SanDhir FF: Of Broken Hearts (Chapter 20 (LAST) on Page 81)

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Kri

@kri1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#251

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UNRES (Below...) I had written such a good review before... but the stupid computer gave an error.. sorry. you'll be reading a (not very entertaining) review! 😳😃

Love, Krish🤗

Edited by kri1 - 11 years ago

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Kri

@kri1

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#252

😭😭😭😭 Safffiiidi! I had written my comments right as I had read them. And it was long. But the stupid computer again gave me an error and it wiped out my review... Yaar! I hate technology sometimes! GRRR!

Anyways... thinking about the chapter makes me happy again. Di, I won't be able to write ALL that I wrote but I can remember some things...

When they woke up... AWH! I was so fangirling.

And then at the office! HE WIPED HER TEARS! THAT IS WHEN I FANGIRLED THE MOST! AWH!
OH I FORGOT...
The whole time I remember writing down that the girl he is talking to is talking about falling in love with someone else! AND I WAS RIGHT! I loved it... I was just like "HA! SAFFIDI!!! I didn't fall into your trap!!!! HAHA!!!!" 😆

I was also smiling like an idiot (it was the smile I was talking about in the last chapter where my smile muscles just get stuck- set in stone and I can't stop smiling...) at the part where Sanyu was like focus... but she ended up calling him and ending it!

And the fact that she wanted to go on a date! AHAHAHA! That was so cute!

And when she wanted to go to sleep! Randhir knew better! hehehehe! He didn't fall for the trap! and the TEDDY BEAR THING!!! hahaha! that was so cuteee! I loved how she was just trying to get for them to sleep on the same bed... Saffi... you keep on bringing up that! 😉😳bad girl! HEHE!

Oh another thing... there was a part where she was asking herself questions... that's when I was like "Saffidi... I know what you did there. You effectively used the rhetorical questions that entice readers... very good." I was just trying to say... after reading so much of your writing... I am getting better at analyzing pieces! 😆

Oh! Another thing I remember typing down was the fact that when it was just two paragraphs into the chapter... I had said, "yaar, I don't have the guts to go and touch a guy when they sleep..." I said that I'll take a sneak peek.. but never go close to him... and then like the fourth or five paragraph you were making sanyu think that what she did wasn't normal as no one does that! That's when I was like getting all excited and said that Great Minds Think Alike! Hahaha!

Cute Update! As you know... I loved it as always! Can't wait for the next part...👏

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Mahak

@Smileyglee

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Posted: 11 years ago

#253

Again a mind blowing update

Seriously sanyu won't give up

Shez a fighter

Loved every part of it

Waiting fr d next update

Nd thanks fr the pm😳😃

Plz do pm me agn👏

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ammi22

@ammi22

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Posted: 11 years ago

#254

Amazing
So Sanyuktas mission has started
waiting for the next update.

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AlbusDumbeldore

@AlbusDumbeldore

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#255

poor sanyukta how hard she is trying to mend her relaionship with randhir and all her efforts are gone in vain really feel bad for randhir

saffi please give positive update me cryimg

who is that spineless SANA

hoping that sanyukta will come with a positive plan

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Neha Kashyap

@-ParamHolic-

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#256

Seriously RD me itna self control kaise?

I know he is dying to be with her..still itna Bhav kha rha hai 😆

Bechari sanyu..she is trying soo hard..

Sanyu is so desperate..she was eaves dropping 😆..

RD wiped her tears..Hayeee Man lo Randhir jee..abhi bhi tum apni sanyu se hi pyaar karte ho

Sanyu actually said that? she cannot sleep alone..ohoo sanyu..Remember u are dealing with Randhir singh shekhawat..He knows everything abt it..

As usual lovely update di..🤗

Update soon

Loads of love

Neha

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Sonali Shivkumar

@ChasingLiberty

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#257

Originally posted by: ilovepyaar

LOL sorry for updating so fast. I should slow down na? 😆 I get too into it when I write that I just want to keep writing. 😛 Thanks! 😊

No no don't slow down.. continue with your super sonic speed..i love reading multiple chapters together..

I am gonna read part 12 now.. will get back

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Sonali Shivkumar

@ChasingLiberty

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#258

Ohh my godd !!!!! This chapter was one of the best..

Randhir wiping her tears.. and then pretending not to care..

Sanyu requesting innocently to sleep next to him..

Awww !!!

Loved it !!! I loved sanyu in this part the most..

She is adorable !!!!

Please please please update asap.. pleaseee

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DreamAchiever9

@DreamAchiever9

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#259

nyc update. Thanx for the PM

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Saffi Sanam

@ilovepyaar

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#260

Originally posted by: Piya1702
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Wooohooo...Sanyuu evesdropping.,,,,,wow that was soo soo cute...😳
n i loved how Randhir wiped her tears n told her abt the gal without even Sanyu asking abt it...he knew her so well,knew whats going on in her mind...

Randhir back to the old grumpy mode...well hats actually nice..he should be stone-hearted at times...

I love the excuse she made regarding why she wanna share bed with him😆it was cutely sillly😉
n m very very veryyy eager to read the next chapter now,I can sense a bit of what is about to come in it😃

Yeah he does know her so well. 😆 That's the point I wanted to get across in this chapter - that even though Randhir claims that she's a stranger to him and means nothing to him, the inner care, the understanding is still very much there. I'm glad you noticed it! Thank you so much!