Submerged! - ArShi FF:New note P.No 132 - Page 21

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: MehreenB

Arnav and smitten , good to see that.Liked Arnav and his thinking about Khushi's pom pom and that shows how much she is on his nerve...


Mehreen, thank you! 😊

So happy to see your comment!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ranogill

wow...what a twist...it is asr all the time instead of dhruv...loved it ...lets see his next plan..


ASR all the way! 😊
Thank you, ranogill!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: headtotoe

Wow !!! what a pleasant twist this was ...

The protagonists have met... Now teh story will roll ...
Continue soon...


Happy you liked the twist, headtotoe! 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: abivicky86

vow i am just loving this story what a twist never expected this as always shyam has to be the villian


Thank you!
Shyam is my favorite villain 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Thanks 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: SilentShadow

Oh so it was Arnav all the way.

That came as a surprise.

So now khushi and her acidity working big time.

I hope they find a way out to escape soon.


SilentShadow - love your user name! 😊

I am glad everyone is liking the twist! Yes, escape will happen soon ...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: nishu_shorna

Oh ho... So its Arnav... Now that's a pleasant surprise... Now that u see Arnav's POV almost everything is clear... I'm loving it... Also ArShi are gonna work together in this... I'm all excited to see what's next... Thanks for the pm...


nishu_shorna - thank you! 😊

Yes, the next couple of parts will be all about ArShi - planning the escape, and much more!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: chavvi16

First thought it was aki

Then you convinced us it was dhruv
And now we know it's our hero only
Well that's some twist
So glad I didn't see that coming
Well this explains how arnav got to her so quick
As he was drugged and kidnapped not dhruv
Even better
So dhruv is safe that's a relief
Dadi hasn't seen them so she didn't know it was arnav who is here
But Shyam knows
And he needs to keep him here
Well he is playing with fire
No he is man
Hmm arnav what was that with khushi
Or khushi already dhak dhak
Sure keep telling yourself its due to not eating
And arnav really you think its because she is the only one to talk to you are getting attached
Nope its more than that
Frog prince kissing khushi girl your thoughts sure are going haywire
So glad I read this story now
Khushi gets into such trouble don't she
Of course she does
So now she will help him to escape
Shyam you won't know what hit you when he legs it
That creep better not try it with khushi
Or he is gonna get it
After all khushi knows the truth now
Well she didn't see this coming
But hope she can help him
He can only escape with her help
Lady Hitler creep of man and handsome prince
Wow khushi what a combo
This just got more thrilling


chavvi16 ❤️, can't tell you how happy your comments make me feel!

They are not just comments, they are lyrically written feedbacks that help me as a writer to know the pulse of my readers!

Thank you! More excitement coming up! Keep commenting, I love it!

- IS
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Ipoona

Love it ... Will be back ...


Be back, sooon! 😃
Can't wait to hear what you have to say about part 4!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: smiley13

😛 me a silent reader but had to comment for this update...
the twist was zabardast ...totally unexpected...😲 😲
Was scratching my head thinking how will arnav & khushi meet...will arnav come to lucknow to save dhruv or dhruv escapes from sheeshmahal taking khushi along just to safely drop him...😆 😆
but u r twist was simply superb...👏
waiting for the next update eagerlyyy


Hello, silent reader! I am so happy you commented! 😊

smiley13, please do keep commenting! I am glad you enjoyed the twist.

I update every Wednesday 😊

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