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cutiepie_sarun

@cutiepie_sarun

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#171

I hope you know that...I WANT AN EPILOGUE. And no mini shini epilogue, a full one :D

Please dedo na... 😆

P.S I will pester you once exams are over. I hope you know.

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RasgullaSP

@Rasgulla_sp

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#172

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Aww I love ArHi love stories that begin in childhood and culminate in adulthood ❤️

And this was such a well-written one 👍🏼 You took the IPK Universe, you took Alternate Universe and then you meshed up the two seamlessly... to the extent that the gaps in Arnav's transformation to ASR were filled up yet I was reading something new altogether.

I loved the cute flashbacks too. Chotay chotay pyarey pyarey ArHi 😳. All those instances you mentioned were a proper match to their situations in adulthood. In the story you had mentioned that ArHi knew each other since childhood to teenage years before they were separated. I would have loved a flashback of their teen years with altered dynamics coz all flashbacks were childhood only...

I wanted to facepalm because of Arnav and Khushi. Both love each other, cant afford to be separated anymore and want to be with each other all their lives yet couldnt think of a middle ground. See, Arnav has a multibillion business in Delhi. He cant move operations of those to Lucknow whereas Khushi had to just finish a dance course. And doesnt every girl leave her house for her husband's? (No. Dont get me wrong. If Khushi were running a business and Arnav had to finish his education I would be saying that Arnav shift his city) Finally they realised they could meet halfway. He would compromise on the time and travel now and she would compromise on the city later. Bas baat khatam 😊

PS: At one place you have called Arnav's father 'Armaan' and at another called him 'Arjun'

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henamani

@henamani

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#173

home is where love is

i agree

and hope that all of us find our homes soon

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Sona257

@Sona257

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#174

Totally loved the TS.. Felt like I have read a ff

Arnav and khushi are really cute when they were kids and now... Loved the way how they hang out with each other

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premdewaani

@premdewaani

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#175

Awww such a sweet and beautiful story dear!!!! Superb.. Looking forward to read more:-))

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i_m_arshiya

@i_m_arshiya

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#176

Read it in one go and it's really awesome.

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sincereme

@sincereme

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#177

Fabulous TS...

Beautifully written... Absolutely loved it...

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Pooja

@poojasidd123

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#178

loved the ending!! u conveyed their thoughts very beautifully ..yes please do give us an epilogue..will be waiting for it..

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#179

that's a superb TS

beautiful one

iam happy I got to read this

excellent one

do pm me when u write next

thx

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#180

Loved the ending glad he asked her to met him half way loved how he realized that his home was her so cute loved the tricked he played with her with help from the family loved their knock jokes thanks for the pm.