Sandhir-Dangerous Love (Dark) ff part2 on pg11

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Anshika

@MainPareshaan

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Posted: 11 years ago

INDEX UPDATED-

PART 1- PAGE 8

PART 2-PAGE 11

PART 3- ?? Drop in your comments for update 2 then part 3 😆

Edited by MyLiFeMyRuLeS.. - 11 years ago

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Sheron♡

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Posted: 11 years ago

Ress 🤣 again first 🤣 🤣

Prologue de wrna meri unressing bhul jaa 😆
Aur issbar mujhe no pm ab dekh maine kaha tha na ress krke chhod dungi 😳

Aur prologue ke bina suggestion maang rhi hai
Hume kya antayami samjha hai
Phle prologue baad mein kuch bhi
Aur mera abhi bhi res hi hai

Ress 😆

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Unressed(finally ):

Main yahain likhun kya prologue ke liye toh dusra ress kr rakha hai yhain balwass karun kya nhi mogambo bura mann jayegi toh fir hain lets give mogambo some suggestions for her "dark" ff name mere dimag mein bohut bure ideas aate hain agr bekaar lage then...

Thats not my fault ok soo...

1.)sandhir ff "dark": love's cruel game
2.)sandhir ff "dark": love can make u do "ANYTHING"
3.)sandhir ff "dark": there is "someone" for you

Aur agr lage ki acche lagenge toh bata dungi tab tak ke liye "stalk" krte rhiye "sheron singh" ko...
Dubara ress

Few yahain dubara paste and copy kr daala

Res!!! 🤣

Edited by Sheron13rokerz - 11 years ago

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Anshika

@MainPareshaan

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Posted: 11 years ago

Intro padha??Nahi bhi padha toh koi nahi!

Accha here you go with Prologue

Prologue-

"You son of a b***h" he shouted as he saw the crime he had. He saw the crime in a fit of anger with an unsteady breath. A moment later he came back to his senses and saw it with the human eyes! He saw himself wearing once a pure white shirt which was now all blood soaked.

That guy's blood was dripping from his finger tips.

A tear escaped from his eye, this thing called love has made him a monster.

"NO NO NO NO NO NO NO" He shouted.

"Randhir!!!! Its okay! Its okay!! Kuch nahi hua hai!! Main hoon yahaan" A gentle feminine voice came.

He opened eyes only to meet hers, those chestnut brown eyes had made him do this, this crime that he had committed. He came back to reality, he was here with her, his head was resting on her laps under a tree on a calm summer day as the winds blew.

"Its okay baby!" She said as he got up and hugged her with a fear, a fear of losing her, the possessiveness he had for her

A fear that he had faced that day. A normal fun loving guy who had turned into a possessive lover and then into a monster.

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Sheron♡

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Posted: 11 years ago

Ress
Mann toh kr rha hai unress krne ka pr tujhe tang krne mein zyada maze aate hain so yeh wala bhi kal unress karungi 😆
Unress: 😆

Tera prologue mujhe samaj nhi aya mere toh sir ke upar se chala gya hai ab tujhe hi samjhana hoga uske liye update kr aur mujhe pm bhi krna mat bhul jana mogambo aur yahain tune mere bhai rd ko kya kia dekh agr zyada chhot pahunchayi na toh Mr.India ko bula lungi!!!! Ab chal maine unress kr dia hehhehe 😆

Edited by Sheron13rokerz - 11 years ago

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Anshika

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Sheron13rokerz
Ress 🤣 again first 🤣 🤣

Prologue de wrna meri unressing bhul jaa 😆
Aur issbar mujhe no pm ab dekh maine kaha tha na ress krke chhod dungi 😳

Aur prologue ke bina suggestion maang rhi hai
Hume kya antayami samjha hai
Phle prologue baad mein kuch bhi
Aur mera abhi bhi res hi hai

Ress 😆

Le behen prologue de diya hai

Waise bandar!!

Tu kya mujhe stalk karti rehti hain??

Meri har ek update pe pehla update!!

Chal ab unres kar

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soumya

@krazyinlove

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Posted: 11 years ago

res

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unres

again a different story i see

one which we never saw in sandhir in any other fiction (usually fiction show him as a business tycoon, first time a criminal kind of thing.)

i guess it's raining new ideas these days in the forum with so many genius writer's

the prologue sounds interesting

do continue dear

and continue soon

Edited by krazyinlove - 11 years ago

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Sheron♡

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: MyLiFeMyRuLeS..

Le behen prologue de diya hai
Waise bandar!!
Tu kya mujhe stalk karti rehti hain??
Meri har ek update pe pehla update!!
Chal ab unres kar

kal karungi heheheh aur btw main acchi stalker hun haina

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Anshika

@MainPareshaan

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Sheron13rokerz
kal karungi heheheh aur btw main acchi stalker hun haina

Prof. aap kabhi koi kaam bura karti hai kya? Nahi na!

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Kirti

@kirtiarora111

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Posted: 11 years ago

res.. Sorry to all the writers..

M feeling quite too lazy and tired to unres all my comments today...

I promise to unres all my comments within 1 or 2 days...😭😭

So, apologies for that...

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Unres..

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That seems quite really very interesting...

As far as the prologue is concerned, I just loved it..!!!!!!

Wow, such a spontaneous and disastrous change from a fun loving person to a possessive lover who eventually turns out to be a MONSTER..!!!!!!

And that is exactly what I'll be looking forward to..

What are those unexpected occurrences of events which unfold the dark mysteries of SanDhir??

How is it gonna affect them to that extent??

Looking forward to your ff...

Keep updating..😊

Love ya

Edited by kirtiarora111 - 11 years ago

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Sheron♡

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: Sheron13rokerz
Ress
Mann toh kr rha hai unress krne ka pr tujhe tang krne mein zyada maze aate hain so yeh wala bhi kal unress karungi 😆

Tere iss dark ff ke liye bhi maine naam soch rakhe hain kuch pr kal bataungi woh bhi abhi ke liye gud nyt!!