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shubhi7

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Posted: 11 years ago

#821

It was such a wonderful update...

The protectiveness Arnav has for Khushi is just wow

He is suffering so much only for her... This is love which cant be defined

Loved it

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check1511

@check1511

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Posted: 11 years ago

#822

Just loved the update. You writing is marvelous!!!!

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shipra.aqua

@shipra.aqua

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Posted: 11 years ago

#823

Oh god, now who is this new lady...

Is she Arnav's mother by any chance...

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thiyamappy

@thiyamappy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#824

Thanks for the pm n superb update as usual.
Really loved the moments they shared at the hospital and their cute convo.
Arnav being very protective and yet still haunting which made him push the doc when she tried to examine her.
omg Khushi instinct of not getting overjoyed when the baby kicks her hard , kind of signal that the kid was not made in loving way.
so many hurdles yet and major hurdles yet to come even though Adi is gone

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Apoorvarani

@Apoorvarani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#825

Wonderful Update Dear!!! Loved it...

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Parvathi Devi

@honey-sweety

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Posted: 11 years ago

#826

That was excellent update...

Arnav is ready to take or accept anything that is related to Kushi. he is more than happy to bear any pain to feel Kushi's happiness...

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nishu_shorna

@nishu_shorna

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Posted: 11 years ago

#827

Arnav will be a great father... we can already see that... when he came with her today, may be it was only for his Posy... but when he left the hospital, he became the DAD in true sense...

Di, u know naa u r brilliant... loved the way u showed him finally accepting the baby IN TRUE SENSE... "making its tiny weeny heart part of his"... cant tell you how much i loved this line... u know how to do magic with words...

Arnav is actually so adorable, u know... "Bloody blood suckers"... Like really... and his Check-list... Awwee... so cute... i literally felt like pinching his cheeks... loved their convo while waiting... i so love it when he flirts with her... calls her Posy... when she answers back cutely... when they smile...

its only natural that Arnav wont be able to forget or forgive himself EVER... what his subconscious does today is a prove to this... poor Arnav... loved how you showed Khushi managing him... that again gives me faith, no matter what life's stored for them, each will be other's support system throughout it...

what came as a shock today is her reaction... subconsciously her system is repelling the baby... if it were ANY OTHER women, i would doubt, if she would ever be able to love the kid... but she is KHUSHI... and she is wise & mature enough to NOT not love it if/when she knows the truth...

i loved it that she talked to him about her distress... its amazing to see the level of comfort these two share... the way they share their each and every thoughts... thats another thing i love most about them...

i am so glad the Monkey Gang came to surprise them... and their bunters... Aman is a fun person... and an-easy-to-live-with type... no matter how many times i have said this Di, but i really am so glad that Arnav has him as his friend...

So he tracked his the-woman-who-left-him... see, i am avoiding the word 'mother'... may be its time he gets a proper closure to phase of his life... but i dont want him to be sympathetic or whatever to that woman... the way Khushi never took the-woman-who-didnt-protect-her back in her life...

waiting for the next part already... thanks for the PM... and sorry for being 'regularly' late...

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Nimie207

@Nimie207

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Posted: 11 years ago

#828

It was super...but therre is always an uneasy feeling in me wenevr an update of TVK goes smooth..Khushi is a brilliant woman..but hope sh wont find oit anthng abt dt nite...poor Arnav...kaise mitaoge uska dard hum?? His attitude towards that 'thing' i luvd it..kuch ba dhamaka is in store na Deepudi??

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premdewaani

@premdewaani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#829

Another superbly written update my dear... The hospital scene was really emotional as well as cute.. Really loved the way Arnav handled everything... Everything was smooth but somehow I have a feeling that something big is going to happen.. No that new lady? Eagerly waiting to read the next part..I hope khushi never finds out about the adi'a deed.. Really scarey thought.. Overall a beautiful chapter.. Plz update soon:-))

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Abhinaya Sri

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Posted: 11 years ago

#830

Super and Emotional update Deeps.. loads of Feel to read...😊

Nice to See Arnav positively involved and supportive accompanying kushi to Hosp and his first interaction with baby knowing the baby is not his was worth to read in todays update..,

The first part of update omiting few things... every new mom and dad goes through this.. And you have breathed the feel beautifully how parents react ...very much real...And Arnavs reactions for several tests , waiting, eagerness, giving kushi the required comfort ahaa.. super expressionss..Feeling those first, tiny sensations inside is such an exciting landmark in pregnancy ... u made me recall all our moments wen we were pregnant.. Thankyou😆😆

The way Arnav reacted when doctor was examining psychological scars, After such a devastating assault oh God i got my heart beat faster... But can understand what Arnav must be goin on... later kushis intervene and finally completed the Test.. But the emotional Happy feelings Arnav expressed were Genuine and felt good reading them.. Nicely Written Deepu..

I cdnt understand.. why didnt Kushi feel the Connect to baby after US, as she doesnt knew baby is Adi .. Any new Mom will be on cloud 9.. Does this really happens or its only writers imagination??

Dint Arnav fear before visiting the doctor that the doctor or nurse may Judge it as Rape..?? or after seeing now will he develop any fear of doctor expressing her views??

He's trying his best not to leave any traces for Kushi to find out Truth but the way he himself is reacting.. at certain instances i feel Kushi may find clue..(Stay in Control Arnav😃)

Very Well written.. Superb update Deepthi.. waiting for Dhamaka😉

Stay Blessed!