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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: SwetaRocking

Saffi! I read all twelve at one go! And my eyes are hurting now. -___- And you are ending this soon? Why you do this. T.T Why do all good things come to an end T.T Okay I am rambling now. Update next part. And I will write a nice good review (If that matters to you, that is 😆)

Love,
Sweta <3



All at once! Whoa, I don't want my story to cause any harm. Uh-oh I think I need to put a disclaimer that says I'm not responsible if anything happens to you! Just kidding. 😆

Of course nice good reviews matter to me! 😆

Thank you so much!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: aciddaisies


OMG.
I SWEAR
JUST WHEN I THOUGHT NOTHING COULD GO WRONG OMG >:(
WEDDING DAY *DIES* D: WHY U DO DIS? WHY?

RANDHIR IS SO UNDERSTANDING HERE, IT MAKES ME SADDER OMG.
PURE EVIL.
UPDATE >_>



Sorry! 😆 Yes, Randhir is so understanding here! Thanks. 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: kri1

Well... it's the most awaited thing for Saffi on IndiaForumsss! 😆 Just kidding! But thanks yaar for not posting anything because I honestly was too worked up! I love ya. A LOT. Anywaaayyys! My review!

I hope everything is okay Kri! <3


YAAAR! IMMA CRY WHEN YOU MAKE THIS FINISHED...😃 I love ya! Update soon!

No, nooo getting emotional or I will. Heyy, I think I'll cry myself when this is over.

Muah, thank you Kri! I can update now. <3

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Posted: 11 years ago
Thirteen: You Found Me

It was a small world. Randhir had been invited last minute to attend the wedding where his boss's son was the groom. His boss had sent him an invitation the day before the wedding, claiming that he needed someone from the office to go, and the person who was meant to be attending had backed off. Randhir didn't even look at the invitation until the wedding day, and when he saw who the bride was, his heart skipped a beat.

Dropping everything he was doing, he bolted towards the venue.

He entered the marriage hall, but through the window. He was testing his luck when he climbed into a window at random, but he figured that it was probably much easier than openly looking for the bride.

Randhir didn't know much about the groom, but he had already decided that if he wasn't a good fit for Sanyukta, he would do whatever was in his power to stop her from taking the wedding vows... even if it meant he lost his job.

Upon entering the room (and destiny seemed to favour him this time) through the balcony, his eyes landed on the most beautiful sight he had ever seen in his life.
Sanyukta as a bride, dressed in red, with heavy jewelry adorning her body.

She was sitting down on her vanity, her head on the desk.

"Sanyukta," he whispered, causing her head to shoot up and look in the mirror, straight into his eyes.

Randhir noticed her eyes fill with tears as soon she saw him. She got up, picked up the skirt of her lengha and ran towards him.

"I don't want to marry him," she said quickly, holding his arm tightly. It was as if they hadn't stopped talking at all. "But this is the only way I would get mom and dad's forgiveness for being an engineer and for being with Parth."

Randhir didn't have to wonder why she was confiding in him, that too, after she hadn't seen him in two whole years, even after she considered him a jerk. He knew that deep down she was also aware of his feelings for her.

"Please Randhir," she whispered, a tear falling from her big kohl-lined eyes. "Save me from this. I want to run away, but at the same time I can't hurt my family."

"They want you to marry him because he's rich and his father owns an international business?" Randhir asked her, grabbing her arms.

She nodded.

"My family is rich, my mother is the owner of a huge group of companies - international too, and bigger than his father's, will you marry me Sanyukta? Will that make your parent's forgive you?"

His question was genuine, and he could see that the longing in her eyes was genuine as well. He was ready to forgive his mother for all the pain she had caused him during his life for Sanyukta's happiness.

He watched her get emotional and break down in front of him. She threw her arms around his neck and hugged him tightly. Randhir rubbed her back gently and held her protectively against him.

"It will be okay," he said in a comforting tone. "Trust me."

"They won't ever forgive me for publicly humiliating them today though," she whispered, her breath lingering on his neck.

She pulled back slowly and looked Randhir in the eye. Placing one hand on her cheek, he used his other hand to wipe off the traces of mascara that had fallen down her face.

"Run away with me," Randhir told her quietly. "Your parent's will be upset with you for some time, but when they see that you found someone who matches their desires more, they will forgive you."

Sanyukta looked faithfully up at him before hugging him again. It was amazing how they had come to understand each other better with time - and that too, without saying a word to one another.

"Let's go," she muttered against his chest, her approval hitting his heart in the most fulfilling way.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Woohooa!!!
Now This is what I had always wanteddd from Sandhir...i.e. they running away just before her geting married..😳...n u penned it soo beautifully👏
loved it😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
I think this drabble was the best of All!!
It was fabulous
Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
omg!!!! Sanyu agreed to that ...unbelievable!!!! yeh toh chottu tha... after 1&1/2 days u updated this..haq bantha hai hum readrs ke ek lumba update njoy karne ka...hei na??
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice.. Loved it.. Thanks for pm..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Loving this roller coaster ride...but plz update soon else will hack into your computer and read the remaining parts.. dont torture us anymore...plz plz plzz
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ilovepyaar


*JUMPS IN EXCITEMENT!!!!!*
Thirteen: You Found Me

It was a small world. Randhir had been invited last minute to attend the wedding where his boss's son was the groom. His boss had sent him an invitation the day before the wedding, claiming that he needed someone from the office to go, and the person who was meant to be attending had backed off. Randhir didn't even look at the invitation until the wedding day, and when he saw who the bride was, his heart skipped a beat.

Ahhh. She was going to be the bride of his boss's son... dang. Small world indeed!

Dropping everything he was doing, he bolted towards the venue.
AHHH! BECAUSE HE LOVES HERRR~ *says in a baby voice and giggles*

He entered the marriage hall, but through the window. He was testing his luck when he climbed into a window at random, but he figured that it was probably much easier than openly looking for the bride.

Hahahahah! Climbed into a window! Yup... that's Randhir indeed.

Randhir didn't know much about the groom, but he had already decided that if he wasn't a good fit for Sanyukta, he would do whatever was in his power to stop her from taking the wedding vows... even if it meant he lost his job.

AWH! Oh my gosh. 'Even if it meant he lost his job.' Do you know how much that makes me feel like a hopeless romantic... I don't think you understand... 😆😃

Upon entering the room (and destiny seemed to favour him this time) through the balcony, his eyes landed on the most beautiful sight he had ever seen in his life. Awh... can I just fangirl. I am such a hopeless romantic. I so want a guy that would say that it was the most beautiful sight... but yaar I am not very pretty. hahaha! It's all good.
Sanyukta as a bride, dressed in red, with heavy jewelry adorning her body.

She was sitting down on her vanity, her head on the desk.

"Sanyukta," he whispered, causing her head to shoot up and look in the mirror, straight into his eyes.

Randhir noticed her eyes fill with tears as soon she saw him. She got up, picked up the skirt of her lengha and ran towards him. OH MY GOSH! RUN SANYUKTA RUN! (what up forest gump reference. what up superwomen's what-up-reference. Hahaha!)

"I don't want to marry him," she said quickly, holding his arm tightly. It was as if they hadn't stopped talking at all. "But this is the only way I would get mom and dad's forgiveness for being an engineer and for being with Parth."
awwwh. it was if they hadn't stop talking at all... that's so so cuteee!
Randhir didn't have to wonder why she was confiding in him, that too, after she hadn't seen him in two whole years, even after she considered him a jerk. He knew that deep down she was also aware of his feelings for her.

"Please Randhir," she whispered, a tear falling from her big kohl-lined eyes. "Save me from this. I want to run away, but at the same time I can't hurt my family."

"They want you to marry him because he's rich and his father owns an international business?" Randhir asked her, grabbing her arms.

She nodded.

"My family is rich, my mother is the owner of a huge group of companies - international too, and bigger than his father's, will you marry me Sanyukta? Will that make your parent's forgive you?"

His question was genuine, and he could see that the longing in her eyes was genuine as well. He was ready to forgive his mother for all the pain she had caused him during his life for Sanyukta's happiness.
That right there... is pure love. I just love the way that they know each other so well ... and the fact that Randhir is willing to do anything and everything for her.
He watched her get emotional and break down in front of him. She threw her arms around his neck and hugged him tightly. Randhir rubbed her back gently and held her protectively against him.
GAH! THIS IS TOOO BEAUTIFUL... I am officially in love with your drabble. I think I can make it India Forum Official. Hahah. I loved it before. but I think I have exceeded the amount that I can say that I love it without being a creep. But I don't mind being officially a creep... because i seriously love this too much!

"It will be okay," he said in a comforting tone. "Trust me."

"They won't ever forgive me for publicly humiliating them today though," she whispered, her breath lingering on his neck.

She pulled back slowly and looked Randhir in the eye. Placing one hand on her cheek, he used his other hand to wipe off the traces of mascara that had fallen down her face.
THIS IS PARADISE.
"Run away with me," Randhir told her quietly. "Your parent's will be upset with you for some time, but when they see that you found someone who matches their desires more, they will forgive you."
RUN AWAY? Woah... I thought he'd be Shahrukh in DDLJ... haha! Just kidding... I don't mind them running away. It's another fantasy of mine! ;) 😉
Sanyukta looked faithfully up at him before hugging him again. It was amazing how they had come to understand each other better with time - and that too, without saying a word to one another.
That's the pure essence of love. I so wish that I get a life partner that understands me without me having to say a word.
"Let's go," she muttered against his chest, her approval hitting his heart in the most fulfilling way.
I LOVE IT! AWWWH!


You've made them reunite...in the most beautiful way. And I think this was the best way that they could run away! WOOO! LOVE IT! POST 14!!!! NOW NOW NOW!

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