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Originally posted by: sparkling_gems
Not just someone almost everyone loves it... its just that most of us takes writer for granted.
Originally posted by: samridhigoodiez
Sorryyy yar itna late reply kiya mene... Sry once again... That was an amazing update as always... Plz update asap...
that is so not good... U shud never do that... Complete it...u are about to cross 100 pagesOriginally posted by: purnima209
THATS K DEAR NO PBLM...ACTUALLY I M NOT INTERESTED TO POST NXT PART BECAUSE I M NOT GETTING RESPONSE YAR THATS Y I M THINKG TO DISCONTINUE IT...
Originally posted by: samridhigoodiez
that is so not good... U shud never do that... Complete it...u are about to cross 100 pages
. Or kya chahiye... Also start sending pms... Response apne ap acchha hojayega... Btw I love ur write up... So post next part phata phat
They reached home. Dinner was ready by kaka.
K: beta khana table pe rakha hai. Kha,lena. Der ho gayi hai, main chalta hoon.
R: thik hai kaka. Ap jayiye.
And kaka left.
When they reached sanyu was slept. Randhir took her in his arms and made her sit on the chair of dining table.
S: mmm randhir chhoro mujhe nind aa rahi hai.
R: bilkul nahi medicines lene hein. Khana khana padega.
S: mujhe nahi khana.
R: chup chap khana khao.(and he fed her)
S: ho gaya khana ab jaane do.
R: aise kaise jaane doon??? Jiske liye itni mehnat ki wo to lena padega.
S: kya???
R: medicines.(again he fed her)
S: tumne khaya nahi. Chalo khao.
R: abhi to tumhe itni nind aa rahi thi na???
S: haan agar main chali gayi to tum khaoge nahi.
R: ok(and he ate his food)
Meanwhile she slept leaning her head on table.
R: sanyu uthho. Bed par so jaana.
S: no response.
R(not audible enough): paagal ho tum. khayaal hai tumhe par sirf apna nahi.
Again he took her in his arms and made her sleep on bed and covered her with blanket. He changed and went to bed. He called pari.
R: hello princess.
P: hello papa. Apne khana khaya???
R: haan kha liya. Aj tumhari mumma ne khilaya.
P: sachi. Matlab mumma ko sab yaad aa gaya???
R: yaad to nahi aaya par abhi pehle se thik hai.
S: abhi wo kahan hai???
R: so gayi. Achha tumne khaya ya nahi???
P: haan par apko bahut yaad kiya.
R: koi baat nahi mera bacha. Main jab jaunga to sath kha lenge eo b dessert k saath. Thik hai. Ab tum so jao. Kal school bhi to jaana hai.
P: ok papa. Bye.
R: bye princess.
He hung the phone and slept.
Day 2...
Next morning...
randhir woke up and made tea for both of them. He came to sanyu who,was still sleeping. He kept the trey on table and admired her. She was looking just like a gorgeous and innocent angel who was being blessed by light sun rays.
R: so heavenly. Lagta hai dekhta hi rahun.
But he knew he would get late for their next amusement. So he came out of his dream and called her off.
R: good morning farzi. uthho subah ho gayi aur dekho main tumhare liye tumhari favourite kam chini aur ilaichi waali chai laaya hun.
He was caressing and srtoking his hand on her hairs. She slowly opened her eyes and admired a super cute face, which was extraordinarily lucky for her life. She lightly smiled and lazily woke up and sat on the bed.
S: good morning. Tum chai k saath??? Ye to ladkiyon ka kaam hai na fir tumne kar diya. Tumhari ego sahi salaamat hai na.(giggles)
R: farzi. You. Pata hai puri raat tum mere upar soyi thi aur kapde bhi nahi bale. Tumhe to mere khharaaton ne bhi disturb nahi kiya. Lady kumbhkaran kanhiki.
S: kya kaha tumne kumbhkaran.(threw a pilow on him)
R: are ye kar kya rahi ho??? Sach hi to bola hai. Aise punishment koi thodi deta hai. Are haan bandar ko bandar bolo to bura to lagega hi.
S: haww..
She started running after him with a pilow. Both were running like dogs and cats. Finally she caught him they were on bed. He was lying on bed and she was sitting on her abdomen holding both his hands on both her palms.
S: kya kaha tumne. Haan???
R: uthho bahut bhari ho. Mera pet phat jayega.
She started beating him playfully. Now he caught both her palms made her lei down got over her. He rested both his knees on bed and clutched both her arms. He was slowly and steadily moving towards her face. With the increment of his forward movement, her heartbeat went more and more faster. Finally he rested his lips on her ears and whispered.
R: chai thandi ho rahi hai. Wo heartbeat normal hone ka wait nahi karegi.
Saying this he came back to a position when their faces were just two inches apart. Now they both burst out laughing.
S: idiot mcp. Kabhi nahi sudhroge tum.
R: so to hai. Par manna padega tumhari heartbeat ko kya speed hai. Hahaha.
S: u..(he took her in his one arm and gave a side hug)
R: ab chalo. Chai thandi ho rahi hai.
They both started sipping tea.
S: not bad mcp. Kya chai banaayi hai. Superb. Lagta hai tumhe bhi ghar k kaam sikh ldne chahiye.
R: ab jab tumhari importance samajh gaya hun to mujhse sikhne me koi problem nahi.
S: ab zyada emotional hone ki koi zarurat nahi. Chalo plan kya hai batao.
R: tum hp saath me to plan aise hi ban jayega.
S: zyada romantic hone ki zarurat nahi. Batao to kahan jaana hai???
R: marine drive.
S: kya baat hai mcp. Koi rank no1 se bhi badi position mil gayi kya.(giggles)
R: tum hi dedo.
S: mr. sadu(hahaha)
R: yahi sahi. Ab chalo ready ho jao.
They left home. On the way..
S: tumne pari se baat ki???
R: haan puchh rahi thi tumhare baare mein.
S: mujhse gussa hogi na maine usse baat nahi ki.
R: god knows. Khud hi baat kar lo. Main dial karta hoon.
S: hmm
He calls pari.
S: hello gudiya. Kaisi ho tum??? Mujhse gussa ho na. Main tumse baat nahi ki.
P: main thik hun mumma. Koi baat nahi mujhe pata hai ap tired ho gaye the.
S: tum sach me gussa nahi ho???
P: nahi.
S: aur ye mcp faltu mujhe dara raha tha.
Meanwhile renuka calls pari for school.
P: coming dadi. Ok mumma bye mujhe school jaana hai. Bye.
S: bye gudiya.
After hanging phone.
S: you idiot mcp mujhe daraya tumne.
R: maine kahan daraya. Kuch kaha thodi maine. Maine bas itna kaha mujhe pataa nahi.
S: oho.. You are impossible.
R: thats why I m no1.
S: no1 my foot. Hunn. Mujhe baat hi nahi karni tumse.(she folded her arms,and sat)
Randhir stared her and smiled.
R: waise ek jagah hai jahan tumhara gussa door ho sakta hai wahan chalte hein.
S: silent.
He made way to a sea beach. Within few minutes they reached.
R: ab mu ka shape thik karlo hum pahunch gaye.
S: still silent.
R: dekho ego maintain karna mera kaam hai. Idhar dekho main tumhe kitni achhi jagah leke aaya hun.
S: again silence.
R: agar tumne reply nahi kiya na to result bahut bura hoga.
S: no response.
R: achha ok. I am sorry.
S: haan??? Sunayi nahi diya.
R: isse zor main kuch aur bolunga.
S: kya???
R(in a huge tone): I love you.(he stood on the car seat)
S: dhire bolo log daud k aa jayenge.
R: aane do. Bula hi to raha hoon. Meri ruthhi biwi ko manaane k liye.
S: chup karo randhir aur utro wahaan se abhi.(pulling his hand)
R: pehle answer do fir utrunga.
S: ok.. I love you. Ab utar jao.
R: sunayi nahi diya. Feeling k saath bolo chalo. Take 2.
S: I love you randhir. My baby(kiddish tone)
R: wah yaar aisa lag raha hai feel hi nahi kiya. Not done. Dil se bolo. Take 3.
S(calmly): I love you randhir from the bottom of my heart and this is the onlt thing I can remember.(her eyes moist)
R: heyy gorgeous.. Maine tumhe hasane k liye ye sab kiya aur tum rone lagi. Do you think this is fair???
S(wiping her tears): chalen samandar intezaar kar raha hai.
R: thats like my farzi.(giggles)
She was about to open the door. Meanwhile he jumped from other side and reached the door.
R: anaan.. Allow me my love lady..
S: itni khaatir. Halaal karna hai kya.
R: haan.. Mere pyar me.(giggle again). Ab chalo.
They went to the beach.
R: pata hai jab hum yahaan pichhli bar aaye the tum mere kandhe par chadh gayi thi aur kaha main to queen hun. Main kyun niche chalun. Mere pair agar gande ho gaye to tum thodi dhone aaoge mr.mcp.
S: haha to tumne kya kaha???
R: main kya keh sakta tha, mujhe to wazan uthhana hi tha. Puri zindagi jhelne ka promise kiya hai phir ye to thodi hi der tha.
S: u mcp. She started running after him.
Both were running and this time she was faster than him and music played
Shining in the shade in sun like A pearl upon the ocean Come and feel me.. How feel me
Shining in the shade in sun like A pearl upon the ocean Come on heal me.. Go heal me
Thinking about the lovin making And life sharing come and feel me. How feel me
Shining in the shade in sun like A pearl upon the ocean Come on feel me Come on heal me..
Hua jo tubhi mera mera Tera jo ikraar hua
To kyun na main bhi keh doon keh doon Hua mujhe bhi pyaar hua
Tera hone laga hoon, khone laga hoon Jab se mila hoon
Tera hone laga hoon, khone laga hoon Jab se mila hoon
She finally reached him and climbed on his shoulders
S: Abhi bhi uthhana padega. Kya hai puri life ka sawaal hai. Ab chal mere ghode tik tik tik.
R: what???
S: are raani to ghode par chadh k hi sair(journey) karegi na.(giggles)
R: aur agar ghode ne gira diya to???
S: to raani ghaayal ho jayegi, fir royegi.
R: tumhe aur kuch yaad ho na ho emotional blackmail karna zaroor aata hai.
S: ok. Har roz tum mujhe gaana dedicate karte ho aaj main hi sahi. Tauba tera jalwa, tauba tera pyar, tera emotional atyachaar. Haha.
He held her, ran some way. Finally he lost balance and sanyu fell on sand and randhir was,over her. They had a long eye lock. Finally randhir spoke.
R: itni taklif life time jhel sakta hun main. It will be my pleasure.
S:(blushed)
R: ahaan koi blush kar raha hai. Romantic hawaa chal rahi hai shaayad isliye.
She playfully hitted his chest and again hugged her.(giggles)
R: ab bas karo farzi. Chalo bhel puri khhate hein. Yahaan ki famous hein.
And they went to the stall.
R: bhaiya do bhel puri. Haan tikha mat karna.
After service they started eating. And again lost in each other and were eating slowly upto a long time. After few minutes the shopkeeper interrupted both.
SK: aur ek plate doon saab???
R: nahi ye to khatam hone de.
SK: par saab ye to kab ki khatam ho gayi.
R(surprized): nahi rehne de.
Sandhir looked each other and started laughing hardly. Suddenly sanyu saw pani puri and asked randhir to have some. They both reached the stall and ordered. After eating one pani puri each both started jumping due to chilli.
S: tikha. Hah.. Paani.. Paani.
R: aur daudi pani puri khane. Tumhare wajah se mera b yahi haal hai. Hah..
Sanyu picked a bottle near there and started drinking madly.
R: pehle mujhe do.
S: nahi maine pehle bottle uthhaya tha.
R: to tumhari wajah se ye sab hua hai. Mujhe do.
S: main nahi dungi(and they started fighting)
SK: are bhaisaab ap ye dusra bottle le lijiye.
Now he left sanyu's bottle and both drank the whole bottle of water. After satisfaction they went to the sea again.
To be continue... ( if i get response only dear 😭)
nice love it arrey yaar aisa maat karo plz discontinue maat karo it's a very sweet FF
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