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Posted: 11 years ago
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prologue
hmmm why did it bring only sadness the changing seasons
and who is it
arnav khushi or someone else
let see shall we



1
so khushi and anj meet i see
and she has anj house keys interesting
no arnav so far
so they are going for wedding to delhi
and as are the raizadas going to delhi
gosh khushi sure gave them right heart attack
saying she has announcement to make
she is crazy i tell ya
so off to delhi
glad you are back with it again

2
of course khushi is so naughty
thats why they had to tell payal to take care of khushi right
so its nk wedding is it
but they are getting payal to see a boy too
khushi is gonna just ruin things aint she
of course she would zip it dear
awww nk and khushi are best friend for sure
isnt that just cute
so thats how nk khushi became besties
wow they fight so much dont they
they all love payal and khushi right
aki is nk brother huh
but how do raizadas fit in all this man
nk dont over do it mate
ek toh she is helping you and you are giving her attitude
its payash they are thinking of
awww so cute she is in dream land already
ahhh payal is right
he is getting married so she will have to stop fighting with him like this

3
am glad that la said what she wanted to khushi
more like khushi said what she wanted to
isnt that just cute
glad they became friends for sure
ahhh so la and nk cleared the air
well they had to
dont worry he will kiss ya soon
hmmm this shyam is he married to anj
but why is he looking at khushi
khushi knows her bestie doesnt she
thats how raizads come into the picture
couldnt remember how
aki will be here finally or not
la used to like arnav i guess
but he didnt like her that way phew
she sure can threaten nk cant she
and now she has la to help her
wow she is hell bent on waiting for aki
well so hero is here
who are you to judge about khushi
haila yeh kabhi toh kuch acha socha karein
she is his bestie like la is yours
whats his problem


4
haila arhi meet
but not under best circumstances
and dude you were pretty rude to her too
jhansi ki rani
good one khushi
she is funny aint she
ahhh well la trusts nk and khushi so thats okay
the hell with rest
she knew how to help la
arnav zip it will you
kya yaar he ddnt even help khushi
LG for sure
she ordered him
well nothing new in that
get used to it will you
she knows what she is doing
off with you guys


5
how could he man
say all those to her
and he had no guilt for what he said
he left marks on her
and hurt her
good thing she kept quite
or what would he say to his best friend and her fiance to be
arnav this anger one day will bring you nothing but destructio
but when does he listen
as it is she isnt well
and he does this
has no manners this man
makes me so mad
so payash met and got lost in one another
rest things are going just fine right
am glad for that
how will she cover what he did to her face
how could he yaar
so she managed to keep it hidden
thank god for that
or there would have been hell to pay
am sure nk wouldnt be happy nor would la
she is an orphan
seems his words got to her more she let on
of course
what was in her past
they wanted to get her married at 18
are they crazy
who marries so early in this day and age
seems she was an orphan so they could do this
some people never make sense
arnav you are a right brute for sure
damn he hurt her and no sorry it seems
ahhh khushi is alone it seems
or is she
yes payash met ad things happened
but you werent here so you didnt know
what happened in her engagement
ten years older seriously man


6
oh my he is right psycho well was
why didnt she tell anyone
how did they get rid of this psycho man
he is one obsessed dude man not good
wow that still affects her
what happened 5 years ago
what did he do
thank god she was saved
she has hurt herself
it isnt normal dear
tell someone please sweetie
never take abuse from anyone
how could they force her to marry this guy
whats wrong with them
goes to show blood is blood man
tell me he didnt
why didnt you tell nk dear
he tried to force her
hope he didnt succeed
saale kameeney
this is the man they were getting her married to
are they freaking insane
she does get saved right
glad i read it again then

Edited by chavvi16 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: chavvi16

prologue
hmmm why did it bring only sadness the changing seasons
and who is it
arnav khushi or someone else
let see shall we



1
so khushi and anj meet i see
and she has anj house keys interesting
no arnav so far
so they are going for wedding to delhi
and as are the raizadas going to delhi
gosh khushi sure gave them right heart attack
saying she has announcement to make
she is crazy i tell ya
so off to delhi
glad you are back with it again

2
of course khushi is so naughty
thats why they had to tell payal to take care of khushi right
so its nk wedding is it
but they are getting payal to see a boy too
khushi is gonna just ruin things aint she
of course she would zip it dear
awww nk and khushi are best friend for sure
isnt that just cute
so thats how nk khushi became besties
wow they fight so much dont they
they all love payal and khushi right
aki is nk brother huh
but how do raizadas fit in all this man
nk dont over do it mate
ek toh she is helping you and you are giving her attitude
its payash they are thinking of
awww so cute she is in dream land already
ahhh payal is right
he is getting married so she will have to stop fighting with him like this

3
am glad that la said what she wanted to khushi
more like khushi said what she wanted to
isnt that just cute
glad they became friends for sure
ahhh so la and nk cleared the air
well they had to
dont worry he will kiss ya soon
hmmm this shyam is he married to anj
but why is he looking at khushi
khushi knows her bestie doesnt she
thats how raizads come into the picture
couldnt remember how
aki will be here finally or not
la used to like arnav i guess
but he didnt like her that way phew
she sure can threaten nk cant she
and now she has la to help her
wow she is hell bent on waiting for aki
well so hero is here
who are you to judge about khushi
haila yeh kabhi toh kuch acha socha karein
she is his bestie like la is yours
whats his problem


4
haila arhi meet
but not under best circumstances
and dude you were pretty rude to her too
jhansi ki rani
good one khushi
she is funny aint she
ahhh well la trusts nk and khushi so thats okay
the hell with rest
she knew how to help la
arnav zip it will you
kya yaar he ddnt even help khushi
LG for sure
she ordered him
well nothing new in that
get used to it will you
she knows what she is doing
off with you guys


5
how could he man
say all those to her
and he had no guilt for what he said
he left marks on her
and hurt her
good thing she kept quite
or what would he say to his best friend and her fiance to be
arnav this anger one day will bring you nothing but destructio
but when does he listen
as it is she isnt well
and he does this
has no manners this man
makes me so mad
so payash met and got lost in one another
rest things are going just fine right
am glad for that
how will she cover what he did to her face
how could he yaar
so she managed to keep it hidden
thank god for that
or there would have been hell to pay
am sure nk wouldnt be happy nor would la
she is an orphan
seems his words got to her more she let on
of course
what was in her past
they wanted to get her married at 18
are they crazy
who marries so early in this day and age
seems she was an orphan so they could do this
some people never make sense
arnav you are a right brute for sure
damn he hurt her and no sorry it seems
ahhh khushi is alone it seems
or is she
yes payash met ad things happened
but you werent here so you didnt know
what happened in her engagement
ten years older seriously man


6
oh my he is right psycho well was
why didnt she tell anyone
how did they get rid of this psycho man
he is one obsessed dude man not good
wow that still affects her
what happened 5 years ago
what did he do
thank god she was saved
she has hurt herself
it isnt normal dear
tell someone please sweetie
never take abuse from anyone
how could they force her to marry this guy
whats wrong with them
goes to show blood is blood man
tell me he didnt
why didnt you tell nk dear
he tried to force her
hope he didnt succeed
saale kameeney
this is the man they were getting her married to
are they freaking insane
she does get saved right
glad i read it again then


Hi Chavvi !

First and foremost, thank you so much for reading. Secondly, thank you for such a detailed comment. It really makes me want to give you the best I can in the coming updates.

Prologue - It is true that I did not make it clear whom is saying what I wrote. However, if you read the last two parts carefully, I did leave a hint ;) As for why the person feels that there is only sadness with changing seasons, that is..about perspective, no?

1- Khushi Kumari Gupta, is Khushi Kumari Gupta ! She has to be a little dramatic, doesn't she? And yes Anjali and Khushi have met.

2- NK & Khushi's friendship is really something different. The depth of their friendship will be shown over time. Raizada's not only fit but they'll make the story move ahead. After all Arnav is a Raizada, right 😉

3- I wanted Lavanya and Khushi to start off at a right foot only because of how the story progresses.


4- How could Arnav and Khushi not have nok jhok? It's impossible. Khushi is quite witty actually !

5- Unfortunately, as we all know, ASR wasn't the sweetheart he progressed to be. His bad behavior 😭is an essential part of Khushi and his equation eventually😉 Payal and Akash always had and even in my story will have a sweet love story. Though in this day and age, getting married that young doesn't usually happen we have to keep in mind that some people do have a set frame of mind in which a girl should be married off as soon as they can. Unfortunately being an orphan makes it harder, it is sad but for some it's their truth.

6- I know chapter 6 was kind of gruesome and sad. But it is necessary for it to be understood how this makes Khushi who she is today. It also gives light to NK and Khushi's relationship. As for how or when Khushi gets saved, I'll continue in part b of 6.

Thanks again Chavvi for taking your time out to read and give comments on each and every part!

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Posted: 11 years ago
#43
Oh no so much horrible past khushi has..
still she live so chirpy. ..hiding all her pain

Arnav blamed her so much..

Theewayevery oone loved her is so nice. ..

Very nice update
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
Very nice. The story is so griping that u do not want to end. I just want it keep continuing so that I can read it till the end in one go that how interesting the story is. Pls keep writing as I am really enjoying it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome updates Loved them Cant wait to read more Thanks for the pm
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Welcome back.
Thanks for pm
liked it very much
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I'll be posting part be of update chapter 6 tomorrow ! Sorry for the delay. Have been busy with some family things :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Zindagi Ke Mausam - Part Six (b)

Flashback

Khushi heard screaming, and try to keep awake again.

NK: YOU bas***d ! I WILL MAKE YOU PAY. I'LL BREAK YOUR f**kING FACE. HOW f**kING DARE YOU. YOU WILL WISH YOU NEVER WERE f**kING BORN YOU PIECE OF SHIT !

Another loud thud and she was out again.

The next time she came back to semi-consciousness, she remembered was the sound of NK's voice.

NK: KHUSHI ! GET UP ! I SAID GET UP KHUSHI. DON'T DO THIS TO ME, OPEN YOUR EYES. DON'T FALL ASLEEP!

Khushi's eyelashes fluttered, she really was trying but she was just so..so tired.

NK: Yes, just please, just we're almost there.

Khushi tried to focus on the other sounds she was hearing. She heard..a heartbeat. It was hers. There were other people around her. She realized she was in an ambulance.

Khushi tried to harbor all the will power she had and whispered a Thank you.

Khushi saw NK's eyes. She tried to read them but before she could she felt something fall on her face, it was a tear. She managed a small smile and she faded back in to darkness.

1 week later

Garima and Shashi were sitting by Khushi anticipating NK and Payal's return from the doctors cabin.

Doctor: NK, I understand you're worried but I assure you we are trying our best.

NK: I don't want to hear that you're f**king trying, I want to hear that she's going to be fine Doctor !

Payal: NK, please. Please calm down.

NK: I'm..sorry Doctor.

Doctor: It's okay young man, I know this is hard for you. You have to comprehend that the worst part is over, Khushi isn't critical anymore. From now, the journey to recovery might be slow but you have to make sure it is steady.

NK: Doctor she hasn't even opened her eyes since that...I haven't heard her voice. Nothing.

Doctor: Look NK, when she came here, we were afraid she'd slip in to coma. There was so much blood loss, the gash to her head was deep..there were fragments of glass stuck in her scalp. Her shoulder was dislocated, she had even broken a rib. You can thank your God that she didn't slip in to a coma but we did sedate her ourselves. We needed at least a week for her body to garner up some strength. More so then the physical wounds we were worried about the trauma. That still is a issue NK. When she weans off the sedation, we have no idea what kind of Khushi we'll be seeing. I need you to be prepared. Her physical wounds will heal with time, they always do. As for her mental state, I cannot guarantee anything. You'll have to excuse me now NK, Payal. I have to go check on another patient.

Payal's focus wavered. The tears blurred everything. Everything the doctor said kept echoing in her head.

Payal: What kind of Khushi we'll be seeing? There is only one way Khushi is. She's what her name is, khushi, she's... What else kind could there be? NK, what else can there be?

NK fell in to the chair and covered his face with his hands.

NK: I don't...I don't know Di.

Payal: NK, we have to go tell Ama and Bauji.

NK and Payal headed out of the doctors office and made their way to Shashi and Garima.

As NK narrated everything the Doctor said, Shashi and Garima felt the world slip from under their feet. They could not go back to the Khushi from many years ago. From when her parents had passed. After that incident, they both had promised they'd take her in and love her like Payal. But they had forgotten their promise when they rushed for her wedding. They had let the promise slip from their heads.

As they four sat outside of Khushi's room, they all wondered what awaited them.

The next day

Doctor: NK, where are her parents and sister?

NK: Di and Aunty went to the mandir and Uncle said he couldn't..stay.

Doctor: Okay. Look, I want you to be prepared before you go inside. She should be waking up within the next half hour.Wait till she's awake and accordingly start the conversation. The nurse will be around, so just buzz if you need her and if you need me ask her to page me.

NK: Thank you so much Doctor. So so much.

Doctor: This is my job young man.

NK walked in to the room and sat next to Khushi. He observed at what lay before him. A bandaged, colorless human. He just hoped with all that he could that Khushi could overcome this. He was brought out of his thoughts when he heard the whimpers.

The whimpers that came from Khushi, the whimpers that gradually became louder. Before he knew it, Khushi's face contorted in to an anguished expression and her arms began thrashing against the bed.

Khushi: NAHINNN, NAHINNN PLEASE HUMEIN CHOHR DHO, PLEASE ! PPLEASE...

NK: f**k, f**k. KHUSHI, NURSE ! Khushi, shhh...Khushi, it's me..it's.. me. Khushi, Khushi what's happening to you?! NURSE ! DOCTOR ! SOMEONE HELP PLEASE !!!

Khushi's eyes rolled back and her body started convulsing. She was having a seizure.

The Doctor and nurse rushed in and asked NK to leave the room.

When he was allowed to come in, Khushi lay there pale and blank.

NK put his hand against Khushi's face and with the other stroked her hair. Khushi's eyes fluttered. Her vision was hazy, she blinked a couple of times to clear up. Her eyes reflected pain and then quickly they went blank. There was nothing in her dark honey-speckled hazel eyes. No emotions.

NK: Khushi? Khushi? Khushi, talk to me. Khushi, please.

Khushi heard NK, she felt his hand against her face but she felt nothing.

NK couldn't take it. He got up and left the room.

Doctor: NK, please understand that this seizure may be the first of many. You need to learn how to help her. If this isn't just a one time occurrence we'll explain to you what you can expect. We'll prescribe her medication if during the next two week she has them again. We will be running different tests to see if anything at all has been impaired with her health. After that, she's ready to go home. That's when I give you the responsibility to make Khushi better. It perhaps isn't my place to say this, but that bas***d will suffer. Just make sure Khushi doesn't anymore, NK.

NK: Dr. Gor, I really do appreciate this so much. I can and will do this.

After 3 weeks of being in the hospital, Khushi was discharged.

While Khushi had been in the hospital, she would only stare blankly at the walls. She would eat only when being fed. The times they did hear her were when she'd wake up in the middle of the night screaming. Unfortunately, the seizure was not a random occurrence. Khushi was prescribed medication for the seizures. They tended to happen after Khushi's night terrors. Any mental stress/breakdown and she'd start convulsing.

The next couple of months were a slow process of Khushi's recovery. NK decided to take an internship at a business for the next 6 months. His parents were not as accepting but they agreed when he wouldn't budge. He could not tell them what had happened with Khushi. He had promised and made sure that what had happened would not leave the mouths of the four people that resided in the home.

NK and Payal had adapted a routine with Khushi. NK or Payal, one or the other was always by her side. NK tended to be there more often with Payal taking her courses at university. Their nightly routines though, were promised. They would both sit with Khushi and talk for hours at end about their days and their childhood memories.

Then, one night NK and Payal had gone outside to get some chaat and kulfi for Khushi. They weren't in Khushi's room at their usual time. Garima was in the kitchen washing dishes and Shashi was drinking his evening tea.

Khushi walked out.

Khushi: Di aur NK kahaan hai?

Where's Di?

Garima dropped the dish she was holding in to the sink and turned. Shashi looked up at Khushi in relief. NK and Payal had stepped in when they heard Khushi's voice. They both put the bags down and ran towards Khushi. They both hugged her and cried, they cried and cried when they heard an unfamiliar cry. Khushi's cry. Khushi was finally crying. She finally reacted. She had made the first step to recovery.

The next month was spent ensuring Khushi got out of the darkness that had engulfed her so deeply. Her night terrors lessened, as did her seizures. Every smile, every sound of laughter was a milestone for them. It finally came time to bid adieu to NK however he promised he'd come a weekend a month for her. And he did. He did for the remainder of the year.

Though his trips reduced, Khushi and NK's bond increased two folds in strength.

Present Day


Khushi's eyes remained closed. She tried to regulate her breathing but she couldn't help but remember. She couldn't help remember the feeling she tried to wash away for the days after. The feeling of his disgusting self on her body.

Khushi couldn't hold it in anymore.

Khushi began to shake as she sobbed. It was because of that rakshaas, the way he..the way he grabbed her. The way he left marks on her. The insinuation behind his words.

With Khushi's sobs and shaking, her dupatta fell off, as well as the makeup she had used to cover up Arnav's handywork on her cheek.

As Khushi tried to regain her composure she felt a man's hand on her shoulder. Her memories vivid in her head, released a scream when Arnav's hand came clasping on to her mouth.

Arnav: Chup, shhh !


Khushi's eyes widened and she ripped his hand off her mouth.

Khushi: Haath...HAATH NAHIN LAGAAYEIN ! DON'T TOUCH ME !

HAND...DON'T PUT YOUR HANDS ON ME ! DON'T TOUCH ME !

Arnav puzzled about the outburst and outraged at her tone grabbed her by the arm and faced her towards himself. That's when Khushi winced and closed her eyes.

As Arnav was about to yell at her, the moonlight shined on to her face, he noticed the fingerprints that were left on her face. Had..had he done that?

Arnav: Did..I..?

Khushi opened her eyes slowly as Arnav's grip had loosened. Noticing the sudden confusion on his face , she took at as an opportunity to leave. He reached to hold her by her shoulder but instead accidentally caught his watch on to the pearls that aligned the upper back of her blouse. They all came shattering down on to the floor. Khushi's face though not turned towards Arnav was horrified. She pulled the ribbon that kept her hair in the braid and all her hair came loose flowing on to Arnav's face suddenly.

As soon as Arnav felt the dark tresses on his face, Khushi had gone. She had ran out the terrace door.

Arnav stood there with the essence of her dark long hair that had teased him just half a moment ago. He looked towards the doorway trying to make sense of all that had happened.

Khushi ran in to her room and took her medication for anxiety. She thanked heavens that her Di had scolded her for skipping the medication for her seizures since they'd been here. She had made sure Khushi took it in the morning over the phone. If she hadn't..what..

Khushi looked up at the clock. Had it really been two hours since she was up there? The party must've died down by now, she peaked over the ledge and saw that there was hardly anyone left.

Khushi walked in to the shower and let it pour over her. She tried to wash away the feeling. The feeling of despair.

She had changed in to a simple green colored shalwar kameez and braided her hair to the side. She changed the dressing of her ankle as well. As she was about to doze off, there was a knock on her door.




Edited by skay9112 - 11 years ago
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Thanks for the emotional update😊

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