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914863

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: princess_tara
interesting concept
taarey love each other
but why they broke apart
n confusing thing is who did break up??????
in rey pov it was looking like taani did that
but in taani pov it was looking like rey did break up
eagerly waiting to read more
update it asap

thanx dear😊..
mm...n bout the break up..u'll come to know😉...
will update soon

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914863

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: _PanCake_
Interesting concept...
Awe TaaRey are heart broken...
Please update soon...

thanx dear...
n yeah will update soon😊

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914863

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: Visk_Taarey
Awesome start
Update next part soon

thanx dear...
will update soon😃

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914863

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: ..LuciyA..
seems interesting
update soon
plz pm me

thanx dear😊...
will update soon...n will pm u😃

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914863

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: skfirdous
Aww this is damn interesting
cant wait to read further
update soon

thanx dear😊
will update soon

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914863

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: monikasaxena05
Superb start
Both r in SO much pain..
Eager to knw d reason behind their brkup
Continue soon!!

thanx dear😊...
u'll get know..
yeah will continue soon😃

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914863

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

hello people...so part to is written...im really happy that you all liked the concept...and i hope
you all will like this part too...so...no more talks...enjoy!!

part 2

pain of loving you

he went to upstairs ..to the rehearsal hall...n on the music in his phone...

while she on the radio...

*music*

apne karam ki kar adhayein...
yaara...oh yaara...yaara...
mujhko irade de
kasme de vade de
meri duaon ke isharon ko sahare de
dil ko thikane de
naye bahane de
khabon ki baarishon ko
mausam ke paimane de

taani closed her eyes hearing the song...
but the song was actually making her remind more about him..
she remembered how they met in first time...where she fell straight in his arms in the first day of the collage...and how his dark honey brown eyes locked with her...didnt she see love for her in his eyes the very first day?
she remembered how she admired his dance while he danced like a hero in the collage making her and all other girls go crazy about him...and how he proposed her on valentine's day infront of all in the collage..

apne karam ki kar adhayein...
kar de idhar bhi tu nighayein...
sun reha hai na tu...
ro reha hoon main...
sun reha hai na tu...
kyun ro reha hoon main... -2

he danced...pouring all his pain in it...as if asking her dont she hear him and his pain...
he so wished if she was here with him like before admiring his dance and making his dance more passionate...he remembered how he taught her dancing and how she smiled with a small reddish shade on her cheeks when he held her waist and made her move with him where they themselves created an amzing world... a world of TAAREY!!..

manzilein ruswa hain
khoya hai rasta
aye le jaye
ithni si ilteja

she so wished him to come and make her happy by his cute antics and terrible jokes which weren't funny but cute which always lightend up her mood whenever she was sad...a smile appeared as she thought his cute faces...and his million dollar smile which appeared after she was happy...

ye meri zamanat hai
tu meri amanat hai

his dance was going so weak in every passing seconds...he was feeling tired...no..never he cant live without her...she is his world...person who completes him...the person he wants the most.. without her he is nothing...he want just to hug her and cry in her arms right now...pleading her not to leave him ever...

apne karam ki kar adayein
kar de idhar bhi tu nighahein
sun raha hai na tu
ro raha hoon main
sun raha hai na tu
kyun ro raha hoon main

taani cried hard...dont he miss her??...dont he want her??...cant he see how hurt she is??... WITHOUT REY.. TAANI IS INCOMPLETE...she want those days back...those precious days...the days where they were TAAREY...those days where they couldnt even think of seperating...

waqt bhi theha hai
kaise kyun ye hua
khash tu aise aye
jaise koi dua

he remembered her blush when he complemended her beauty...her smile that made him forget all his sorrows just in a second...and her care when he got hurt...her fake anger when he made fun of her...but now time passed... it changed the season of love to hell...he want that time back...he want her...

tu rooh ki rahat hai
tu meri ibadat hai...

she remembered how he got jealous when she talked with other guys closely...and how he romanced with her in the crowd which made her give angry glares which ofcourse were fake ones... she remembered how they kissed forgetting everything...being in thier own land of love...and how he stood with her in her every problems.. supporting her..making her realise she never is alone and he'll be with her forever..

apne karam ki kar adhayien
kar de idhar bhi tu nigahein
sun raha hai na tu
ro raha hoon main
sun raha hai na tu
kyun ro raha hoon main -2
yaaarrraa...

he fell on his knees crying...crying for her...her love...her care while she threw things here and there angirly..thinking how did this happen..thinking why did he leave her ...both cried a lot...even they didnt know when they driffted to sleep..with thier memories of sweet past and trying avoid thier painful present.. even though they couldnt

...

he opened his eyes partially as his sleep was disturbed by the sun...ashe opened a blur image came as a view...to clear it..he blinked 2-3 times...yeah..his fav band linkin park's posture came clearly... he yawned as he got up from the bed still sleepily...ahh..he let out a small scream...and he pressed his head with his 2 fingures as his head ached a little...he looked at the time ..9 passed ...he was late...he used to get up before 8 everyday...he got up from the bed and went towards the shelf to take the towel...thats when he saw his face in the mirror...so weak..his eyes were red...and at the lower part they had a black shade...he closed his eyes letting a tear to fall as he got the reason of his tiredness...TAANI..if it was any other day...she would call him early in the morning asking him to freshen up...and to do his morning chores to reach in his academy on time...

suddenly he heard a music...he opned his eyes...he looked at the direction from where the sound came...yeah there it was...his phone..it was ringing...he cudnt undrstand the ring tone as it was his new mobile ...he moved towards it and checkd the number...it was unknown to him... but still he attented it...

'hello'...he sad
'hello...is this rohan??'

the caller asked...the sound seemed so familiar to him...no..actually it was like taani's voice...he had an argue to know if it was taani...but then he thought not to ..as he thought that he might have felt like that...

'no... wrong number'
'do i know you??...your sound seems so familiar'...the caller askd...her sound showed that how confused she was

yeah..he knew it...he know this is taani's voice...he was about to say that he was rey...but then he stopped as he thought about the number...no...it was not her number ofcourse... what if its some other girl??...he thought to say any other name and to ask the caller's name so he could know who the caller is

'SWAYAM'...he lied
'ohh...mm...im sorry i thought i know you'
'i think i know you...may i know your name...please'
'SHARON'...the caller said

......

precap

'seems like you had a terrible breakup'
'n how do u know that??'...he asked shockely
'means...u really had??'...now her sound seemed shocked
yeah...why??'
'because i just had yesterday'

...

ok...so thats it...hope u all liked it...n please click the like button and write your op

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Priyanka Saha

@StarBull

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#28

amazing updt...

love this song...❤️

ang the way u describe the pain,sorrows in taarey...

both are memorizing their moments and crying...

cant see my taarey crying...😭

and now they start their new game...HIDE AND SEEK...

plzz want taarey reunite...

love the precap...

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dasv

@dasv

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#29

awesome update
are u trying to make us sad
the part was totally emotionally. u describe it in a hell good manner
the perfect depiction of pain and suffering of both taarey

loved the phone convo of taani and rey.

update next part soon