Making Khushi Mine II ~ (THREAD 28) - Page 15

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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey Anony

Thanks for your note :)

I agree, anything mushy with this Arnav and Khushi would be completely out of character. There are few things I'd like to see addressed; if they fit into the larger scheme of events you have planned for this story, it would be great :)

1) Arnav opening up so someone (Khushi/Sumer) about what exactly he went through as a boy, for him to have some closure and catharsis. He cannot hold it within himself throughout his life.

2)I know he doesn't mind her limp: but a moral stance is often different from a spontaneous reflex when one actually sees it. I'd like to see his reaction, see him put an end to her insecurity (if not an end, at least soothe it)

3)I forget the name - but the servant who knew Arnav broke the furniture in his room (after his birthday dinner) and the driver who saw Arnav push her toward the car : I want to see if they are ever able to forgive Arnav for doing what he did to their Baby.

4)One cannot live a happy life with the burden of hatred. I know he cannot forget, but I want to know if Arnav ever manages to at least forgive his mother for her sins.

5)Even if it is in his own queer peculiar way, he has to confess his love for her. No?

Phew! Long list. Sorry, got carried away. No pressure. Just my views.

PS - This time, your soon or our soon ? 😉


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Posted: 11 years ago
Thnx for note
Plzz try to maximise the numb of chapters to 4-5 or more thn tht..don't end it in 2-3
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Posted: 11 years ago
cool note
great pic
will put in my wishlist tooo😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
5 chapters!!! Mujhe 5 ya usse zyada chapters hi chahiye...

And apni wish toh Maine kehdi past comment mein hi...

Their talk where all these diffrebces do not crop up... Like a non mushy heart to heart...

And also like I mentioned earlier, I want them to act on their words... And also be equals in their relationship...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thank you for your note. I wish,
  1. to read his confession.
  2. him being laad governor always unlike the serial
  3. talking about his dubai kiss
  4. coming back to India
  5. Karan and rishab marriage
  6. Khushi miffed with him and he running around her for once
  7. Khushi pregnant
  8. Him living with her in NY
  9. A son who is a carbon copy of him in looks...
  10. the dress she bought in Dubai.
Thanks a lot for considering our wish list.🤗












Edited by vks11 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Some hot sizzling moments between them...😉







Some Masti between them...




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Posted: 11 years ago
ooo my gosh wat an update <3 <3 <3
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Posted: 11 years ago
I am watching a song from Kabhi Alvida Na Kehna. A beautiful song set in New York called Tumhi Dekho Na. I really want that to be our Arnav and Khushi. Please????
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Posted: 11 years ago
few more haah :-
11) khushi should tell fully regarding her insecurity with her limp, although she asked in last chapter , but this topic deserves little more discussion.

12)make khushi met his friends in NY .she should how he lived there.
although it shud be told by arnav himself but phir bhi.

13)can they have ltlle normal conversation ?like normal husband wife..

14)what happened to that brooch he gifted for her first cooking..


h HA HA kuch bhi nai chodungi maI😈

P.S- statutory warning - MORE WISHES CAN COME😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thank you for the note :)
and you do know that I Love You right? ! <3
And plz do the 5 chapters thingy I don't want it to end so soon :(
and one thing for sure I want is a lovely confession of Arnav's Coz Khushi deserves it n rest I Think follow your notes since ure planning frm nov. Would love to read :D

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Him telling her about their dubai kiss!
I want a pregnant khushi :P
Edited by -BarunSanz- - 11 years ago

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