TAAREY SS - GETTING YOU BACK BY YOUR HELP! - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
#31
Awesome update
Love the way you portrayed their emotions
loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32
Awesome update..
D way u showed their emotions nd pain...hats off to that..
Loved d song...
Continue soon!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It ws vry emotional
Taarey r so much in pain
Song loved it
U describe dere emotion vry well
Dey r talking on phone by being swaron
Waiting for next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome update
update next part soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Emotional n superb
Thanks for PM
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow beautiful update
loved it
u portrayed the emotions beautifully
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow found another tr story, great,

so they had a brake up but they both think that the other one want this...

and now the phone convi is interesting😊

please pm me when you update
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38
hello people..im sorry for late update...anyways check out this part...without more talks😊

part 3

breakup.. the problem of two souls

'SWAYAM'...he lied
'ohh...mm...im sorry i thought i know you'
'i think i know you...may i know your name...please'
'SHARON'...the caller said
'ohk..im sorry'...he felt bad...really bad as he came to know that it wasnt taani..
'actually im sorry for calling you'...sharon said and hung up the phone...

rey sighed ..he himself didnt know how much he wished the caller to be taani...he went to get fresh up..

...

she hunged up the phone...she bit her lower lip and her eye brows curved in confusion...why did his sound seemed like rey's??...but..he said that he was swayam...what if rey didnt want to say his name like she did thinking that they both were strangers?...but rey's number was another right??..ugh...maybe she was thinking too much...chucking it taani looked at the number once again which was written in the paper...her sis ms.tanisha shekkawat gave that number to her for contacting a very famous buisness tycon and her sis's friend one mr.rohan kapoor for a work which taani's company had to do with his company...she once more read the number...didnt she entered the same number previous time??..or maybe she entered it wrong??...once again she typed the number and called...she heard the ringing sound and waited...

'hello'..again the same sound said..but this time bit harder

no way...the number is wrong...and again this time rey's sound...no...swayam's sound was heard

'im really so sorry'...she said
'whom do you wanna call??'..irritation was clearly found in his voice
'i actually...im sorry...the number which my sis gave was wrong..'...she said her voice felt low
'so what...you called here once and didnt i tell you that the numbere is wrong??'...he felt more irrtated..he himself didnt know why he was getting restless hearing her voice..
'whoah cool..mr.swayam...i said im sorry..'..now she was too getting irritated by his behaviour...
'cool??..u need me to be cool?...r u freaking serious ms sharon'...now he was angry with this girl...first of all she is the one who called him again even after knowing that the number wrong and now she is saying him to be cool...no one ever can speak like that to reyaansh singhania [except taani ofcourse]
'why are you being so angry??..wasnt i speaking normally to you??..and now look how you are speaking'...she asked with rage filled in her voice
'first of all keep your voice low'...he warned...'and then about the matter how i am behaving...wasnt you the one who called me for the second time...even after knowing the number is wrong?..then you please tell me how i should i behave'..he demanded in a dangerous sound
'excuse me...i didnt knew that the number was wrong...i thought that the number which i entered was wrong'...she said realising her mistake
'yeah...yeah...you thought...you thought the number is wrong so you called me...you thought that the mistake is mine so you shouted...why do you girls dont even listen to us boys even once...why do you all react so fastly without caring about us...and the most important.. why do you girls always thinks wrong??'...he shouted on her...no he wasnt talking to the one in the phone but to his girlfriend...who broke up with him leaving him scattered...

now there was huge silence between them...he sound seemed like he was awfully hurt...taani felt his pain...she didnt know why but she felt bad by his words...someone has hurted him so much...and he..he felt guilty for shouting like that to her...what did she do...it was all his pain which made him to behave like that...

'seems like you had a terrible breakup'..she said finally breaking the silence
'n how do u know that??'...he asked shockely
'means...u really had??'...now her sound seemed shocked as she came to know the truth
yeah...why??'
'because i just had yesterday'..

once again a huge silence took place...he was shocked...really she had breaakup??...that too yesterday??...the same day he had...god ther is something they are missing...

'ah..hmm..mm...you really had yesterday??'...he asked recovering from his sudden shock
'yeah..i had'...her voice chocked in the middle giving him the singal that she is about to cry
'hey please...dont be sad'...now he was calm and caring to her...was he that man who shouted on her before??
'im sorry for disturbing you swayam...i really wanted to divert my mind...so i thought to concentrate on my works and thats why i had to call rohan for some works of mine '...she apologised him telling the real reason of her call
'dont be sorry...actually i should be...im the one who shoted on you without knowing the reason...'
'really its not your fault...its our condition which made us angry swayam..'
'yeah..the breakup is our problem...the problem which make us react without thinking once'
'..yeah...hmm...btw...can i ask you something??'...she asked him with something popping in her mind
'yeah.. sure'..he said without realising that for him sharon was a stranger [even though she really wasnt ]
'whom did you breakup with??...whats her name??'..she asked even she didnt know why she was so much eager to know it

...

peeping to the next chapter

'say me how did this happened...i mean there should be a reason behind this breakup right'...she said as she felt to know more about it
'well yeah...bt..i think you should say it first..'
'swayam...u first'
'ladies first...and as much as i know you are a lady right?'
'yeah...but please'...she said in a childish...he couuld feel her cutness in her voice
'ok...fine'..he said finally surrendering infront of the stubborn girl
'and please...dont say just about the breakup part but about the whole love story'...she said in ordeing way

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so thats it guyz...in next part your all doubts will b cleared...and for now click like button and comment😊

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