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Posted: 11 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: skfirdous

superb update
full of mystry full of suspence
n i m loving it


thanks😃
i am glad to know. 😃😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#62
I didn't get any PM or scrap 😭
But at least I found it 😊
Coming to the f f is really nice and interesting idea
So now I will go run and read the two chapters 😃
Okay so bye bye

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Posted: 11 years ago
#63
it's so intersting...
love this conceot...
full of mysteries...
plzz continue soon and do pm me plzzz
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Posted: 11 years ago
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WHEN THEY MET


Taani's pov

As I reached there, I saw her eyes stirring. She was trying to get hold on her. The sudden brightness, I can understand, was making it more difficult. I bent down, placed a hand on her back, and with other, held her left hand, to give her support. I gave her my full support. Her eyes were getting shut every instant, as she tried to open them. I got an idea, and stood in between her and, the burning sunrays. That was much better. Her eyes were half open. As she made herself comfortable, I sat beside her.

"where are we?" said Sharon, coming out of the daze. As soon as she got up, she felt dizzy, yet again. This must have been because of the surrounding. It was difficult for both of us to digest the mere fact, that we are stuck in some...jungle?

"Sharon, I don't know where we are. But, looking at this place, I find it a little creepy. So, its better we get our gut out of it." I said, explaining my point of view. She did not argue. She just nodded. Even she agreed with me.

"so, where do we go?" said my mate, completely confused by the surrounding. Even I was blank.

"Sharon, I think, trusting our faith is the best we can do now. Lets chose whichever way our mind say?" I completed, not knowing any other thing to say. She nodded in agreement. After some 5 to 6 seconds, she pointed her finger towards a path, which was similar to others, but still, something was different with it. As of, something was there. Who would rescue us, or, who we will rescue?

We started our journey, trusting god and our faith, which was surely not with us.

end of Taani's pov

~~~***~~~

Rey's pov

"bro, where are we? It feels like hours, that we have been walking." Swayam said, all irritates and, obvious to everyone, tired. It has been one hour since we have been walking, I think. I remember sawayam waking me up. We both were in some weird kind of place. It was dark there. As if, the trees were not ready to give a way to sunlight. Not even a small patch of sunlight was there. Or maybe, there was? I don't remember completely. But, when I woke, I could not remember anything. I asked swayam if he does? He just shrugged his shoulders, while his face let out a sign. There was nothing that we could do. So, instead of sitting and thinking about all this shit. We started our journey.

End of Rey's pov

~~~***~~~

Completely unknown to their faith, the four were getting inside the black magic. the magic, from which, it was hard to go away. It was the world of BLACKS. No one can escape it, until you fight back. And, fighting with it..

~~~***~~~

It was by 7, when both girls were tired of walking. Both needed some rest, when their eyes caught a place. A born fire was lit in the middle. Some logs and big rocks surrounded it.

"don't you think we are in some movie? These scenes, they are just like some movie set." Said Sharon, completely shocked by the coincidences, or maybe, reality? On the other hand, whose situation was no less than a man, who had just seen a pond in a desert, just nodded, without giving much thought to what Sharon said. They both went near the logs, looked around to see if someone was there. But, there was no sign of a solitude soul.

"huh! When will we get out of this place?" taani narrated, after both settled themselves on a single log.

"well, I don't know about that. But, what if, some bhoot comes here?" said Sharon, in a mood to play. She knew taani well. She was scared of all such things, though, no other person knows about it, except her.

"SHARON! You know, I don't like all this. I am scared of all such.." taani stopped in her mid tracks, when she heard some noise.

"did you hear that?" taani said, all scared.

Sharon nodded.

"ohmygod! Bhoot Sharon - bhoot! Mujhe dar lag raha hai. Wo hamare sath kya karega? Agar usney..." she could not complete as our diva, placed her soft palms on her mouth.

"shut up, taani. Bhoot woot kuch nahi hota." She whispered back in her ears.

The sound was getting louder. That monster or bhoot, was coming closer to the beautiful girls. Who were sweating badly out of fear.

Soon, two male figures appeared out of dark. The duo looked at the girls, who were cuddling themselves with each other. They could not control but let out a laughter.

Hearing the laughter, both the girl mates separated themselves from each other, and looked at the source of it. On seeing the two handsome males, both the girls were lost in them. The one with long hair wore a white shirt with blackish blue jeans. His glairs which hung on his pocket, just gave a flirty look to his personality. The other guy, with short hair, wore a black shirt along dark blue denim. He looked so desirable.


On the other hand, when the boys saw the girls, they were awestruck by their beauty. the brunette was wearing coal blackdangri. Her hair were set in a high pony and her sneakers were just adding the spice to the beauty. the blonde, who was no less than an angel, wore a black and white strips dress. It barely reached her knees. To add more grace, she wore black colored ballets. Her hair was done in a bun, a messy bun. she must have kept her hair open, feeling hot, must have tied, thought the short hair guy.

sharon's dress

first dress. taani!

sharon's sneakers.

taani's ballets.


"TAANI!" said Rey.

"SHARON!" said swayam.

"REY!" said Taani.

"SWAYAM!" said Sharon.

The four were shocked to zenith to see each other.

~~~***~~~

And so, I am back with an update. I know I am been missing since 2 days, but, I am back now. So, as I promised, here the four starts meet. Hope you all liked the update, plus the dresses.

There are many things left unfold, stay tuned to know more..

Ps. I don't give precaps. Okay? The reason is big. Let that be. Lol. Sorry!

Also, i will be commenting on everyone's story soon. so, please be patient. okay?

DEDICATED TO MY SUNSHINE!😊

Edited by amrit2000 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#65
Nice part
Tani scared of bhoot 😆
Taarey n swaron meet was nice
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Posted: 11 years ago
#66
Res [:)/unres
Nyc update
Shaani were nyc
N u describe shaani dress vry nicely 😊
All four know eachother umm interesting
Update soon 😃
Edited by nishu98 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#67
awesome update
omg this all is some black magic interesting
eagerly waiting for next part
update it asap
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Posted: 11 years ago
#68
Wow finally taarey swaron
Meet so it mean four are together
At one place thanks for PM
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Posted: 11 years ago
#69
Superub update
World of black??? 😕
Loved the dresses
Finally the four met
Now the story will get interesting 😉
Continue sonn
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Posted: 11 years ago
#70
sooo awsmmm prt dr
thnks 4 pm

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