|| Feeling Of Love || KriYaansh SS

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FeEliNG of LoVE...!!


Chapter 1


"Love fu*ks you" he claimed loudly.


"That was too rude, wasn't it...?" she said causally sipping her red wine.


"Was it..?? if no it's cool and if yes it's super cool, coz reality always says that love fu*ks you" he said in anger.


"So recent heart breaks...?" she asked crossing her legs


"No!" he said and made a round fifth of his Isabella's Islay.


She looked at him with a raise eyebrow. He turned at looked at her and frowns.


"What...?" he asked


"It's your fifth round..!! How on earth you are able to gulp that thing down your throat...?" she asked making weird faces looking at the glass of whisky.


He laughs out loud making her frown at him "It's not my mistake that you have not finish your round one still of your wine" he said "and secondly stop making that face you look funny. By the way want to try a sip...?"


He said forwarding his glass to her. She made a face as if she will puke down any moment and he laughed out.


"Whisky is not my glass Rey. You only have that liquid and I will have this" she said a sipped her wine.


"You like wine...?" Rey asked.


"Yeah! Especially red wine" she said enjoying her finally round two.


"Any special reason..?" Rey asked looking at her glass of wine.


"Yup! Red is the color of love and I..." she was cut by Rey's voice.


"Love fu*ks you" he said repeating his words again.


"I know that, you said it few minute back" she said looking into his eyes.


His eyes were full of anger. One thing she got to know was he hated love, but why..?? And she knew he will not let out the reason so easily. She has to do something to speak up, but still she tried to ask.


"By the way, any personal reason for that f-word" she said.


There was a compete silence, he didn't answer she continued


"Parent's love...?" she asked, hoping he would say something.


"Nope! Mom dead when I was too young and dad never let me close to him as looking at me he remembers his wife, my mom and anyways now he too is died" he said causally.


So it was not parental love issue, she continued to find out.


"Friends...?" she asked, avoiding using that L word


"Friends never loved me, they loved my money" he said


For the first time in their conversation he didn't used the f-word after love. So friends was also not the problem so felt a last thing.


"Girl...?" she asked looking into his eyes this time.


He was silent; she looked into his eyes the anger was replaced with hurt. He was hurt.
"So girl problem" she said looking attentively at him.


"Can u please change this fu*ked up love topic" he said his eyes burning with new flames of anger.


"Fine!" she said "what's above...?" she changed the topic


They were in Rey's house, it was really a huge mansion with a long lawn were two cane chairs were put up. A living room which was adored with a beautiful set of sofa and a center table with a soft carpet below. In one corner there was a mini bar it looked like heaven. But something was missing, what..?? She didn't know.


"Above..?? Nothing just 3 bed rooms and a Terrace" he said


"Can I see it...?" she asked looking at the staircase.


"of-course" he said.


Soon both went upstairs Rey was guiding her throughout the house. All the bed rooms were adored with a king sized bed. They looked lavish. She was having a urge to throw herself on the bed but she control. They went at terrace; cold breeze touched her face making her hair to flow with them. Rey looked at her for first time his eyes had some different emotion which she was not able to read. They both stand over their looking at the sky and twinkling stars.


"Its most of the time said that when people die, they become one of the stars above and looked after their be-loved" she spoke absent mindly.


Rey looked at her and saw her lost in her thoughts staring at the sky.


"Do you believe that..??" she asked, looking that him.


"Nope!" he said looking other side.


She smiled at him "you believe it, right...?" she said making him face her.


He didn't spoke a word. He looked at the sky above with emotionless face.


"I do believe, I too have lost my parent. When m low I often talk to them looking at this stars hoping that one of them would be my parents" she said ant smiled at the sky.


"my parents left me alone in this world when I was too young, so I can know the feeling, but I advice u one thing they show or not they definitely loves you" she said in assuring tone.


"My dad didn't, he didn't if he would then he would have never told me to live away from him" Rey said stilling looking above.


"May be he didn't wanted to make you sad" she said


"No! He didn't want to make himself sad" Rey said looking at her.


Her face was shining in moon light; it was a full moon night. Kriya to look at him. Both were looking in each other eyes. Some words which never came out verbal were visible in their eye. Rey could see how much she missed her parent but she respected them at the end and loved them too. But in the case of Rey it was little different. Yes! Rey too missed them but he was more hurt by them especially his dad, but somewhere she could see the love and respect but hurt was more.


Their eye look was broke by Rey's phone. Rey picked up the call.


"Yes Mr. Shukla" Rey said as soon as he picked up the call.


"No! Don't, first send me the details of the company let me go through it and then we will decide upon meeting with them" Rey said on the phone


"Okay, make it fast" saying this Rey cut the call and looked at her.


"I think we should go down, it's pretty cold here" she said.


"Yeah! Fine" Rey said


Both descend down the stairs. There was silence in the room. Both were looking everywhere but not at each other.


"I think I should leave, it's let" she spoke picking up her hand bag.


"Fine! My driver will drop u and please no saying no, it's late and its difficult to get cab at this hour" Rey said leaving no other option for her.


She nodded and smiled at him and walked towards the door and stopped she turned back and looked at Rey


"Rey if ever you want to talk m there for you" she said "and one more thing the person who believes in love after getting hurt in love, is true lover. Just think once" she said and started to move.


"Kriya! Thank you" Rey said don't know why but he felt like saying.


Kriya smiled and got in the car. And the car soon vanished away from Rey's eyes.

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So here end my Chapter one, so its a SS will have i guess 5 to 6 update only. nd ya i will be quick this time for sure. do comment and review me back.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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INDEX

Chapter 1 : Scroll up

Chapter 2 : Page no. 7

Edited by -reine- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesum starting... Pm me whenever u update nxt...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome start ,...
achcha yeh batao what's the relationship between kria n rey ? as in friends , colleagues ya kuch aur 😆😳

i love rey in this ... reveal the reason sooner please ^_^
Edited by divyani.arsha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice start..
Though I would want to know the reason sooner.

But he isnt he a little akdu kinda person.. when its about love..

But saath hi saath concern bhi hai.

GOD! What is he?
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Posted: 11 years ago
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amazing concept...

Rey doesnt belive in love...

Buh definately he will...a bit late...buh will...

would love to read this story more...

Both KriYaansh lost their parents at a young age...

do write soon...

Love Aditi..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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The start chaper looks promising...
ant to know what actually is shared b/ KR...

and the reason of course...

waiting.. :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice start.. like it.. Thanks for pm..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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soo intrsthng strtng
likd it so much
thnks 4 pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome start
Update next part soon

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