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Vrutanshi

@kreya204

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Posted: 11 years ago

#231

OMG!!!!
Dis story is sooo awesome!!!
Its all randhir's pov!! 1 more reason to lyk it! 😉
The whole story is fab!!!
The way he comforts her!!! Supports her!!!
Tries to get her be back to her REAL strong self is grt!!!
She left again!!! Bt deep down she wanted him to stop her!!
To make her stay!! To compel her to stay WITH him!! FOR him!!
N nw dey meet after 2 yrs!!!
On her wedding day!!! When she is clad in her wedding attire!!
She tells him all that has happened!!!
All of it!!! N he asked her to marry him!!!
Awww!!! N nw they'll runaway!! Sooo goood!!!
Nw lets see hw he faces his mother!
Like u knw showing up at her doorstep with his wife!!!
She myt just get a heartattack!! 😆
Continue soon!!
N pm me plz!!!

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Anmol

@SexySince1999

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Posted: 11 years ago

#232

ossum chapter...
loved it alot...
superbly written...
update soon...
thanks for the pm...
love anu

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Anmol

@SexySince1999

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#233

ossum chapter...
loved it alot...
superbly written...
update soon...
thanks for the pm...
love anu

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SanDhiraddict

@SanDhiraddict

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Posted: 11 years ago

#234

Run SanDhir Run.

I can't believe they are doing this. But somehow loving it.

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@AnatomyAddict

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Posted: 11 years ago

#235

Eeeks! Call me crazy but I have always fantasized about "bhaag ke shaadi karna" and all😆

This was beautiful though! I love how you have portrayed them in this drabble! They were getting their 3rd chance with each other! And you made sure that they would grab that chance with both their hands!

Update sooon! Today pleaaassseee!! I am used to reading and reviewing two drabbles at the same time! UPDATE

Typing from phone (🤢), hence short comment! Sorry!

Love always,

Pari

Edited by gujjupari - 11 years ago

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Saffi Sanam

@ilovepyaar

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#236

Originally posted by: Piya1702
Woohooa!!!
Now This is what I had always wanteddd from Sandhir...i.e. they running away just before her geting married..😳...n u penned it soo beautifully👏
loved it😊

Hahahaha! I wanted to put them in the most extreme situation. Life's third and possible final chance to unite them... it had to be through something bizarre. They had opportunities to unite in much easier ways before, but these idiots missed out and now they have to face harder situations!

Glad they finally grew a brain though!

Thanks!

Originally posted by: namya
I think this drabble was the best of All!!
It was fabulous
Update soon

Thank you!!!

Originally posted by: SWA1992
omg!!!! Sanyu agreed to that ...unbelievable!!!! yeh toh chottu tha... after 1&1/2 days u updated this..haq bantha hai hum readrs ke ek lumba update njoy karne ka...hei na??

I KNOW RIGHT, SANYU AGREED! I guess she also realized that it's her own fault for not confessing to Randhir when the situation was easier. Anyways, these two totally have a hatke style about them, that I don't even think this is far-fetched. 😆 Short? This was long for a drabble! 😆

Originally posted by: unishaz
nice.. Loved it.. Thanks for pm..

Thanks!

Originally posted by: jhumki1977
Loving this roller coaster ride...but plz update soon else will hack into your computer and read the remaining parts.. dont torture us anymore...plz plz plzz

You're loving it? It's almost the end of the ride soon though. Oh man, I will need to improve the protection on my computer now! 😛 Thanks!

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Saffi Sanam

@ilovepyaar

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#237

Originally posted by: kri1

You've made them reunite...in the most beautiful way. And I think this was the best way that they could run away! WOOO! LOVE IT! POST 14!!!! NOW NOW NOW!

Awww thank you! Fourteen will come soon... hopefully. xD I'm trying to space it out a teensy bit so this doesn't have to end so soon. 😭

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Saffi Sanam

@ilovepyaar

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#238

Originally posted by: SwetaRocking
Saffi!

You have updated the most beautiful drabble of this series. You know, last time I read all the 12 chaps at one go and only one thing kept hovering on my mind; that they are losing so much time in these ego clashes, this game of hide and seek. But in this story, destiny plays a huge role. And as you said, you wanted to show us the beauty of timeless love, you are being successful at it. A very beautifully weaved story, which reflects depth, sensitiveness and honest emotions. Randhir here is so understanding, and if I want the character in the show to evolve, I would want him to evolve into the Randhir of your story, and knowing how layered the character is, maybe he will. And Sanyukta, well she is a confused soul here, torn between family, feelings that she wrongly assumed was love, and ultimately, the actual love of her life. And here, in the 13th drabble, you have reunited them in the most beautiful way possible. This series is probably one of the finest work this forum has been gifted with.

Keep up the good work.

Love,

Sweta<3

Wow Sweta! Thank you so much for the long, in depth, and amazing comment! I feel so honoured right now! Thank you! I'm so glad that you enjoyed this drabble (along with the rest). These two are losing so much time because of their inability to express their love for each other. Randhir and Sanyukta almost hit square one again (which was them in the position they were back in FITE) when life gave them another chance to confess. They lost it again. I know this drabble collection is from Randhir's POV, but Sanyukta is equally responsible here. When Randhir wanted to confess in FITE, he was too late. When Sanyukta realized her feelings, she had already taken steps she considered against her morals backing off from. She had accepted her destiny, and Randhir accepted his... but that wasn't their destiny. Their destiny was always to be together, that's why life threw these two together once again. And this time, their egos clashed, their nerves took over, the need to see the other one happy lead to them being insecure of their own abilities. But now, in the heat of the moment, in the most crazy situation, they finally realized that this game they were playing was a losing game. Nobody would emerge victorious... and this is where I ultimately wanted them to end up.

Thank you once again for the fabulous review! 😊

Edited by ilovepyaar - 11 years ago

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Saffi Sanam

@ilovepyaar

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#239

Originally posted by: ammi22
what the... Are they really going to runaway.
Any ways they are going to be together.
then I love it.

Yes! 😛 Thanks!

Originally posted by: meenu1613
awsm

Thanks

Originally posted by: MAHAK1234
Ohk ... destiny wants them 2 b together ..
lol world is small nd ROUND
they r running away cool ...
waiting fr d nxt update
Btw thanks fr d pm
Do pm me d nxt part
Keep writing
Loads of love👏😆😃

Thank you! Yes destiny does want them to be together. Small, round world, will always bring them face to face - it's inevitable. 😆 You encounter those you think about most.

Originally posted by: purnima209
wow superb part

Thank you!

Originally posted by: DamselinDistres
RESERVED FOR A LONG TIME!
GOTTA READ EACH N EVERY DRAB ! XD

How long is long? Waiting! 😆

Originally posted by: anjipankaj
ohh thank god
finally sandhir has met .
how sweet of randhir when he said to sanyukta to run away with him.
thank you for the speedy update
jaldi jaldi update karo

Yes finally! Thank you so much!

Originally posted by: -ParamHolic-
Finally an update is here :D
As usual amazingh update..
Feeling bad for sanyukta..her parents are crazy i tell u..
Bhala ho RD ke Boss ka jo usne RD ko apne bete ki shaadi me bheja..😆
Yay! Now we'll get Sandhir Runaway n they'll marry?
I am so exicted...They both know how much they love each other..fir bhi itna natak..dumbos..
Update next part soon..
Love
Neha

Yeah crazyyy parent's. They were all like, first you become an engineer when you should have been married into an MCP family, and then you make a low class boy your boyfriend... that too BEFORE marriage? 😆😆😆

Marry? You'll see. But yes, they run away. 😆 I know, they're dumbos. 😛 Thank you!

Originally posted by: Prizi
Ossummm

Thanks!

Originally posted by: aleena.1884
awww... they are running away... yaayyy... finally got some sense in their heads... oye hoye.. he's ready to forgive his mother too for her...haayyee...
kaash he make her run away with him in the show too before her engagement with The Chomu. 🤓

Yeah, they're running away! Just for her family to accept him as Sanyu's suitor, he's ready to forgive his mother! The kinds of things that love makes you do...😆 Haaaye, if they run away in the show, i'll be dead. 😳 Thanks!

Originally posted by: coolishparul
hey thanks for accepting my buddy request...nyc story continue soon 😊

No problem! Thanks!

Originally posted by: tanda
wooohooo! ossum blossom! yippeee! yeah..so randhir will run away wiith his boss's sons bride...interestng very interstng..:D thanx fr d lovely update

Thank you! Yes LOL! Very interesting.

Originally posted by: PrussianBlue
THIS IS BEAUTIFUL, SAFFI! :****
Continue soon! :**

Thanks! 😳

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Saffi Sanam

@ilovepyaar

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#240

Originally posted by: kreya204
OMG!!!!
Dis story is sooo awesome!!!
Its all randhir's pov!! 1 more reason to lyk it! 😉
The whole story is fab!!!
The way he comforts her!!! Supports her!!!
Tries to get her be back to her REAL strong self is grt!!!
She left again!!! Bt deep down she wanted him to stop her!!
To make her stay!! To compel her to stay WITH him!! FOR him!!
N nw dey meet after 2 yrs!!!
On her wedding day!!! When she is clad in her wedding attire!!
She tells him all that has happened!!!
All of it!!! N he asked her to marry him!!!
Awww!!! N nw they'll runaway!! Sooo goood!!!
Nw lets see hw he faces his mother!
Like u knw showing up at her doorstep with his wife!!!
She myt just get a heartattack!! 😆
Continue soon!!
N pm me plz!!!

OMG!!! THIS REVIEW IS SO AWESOME! Thank you! I'm so glad that you enjoyed the journey this far! He always wanted the best for her, and he's doing everything in his power to assure that this happens. Renuka Sanyal's reaction? Man, I wasn't even thinking of writing this. I think you just added one more chapter to this fic! 😆 Thank you so much!

Originally posted by: Honey-FLAB
ossum chapter...
loved it alot...
superbly written...
update soon...
thanks for the pm...
love anu

Thank you!

Originally posted by: SanDhiraddict
Run SanDhir Run.
I can't believe they are doing this. But somehow loving it.

Thanks!

Originally posted by: gujjupari
Eeeks! Call me crazy but I have always fantasized about "bhaag ke shaadi karna" and all😆
This was beautiful though! I love how you have portrayed them in this drabble! They were getting their 3rd chance with each other! And you made sure that they would grab that chance with both their hands!

Update sooon! Today pleaaassseee!! I am used to reading and reviewing two drabbles at the same time! UPDATE

Typing from phone (🤢), hence short comment! Sorry!

Love always,
Pari

Oh Pari, running away and getting married is a pretty common fantasy if you ask me. There's a certain thrill about it! 😆 Third time lucky haha! I'm so, so happy you're liking how this fic is going! Today? I'll try! 😛 All comments, long or short, are welcome! 🤗 Thanks!

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