ARSHI FF #2:YOU Belong With Me! UPDATED PART-9B pg-134 1-7-2014

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Sarun_wahifan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#301

Amazing update.
It was like a high on emotion chapter. Arnav commited
Such a mistake in his fury. I was litterally wishing for
Them to get married in this update but offcourse u have
That thought out very well in your mind so I just can't wait
Now for how the story is gonna unfold further.
Thanks for the pm n please do update soon.

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pravallika

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Posted: 11 years ago

#302

Read the update again simi...
So many things changed in one update...
Kushi was in so much love with arnav, but now i think she will
not be able to forgive him easily for what he spoke...
For arti arnav was her life.. but with his words he hurt her so badly,
She is shattered completely...
Coming to anjali i dont know how she will react but any girl will be hurt
for the words he said...
Dadaji will be definitely disappointed with arnav...
What a mess he created in haste...
I really pity arnav...
I felt disgusted when i read arnavs dialogues but if i think from his side he
is not fully at fault...
He was firstly irritated with the unknown girl occupying his thoughts from past
two days without knowing it is kushi...
Then his fathers presence with his secondwife frustrated him little more..
When he came for the much needed comfort from his mother she was not there
because of the same kushi whom he thinks has snatched his mother...
And the alcohol effect has added fuel to the fire...he dug his own grave...
Very emotional one.. dynamics of all the relations have changed bcoz of few words...
But i really didn't expect this twist simi...
Awesome update... 👏 👏 👏

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pravallika

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Posted: 11 years ago

#303

Waiting for the revelation of aman's story...
Next update asap simi...
Atleast teaser plzzz...

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Arshix144

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Posted: 11 years ago

#304

What a power packed and intense Chapter. Simi!

Loved, loved loved the way you handled the Arnav and Khushi confrontation. I am actually a little relived to know that Arnav is not responsible for Aman's disappearance! But the way he uttered those harsh words for Khushi because of his childish jealousy was so in character, it was so good to see Khushi give it back to him. She might have had the biggest crush on him but I was so relieved to see her respect herself and her dignity enough to not let him continue with his insulting triade. She gave it back to him and she did it brilliantly too making Arnav realize his folly immediately. He had every right to reject the marriage but he had no right to assume the worst of Khushi and insult her the way he did. I suppose he was battling his own demon at the time after the confrontation with his dad.

Aarti's reaction was also portrayed wonderfully. Now I am more curious than ever to see how Arnav will try to redeem himself and sort this situation out.

Bring on more whenever you can! ;)