Submerged! - ArShi FF:New note P.No 132

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sisgeo

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Posted: 11 years ago

#221

brilliant plot and beautifully penned

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segad

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Posted: 11 years ago

#222

Nice twist, dhruv becomes arnav in the story.

looking forward to the continuation

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mayurisb80

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Posted: 11 years ago

#223

that was one unexpected twist...and so perfect...can hardly wait for the next update...

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ria

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Posted: 11 years ago

#224

i cant beleive my guess was right.
he was arnav.
well its nice story waiting for more.

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@addicted25

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Posted: 11 years ago

#225

Ahh its Arnav and not Dhruv! For a minute there I thought thst Arnav would be fighting his brother for Khushi attention. Nice.. interesting plot.
Ooh yes romance on the run... yes please Lol
Thanks for the pm!

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1chilly

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Posted: 11 years ago

#226

This is what I call a twidt in the tale.

I was wondering why Khushi is attracted to Dhruv.

But why has Dadiji been told Arnav is Dhruv?

Hope Khushi is able to call Arnav's family and get him rescued soon.

But, in the meanwhile I am waiting for the romance to begin.

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ranogill

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Posted: 11 years ago

#227

you know that we mad mad arshian...so please do you think we will mind more chapters...bring it on

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Mysticaldivine

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Posted: 11 years ago

#228

LOL , so I was right, he is our hero...hehe

you had a small hint there to catch it from your story...I am a reader, may be not a good commentator ..

Excellent twist and Loved the way you are bringing this pom pom in his life...He must want to remain in that bed seeing this gota girl whose fragrance is actually spreading peace in his nerves and he is coming to life after a long time...

Khushi is Khushi...a giver...

So Daadi and Shyamji are together ...in this plan ...of abduction????

Now they will work together to run away from their clutches...Thumbs up