Making Khushi Mine II ~ (THREAD 28) - Page 72

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Posted: 11 years ago
Long Live Google..!!
Very smart Arnavji, and you thought we won't know the endearment you are bestowing on your wife in Italian... Great.
actually, we are good as long as you do it, language no barrier we have Google.
and seriously "clicking pic" was creepy you think, how about you explain tip toeing in your own house to escape from getting caught by wife... and almost running from the room... dodging her queries in pretext of giving instruction... So unASR..!!
Focus Arnavji... this 'Returns of Khushi' is taking your toll... and be careful, now that she knows you are shy... nervous... and flustered, she'll have her, "aww... How Cute." moment all the time to make you go more funny or creepy... come on, get a grip..!!
You don't want that, right Arnavji..??
About that, anybody wants you to change is just out of question... you are the Gem Arnavji... Best thing in the planet could happen to khushi... She do know it very well..
and So,
Don't take that grinning evil lady lightly... she knows everything and she'll make sure you spell each and everything to her in details.
Yeah she is on mission... 'Make Arnavji talking Parrot'.
And she has her 'wand' "Communication, remember Arnavji?" with her.
You are screwed Arnavji..!!
But still that was really Cute.. you and Shy..!! like O.M.G. ...hehe

Yo khushi, good going... but you see enjoying at the expense of shy and nervous Arnavji is so-not-done... Huh.
What is with those medicine and doctor query again and again..??
If you would allow the poor doctor to speak he would have long back told you about your husband verifying his prescibed medicine with foreign doctors... Silly motor mouth..!!
annndd hehe, ...you don't even know the 'alcohol and rashes' suspense.. Do you..??
Its a secret between Arnavji and us... No telling you..!!
Okay fine you are spared, just for the sweet things you said to him...
'Someday try to see yourself from my eyes and you will see a man who has done nothing but forgiven people for their intentional crimes against him. A man who is a survivor. To me, you are not defined just by your temperament or silence. To me, you are much more than that. Way more'.
So sweet khushi, love you for this.
Man was touched..!!
Chalo enjoy your stay at NY with your Cute husband.

Brilliant updates anon... the hug at end, just awesome... loved the deja vu moment between them in the morning... and khushi going all gutter on him, in mind though...
I am So waiting for him to go gutter...
Thanks a lot for update anon... though you are busy you made it for us...
Muuaaahhhaaa... God Bless you..!!
Thank you.

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Posted: 11 years ago
Awww..."tesoro"..."mi amore"...u can use that to describe urself too u know...u r a treasure, my luv...bas bol diya...👏...kitna acchha likhte ho baby???? Hum to fida ho gaye tumhaari kahani pe, kasam se!!!
A f***king photo wall......aur itna saara naatak, omg...kitna pagal hai yeh ladka...'perverted, creepy, stalker'...like, seriously, he must be nuts...aisa kaise sochegi yaar...pyaar karti hai tujhse duffer!!!
But, finally I am glad he has realised his love for her...😳...about time dude! The portion where u have described his eagerness to touch her, to hold her close and then how he retracts his hands is absolutely lovely...so much for giving her importance & respect!
So many instructions for a girl in a new country, to be alone for the whole day and all she can think of is bigg tv...bilkul mere jaisi hai...😉...khana peena toh chalta rahega yaar, but indian tv ke bina jeena...nah...aur woh bhi agar serial ipk jaisa ho aur hero Arnav jaisa toh...😳
The doctor convo was fantastic...pakda gaya chor...par itni pyaari chori, uff!!! How she introduces the real Arnav to him has been handled so beautifully my dear. Then her final masterstroke, to occupy that one place she really treasures to make him understand what she feels for him, like the 4 wretched months never happened and she wants him back, like he was 4 months back...like she always loved it when he wrapped her in his arms & they slept like that...then & so, now...beyond beautiful...loved the 'tesoro' & 'mi amore' very, very much!!!!!
Aapka update jaise tapte raygistan mein boondon ki bauchaar ho...sach mein is garmi mein bhi thandak mehsoos karata hai yeh aapka update...jiyo meri jaan!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome stupendous chapter!!⭐️
the way Arnav react when he realised khushi might have seen the wall with her photos.. he was nervous😆😆

morning khushi felt happy and start taking steps...

the way Arnav instruct everything to her .. 2 mins for it and 20 mins for tv seriously 😆

glad he is ready to do anything for her...

the way khushi's rain of questions came oh my god...

Arnav finally answered her⭐️

too good ... finally some more improvement they will get their peaceful sleep😉

eagerly waiting for next update.. to see how arhi took next steps
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Posted: 11 years ago
thank god no climax...😆 It would have been awkward and a bit unrealistic if Khushi went overboard romantic or Arnav confesses out of the blue, but you handled it realistically as possible...
So happy at least Khushi is reading Arnav's signs right this time... and she takes it as "cute" 😳

Arnav bechara will probably take more time to relax it seems, but that's ok, as long as he sees the err in his previous approach to this relationship...

Waiting for the next part... 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
wonderful update
loved it
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
awww...they are getting there...slowly but surely 😊
lovely update and thank you for the pm 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Aww!!! Can some one get me a tissue...tears of joy...love these two crazy characters...beautiful update...loved it!!! :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved the update..I just googled.."treasure" and "my love"..
They are slowly but surely coming together...he needs more than a nudge to open up..and realizes that too..

Kushi is so open about her feelings..it is so refreshing..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Oh my God!! I love his FF!!! Someone suggested i read MKM 1, but I ended up starting to read this one by mistake...but then that was a beautiful mistake cause I cannot tell you how thrilled I am to Come across such an amazing piece of work!
Just don't know where to start actually...took me 3 days and sleepless nights to read all 45 chapters...leaving all my coursework behind,,.,man this was one amazing weekend,,,,no boyfriend, no going out and no calls (literally)
I called for takeout three days in a row and just read and read more...you are AWESOME lady!!

I love the vulnerable and scheming Arnav here...and a total contrast to the very real and bubbly Khushi...they are such a mish mash together but still seem like the perfect made for each other jodi
She is the calmness to his aggressive and the balm to his untrusting heart while he is the anchor she desperately needs in a life where she probably still feels unworthy of, at least that's what I feel when I see her going overboard to please everyone...but with Arnav she can speak her mind...it took her time to finally accept that he is part of her and she a part of him and when she did, she ceased to please him and instead did whatever she could to strengthen their relationship for both their sakes

She is a true friend when she does not give up on her friends despite the repercussions she may have to face in her relationship...this is a flaw maybe, but to me she is just real...not just a character in your story but someone many of us can relate to...and so is Arnav

We all hope to be perfect and find the perfect person...but in your characters, their imperfections make them perfect.

Can't wait to read the remaining chapters now...and once you are done with this FF, I'll start reading the earlier MKM...cause I want to finish this one first and then start on another one of your amazing journeys...

Thank you again for this wonderful story!! 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
That was great and cute 👏
By the way when would the next update be ?

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