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ShiningHearts

@ShiningHearts

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#161

Lovely update!!!

n really very beautiful n perfect ending<333

Awesome Story⭐️⭐️⭐️

Amazingglyy written👏👏👏

n thnx fr d pm..

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littlemissstar

@littlemissstar

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#162

Superb..
Loved it..
Beautifully written...
Pls pls try fr an epilogue..pretty pls 😉
:)

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yeshyeshna

@yeshyeshna

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#163

awesome ending

very well written

arnav was possessive about khushi since childhood

waiting for an epilogue😊

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sk2405

@sk2405

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#164

Welcome back Emma!

I feel bad for not having read this earlier but after having read all the parts I am glad I waited, for reading the TS without any breaks was perfect. It gave a new, different meaning to every word in each update.

What I loved the most was the way the past and the present were mixed and blended. The scenic description of Sheesh Mahal had me besotted and for a moment I felt I was sitting on the bench, facing the pond and amongst the rose bushes, bathing in the beautiful white pearl moonlight. Such soothing was the effect! Though they were not shown growing up, not for a single moment did anything feel amiss.

The struggles of the past were brutally unjustified for their innocent souls but then everything eventually was worth it. Meethi and Annav meeting halfway was worth it and there couldn't be anything more beautiful. I loved the way they sorted out their future plans with absolutely the right amounts of maturity and love. I appreciate the way he decided to fight his past demons and the way she decided to give in everything for him, or rather for them. It clearly shows the depths of their love.

Waiting for the next fiction. 😊

p.s : This clearly was one of your finer works.

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Izza

@memories_im

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#165

loved it! :) It was a perfect beautiful story :)

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Pastellitesoulx

@xMIC.Dropx

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#166

Heart warming update <3
loved it so much.

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afsha

@-afsha-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#167

Loved it

Plz give epi showing their journey and marriage

Plzzz

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Apya

@Apya

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#168

Amazing! You are a fabulous writer, seriously. Don't ever stop!

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1chilly

@1chilly

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#169

Such a sweet concluding part.

And I'm so happy they both decided to meet each other halfway.

The flashbacks were beautifully interspersed in the story.

Loved theway Arnav wasaccepted back in the family.

Waiting for the epilogue.

And for the new story after that!

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cutiepie_sarun

@cutiepie_sarun

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#170

Ok that was stunning. Seriously what a sweet story! Love the meet me halfway idea, so wonderful. It's true, where there is love, there must be some compromise. I love you for writing this! *big hug*

And I feel as if your writing has gotten even better...if that's possible...this was magical! Love you em <3