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nishu_shorna

@nishu_shorna

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#191

Oh ho... So its Arnav... Now that's a pleasant surprise... Now that u see Arnav's POV almost everything is clear... I'm loving it... Also ArShi are gonna work together in this... I'm all excited to see what's next... Thanks for the pm...

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#192

First thought it was aki

Then you convinced us it was dhruv

And now we know it's our hero only

Well that's some twist

So glad I didn't see that coming

Well this explains how arnav got to her so quick

As he was drugged and kidnapped not dhruv

Even better

So dhruv is safe that's a relief

Dadi hasn't seen them so she didn't know it was arnav who is here

But Shyam knows

And he needs to keep him here

Well he is playing with fire

No he is man

Hmm arnav what was that with khushi

Or khushi already dhak dhak

Sure keep telling yourself its due to not eating

And arnav really you think its because she is the only one to talk to you are getting attached

Nope its more than that

Frog prince kissing khushi girl your thoughts sure are going haywire

So glad I read this story now

Khushi gets into such trouble don't she

Of course she does

So now she will help him to escape

Shyam you won't know what hit you when he legs it

That creep better not try it with khushi

Or he is gonna get it

After all khushi knows the truth now

Well she didn't see this coming

But hope she can help him

He can only escape with her help

Lady Hitler creep of man and handsome prince

Wow khushi what a combo

This just got more thrilling

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Ipoona

@Ipoona

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#193

Love it ... Will be back ...

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smiley13

@smiley13

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#194

😛 me a silent reader but had to comment for this update...
the twist was zabardast ...totally unexpected...😲 😲
Was scratching my head thinking how will arnav & khushi meet...will arnav come to lucknow to save dhruv or dhruv escapes from sheeshmahal taking khushi along just to safely drop him...😆 😆
but u r twist was simply superb...👏
waiting for the next update eagerlyyy

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anjs

@anjs

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#195

wow...thats a interesting story, what a twist u gave in the 4th chapter itself...

while reading the first few chapters, i thought dhruv is gonna fall for khushi n there will be a love triangle n all...didnt like khushi taking care of dhruv so closely, thought now arnav n khushi will be linked only thru dhruv cause khushi helps dhruv to escape...but u sent us a google with the 4th chapter, everything turned upside down ...hehehehehe

i always like when arnav-khushi are stuck in an adventure together, this will be more interesting to read...

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Param

@pup03

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#196

well loved the twist so its arnav not dhruv.. arnav singh raizada is falling for this chit of girl who is there to take care of him.. loved the update.. it was amazing. 😃

thanks for pm 😊

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SarunNArshi

@SarunNArshi

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#197

omggg.Its just awesome.I was thinking how wil Arnav Khushi meet.And there comes the biggg shocker.So the person who has been kidnapped is Arnav.Ufff it was very very gud.full on arshi only.
Khushi is such a chatter box.so true of her character;-)
So agla update kab hai madam?

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InspiredSoul

@InspiredSoul

Navigator

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#198

Originally posted by: Ipoona
Inspired ... It is 3:19 AM ... Just woke up ... Have been reAlly busy at work. So your PM was a welcome relief. Thanks for the excerpt ... And the honors ...😃 You my friend, deserve the applause. Eagerly waiting for the fourth chapter ... My hero ... How could I ever miss him ... I saw him in his fevered tosses ... His coffee eyes ... right down to the curls at his nape. Your writing is beautifully layered ... How could you be so lovingly detailed ... descriptive about anyone other than our man ... And it is Khushi who has been handed the task of nurturing him back to health ... An intimate task to begin with. Inspired ... Really loving this story ... Even the fact that she comes wearing green and pink ... Two colors that I personally thought suited her the best ... Loved that you had him thinking of her ... I am all for a good mystery ... But deep down I am a true romantic ... So thank you my friend, for bringing our couple together ... Looking forward to the two getting closer ... His misapprehensions .. Her hesitation ... What could be more delightful ... And thank you horizon for that promo ... Had not seen it ... These two are enchanting to watch ...

Ipoona ... 🤗

If I am up at 2.30 am finishing my update, it's because I have a friend like you who posts a comment at 3 am to keep me going! Your writing inspired me to make my first post on this forum, and it just snowballed from there! What you think about this story matters to me - a lot - can't tell you how happy I am that you are liking it!

Can't wait to see what you think of Part 4 😊

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