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Parvathi Devi

@honey-sweety

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#91

That was wonderful update...

This story is getting interesting...

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Michelle

@-ChildOfChrist-

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#92

Wow this FF ROCKS!

I read all the chapters in one go!

I'm completely in love with this story

It's so different from other FF's

So now coming to the update

So Shyam is their neighbor?

I had a feeling when Shyam entered that he could be involved in this somehow.

And my suspicion was proven right!

Yaar yeh Fluffy bhi bohot mysterious ho gaya hai.

What did Khushi see in the room?

Who called Arnav?

Who was Shyam talking to?

And sabse bada sawal, Who is guy that keeps on speaking in another language?

Isn't he the one behind all this? but why?

Uff! There are so many questions just flying around in my head!

Can't wait to know what happens next!

Thanks for the PM!

Update soon!

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sindhu

@misscrazyfan

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#93

Hey ya I read I one shot

Just loved the mystery

I would like to find out the history if mystery soon

So pls ms update soon dear

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RizArshi

@RizArshi

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#94

Interesting update. I am glad that Arnav didn't say anything to Shyam. I hated it when he tried to poke his nose in their matter. Arnav and Khushi better start understanding Fluff better. He is the one who always tries to alert them. No idea what Khushi saw or who the culprit is but I guess it was Khushi who called Arnav on his phone. Maybe Khushi saw something related to Shyam or a person they know in their bedroom and that's why she called Arnav on his phone instead of calling him out loud.

Thanks for the PM :)

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@BlueBloodQueen

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#95

Awesome up date !!!!!!!!! Uff...many question...i am sure this shyam is defianately evil...thnx for the pm...

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khareshelley

@khareshelley

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#96

that was really interesting and different story.. loved it..!!!!

i had a feeling shyam is involved somehow... he was their neighbor also ..!!!!!!

i love fluffy.. its better if they start understanding his sign.. he is trying to alert them..!!!
i m also wondering where he was for whole one month..!!!!

who are those two voices.. are they evil souls..!!!

superb ff..!!!!!1

thanks for pm..!!!!

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-SOBTIAN-

@.LadyHitler.

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#97

Very intriguing! Loved this update!
So much suspense!
Did fluff show something related to shyam? Khushi must have called arnav! But the other questions and suspense is killing me now!
Update soon!

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Sravya/Sravs

@...Champ...

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#98

Chapter-7

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~Fully edited and moved to my blog~

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With loads and loads of love,

Edited by ...Champ... - 9 years ago

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_Chaverah_

@_Chaverah_

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#99

Ha Ha!!! Caught ya!!!

Ab do mujhe update!!!!

Oops!!!

Khaan pakarke sorry!! Beech mein aa gayi?!

Yaar, am damn sorry.. :(

Re-Edited!

Ahha!!

I did expect Shyaam to be the culprit! But what I dint expect was the revelation so early!!! No I aint complaining... Being the one with not so patient mind, I sure do love the revelation!!!

So, its Arnav who designed their home? As in the architect? Wow yaar.. Thats so touchy and adorable...

And Jesus Christ! You do know how to make me sit smiling... So, Arnav did suspect something was really fishy and Viola! He called the cops? Now thats a damn cool move!

And what the fudge?!

Intimate photos of Arnav and 'who'? In Shyaam's bag? Is he insane?! I so wish to see the day Arnav would go all ASR-ish and beat the hell out of him, blue and black!!

And who in the hell is this 'mysterious woman'?!

And its written, that, Arnie boy states its not him, as in, the photo is kinda made up?!

And what the freak is going on?!!!

Shravs, you're gonna get my BP raised someday, honestly!

So, its Fluffy, the brave and intelligent dog who saved the day! Bingo!!

I so very loved the way you'v put Arnav and Khushi, their love, trust and beyond that, their way of looking out for each other... Ah, ArShi love is something that I'd never get tired of...

And now that the truth's been peek-a-boo kinda revealed, and that Arnav is in complete action, I really want the rest of the truth, as in, the real one behind all this, I mean, cummon, it cant be Shyaam all alone... So, I need that and the mystery and everything to come out in their real pace and colors...

Oh how I love you for the way you are pulling this genre.. Kudos buddy!

P.S : Regarding the updating, trust me I understand.. Take your time, hun!

Edited by Chaverah_TFC - 11 years ago

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Sravya/Sravs

@...Champ...

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#100

NOTE

First of all I'm really very very sorry for just vanishing away in thin air without giving updates. Yes, I was present in the forum, but I just couldn't give updates.

Times haven't been good lately at home guys. There were death news, college stuff, health problems arising lately. Even now I'm not feeling well. I'm running down with cold and heavy cough which is getting really bad to hold.

And the worst of all this my college timings getting extended and now I'm destined to spend 12 hours aka half of my day in college, from 8 am to 8 pm. Yeah, I know, my college is becoming brutal. But for the course I have chosen that sort of coaching is needed to which my college is hell bent on pushing it down on us. And we poor students have to bear it.

So, so far till now, I guess I have given enough lame excuses though? Ok, not that I'm really making excuses, I was just telling. I know I should be more often in updating, but my days not making me do so.

And here I come to the main reason of this note. As said above, my probs now, I decided I would only update on SUNDAY. Would try to give 2 updates, but guys no promises. I will feel bad if I can't keep up though, so only once a week will I be updating.

Hope you guys understand, though I know you guys are so sweet to be angry on me.

Love ya all,

Edited by Lucky_arshi - 11 years ago