is what I had mentioned in the last chapters comment that what ifS may come to Khushi. But clearly she busy being goody right now and the what ifs are being wished by Arnav. He clearly thought of "joy and care and peace" he felt with Khushi. Not love. And even if Arnavs' love for Lexie has evaporated with time or maybe him loving her was his illusion all along, I dont want to fool myself into believing that he loves Khushi now and just hasnt realized. It wouldnt have gone flying out of the window, got overpowered at that phonecall, had there been love. He had already quite like honestly told her he wouldnt be able to love her. Maybe he still loves or thinks he loves Lexie. Infact Arnav is a grown enough man.So if there had been love, he would have realized been the first person to keep holding on to it considering how he had lost it the first time.
4. What did Katie see to have made her that 'He still loves you'. ? Thanks Shweta. For this beyond brilliant story. It had been long since I had come across one such that is helping me exercise my brain. :D Please. atleast abki to jaldi update de do. Reham karo seriously.
Edited by Anupama. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
wonderful update,quite touching.i do feel bad that it was lexie who reminded arnav that he has a wife as well now.so even aman said it that khushi is arnav's responsibility nd not his love,indirectly.wanting to see khushi providing comfort to arnav.i hope he is back in the next update.continue soon
Edited by kank_dah - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Anupama.

So Il not repeat the much felt and already mentioned many times things like being sad for a beautiful life wasted. I am also in favour of Arnav having gone to meet her, though I am still pissed at his brushing away Khushi. Thats that okay. Now important things which I want to comment about-

1. Firstly, I want to give two to Aman. He realized in last chapter too that maybe Anjali and he shouldnt have meddled and put their plan of bringng Arnav Khushi closer into action. Though anyways it would have happened anyhow as Khushi was already falling for Arnav. But I am talking about Aman here. So Il give him two joote for telling Khushi not to turn Arnav down. So what does he want? that insspite of the things that rolled out just in front of him, inspite of knowing how hurt she herself is, she should just go and put salve on Arnav s' wounds? I think that was very insensitive on his part.
2. Khushi, quite a realistic potrayal of her character. She loves him and ofcourse I totally understand that she would be by his side still. I think if not for anything then atleast for the sake of humanity she understands why her husband went away right now. It was the call of a dying person. What irritated me, I realized , was the line 'She would resurrect the waning flame in her husband'. What does she mean by that? I hope its not with respect to herself. I really pray to God that she has some self respect right now and doesnt go all bringing life to his soul back and love for herself. Its beyond me how could she be okay with being called his responsibility. All that I feel right now for is not oh wow for her misplaced bravery but pity. 3. Because that man himself thinks that he wished he could turn back and undo all the wrong. What does that say about Khushi s' place in his life.? If he had thought this in the past then it was okay since he hadnt known Khushi at that time and it wouldnt have hurt me at all. But Khushi is there now and married to him. This is what I had mentioned in the last chapters comment that what ifS may come to Khushi. But clearly she busy being goody right now and the what ifs are being wished by Arnav. He clearly thought of "joy and care and peace" he felt with Khushi. Not love. And even if Arnavs' love for Lexie has evaporated with time or maybe him loving her was his illusion all along, I dont want to fool myself into believing that he loves Khushi now and just hasnt realized. It wouldnt have gone flying out of the window, got overpowered at that phonecall, had there been love. He had already quite like honestly told her he wouldnt be able to love her. Maybe he still loves or thinks he loves Lexie. Infact Arnav is a grown enough man.So if there had been love, he would have realized been the first person to keep holding on to it considering how he had lost it the first time.
4. What did Katie see to have made her that 'He still loves you'. ? Thanks Shweta. For this beyond brilliant story. It had been long since I had come across one such that is helping me exercise my brain. :D Please. atleast abki to jaldi update de do. Reham karo seriously.


Thanks Anupama. You wrote all the feelings I felt after reading it. I did not like Aman saying that to Khushi especially Arnav was too harsh about Khushi than he was with Khushi . I could not forget or forgive Arnav saying " I know I have wife you do not need to rub it on my face". It was out right cruel thing to say about once wife and especially with other person even if he is his best friend. Most of the times Arnav talked to Aman like that about Khushi. Still he expects her to not let his friend down. But how can we expect anything from a person who asked his friend why can not he sleep with his wife instead of sleeping with Lavanya since it's safe.

The second thing that really hurt my feelings was Arnav could not remember about Khushi at all in these 10 days. I can understand his feelings about Lexie's condition but how can he forgot about the person who is giving him pleasure, joy, support and care even if he can not acknowledge her love. He is so responsible man and still nursing his guilt about his failed so called responsibility about his so called love, then how can not he think how he is responsible for his wife's heart break.
He only thought about relationship which gave him peace but not the way he cause her pain or her feelings. Just the way Lexie thought about the chance with the person only person who truly love her but not the heartbreak she caused him. Yes, Aman said the truth both completes each other and won't give a damn to the people who loves them.

If Khushi can not show her self respect I really can not take it. I have lot of respect about Khushi because she is brave and have sprit and self respect. If she is going to behave like mahan with out thinking what is her place in Arnav place then I am going to loose that respect. She will be one of the Indian wife who has no self respect and hang on to her husband how ever he treats her. She is no special.

Edited by nishaipkkdian - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
I feel that I am the most heartless person reading this supurb ff. For I have very limited sympathy towards people who live their lives in the name of free love. Thus I am unable to be heartbroken for lexi, she just squandered her life and love...to have it all and not appreciate any of it. I refuse to feel bad for a person who does value what they have.
About arnav I feel bad for him as unrequited love is very sad indeed. He loved her so much and yet he got nothing but heartache from her.
Khushi is in a similar place as arnav, she loves him unconditionally where he does not care for her. What a tragedy...but the heart wants what it wants.
I just want khushi to keep her self respect once arnav returns and will not be willing to be the replacement girl.
Above all I feel so bad and sad for khushi. She deserves so much more and so much better than what life has thrown at her thus far. I want her to become the center of someone,s life, the pulse of their heart and soul.
Thank you for writing such an epic ff for us. Waiting...
You are an absolutely brilliant writer please do not stop writing...

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