A sadda haq DARK FF updated 6th chapter : The fifth mountain - Page 4

Res kiya hai jab complete hoga tab unres karungi😊 btw I'm first to comment😊
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Aashima, ur both ff's are really amazing.I must say u have a very good vocabulary.
Btw who was that mysterious man??(reaveal soon ok 😉 ).
Updating my comment shortly😆 after u update whole chap*winks*
Parth is son of a caravan leader 😲SO as parth has entered the story randhir is getting irked.Overall by reading the update ek baat toh clear hai ki u will read thriller/suspense/mystrey books!
And btw the map pic u tagged with this gives a real picture of the backdrop.SO there is a war approching😲 Anyway it was really AWESOME
JALDI update karna.
Sorry for soo.. much bak bak
Ananya❤️
Ye lo meri update comment
It was just just...
DYNAMIC update mindblowing concept i'm just loving every bit of it..
TO BE CONTINUED IN NEXT CHAPTER UPDATE!!😆

nice update

Oh Hod, Aashi you've begun such a mysterious tale. I'm so so so looking forward to what's coming up next. Surely, you shouldn't trust anyone blindly or you're the one at loss. Update soon. Lots of love xxx

Hey. This sounds interesting! PM me, please? :D

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Unres.
Hi sweetie.🤗
Eh mein pehle bhi keh chuki hoon aur ab bhi keh rahi hoon,I am in love with your FFs dear.U have great command over language.
The concept of this FF is UNIQUE AND EXTRA-ORDINARY.
U write sooo well ki padhte rehne ka mann karta hain,WAISE I HAVE ONE WORD FOR IT,PERRRFECT(MADHURI DIXIT STYLE).😃
Hats off to you girl.👏
I am dying to know more about that Mysterious man.I want to know what he is upto???
Parth ka entry ho gaya,he is son of caravan leader,superb dear,now it will be interesting to know what happens further.The story is really very interesting and engaging.
Jiggy scared of hoofing noise of camels.😆
So,the real game is going to start now.I love adventure.😃
U Pen down everything so beautifully and naturally.Loved it dearie.
Will be waiting for the next part.

Lots of love.
Priya.

ye parth kaha kaha se aa jata hai...!!!
kahi bhi suspicion ki air hooo
tada...
parth is present..!!!

so parth is also here.anyways greta update nad Randhir upset abut sanyu...ahuummm.so soon...

Lovely update..loved it!!
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Very interesting,..
I'm totally intrigued with the plot..
Looking forward fir the future chapters...
Update ASAP...
Pm me..

Love
Ayesha..