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Posted: 11 years ago
what ever Arnav did with khushi in the past is a mistake but khushi have to listen him once
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Posted: 11 years ago
life never has a rewinb button...where you could go back and then check and erase and re do manythings...but then there definitely is a chance to start a new way...from where you are standing..instead of looking back and acting on look at present and then move together...i wonder what kushi wants to do...
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow so arnav was in love with her ...love at first sight..:D
but wat happened... y did he let her go?
the was a lovely chap n a cute flash back :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Ooh heat 8f thd night, past and present.. aptly namec I thought!.

Being conservationists I truely hope the tortoise shell hair comb was plastic and not thecreal thing?.. maybe it was an heirloom from her grandmother..

for a minute there I thought Arnav had blown the fuses with his AC again, leaving Kh7shi all hot snf0d flustered😉

Your writing never ceases to astound me, I alm8st felt I was there.. ok watching it on the box...it sounds horrible! Here I am mid june and the uk finally has some sun, but im dying in thd heat...especially at night. Maybe ive gone soft in my old age LOL

I lovec the flashback, and Arnav being Arnav has a memento of her...how did he get it we are all asking😉

Why do I get the feeling that Shyam is the crook? For a minute I thought he had deliberstly sent Arnav off on a goose chase so he could have Khushi to himself...I dont like him and we haven't seen him do anything yet!

loking forward to the next post
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Posted: 11 years ago
Khushi has made up her mind and it is for Arnav to break her resolve.
Did she change her physical appearance lafter Arnav left her?

What a coincidence ? In DND and in this story ,Arnav let khushi go away from him And now both Arnav's want khushi back!

It doesn't look like 6 different writers are writing and kudos to all the writers .




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Posted: 11 years ago
Nicely done Jenny!! 👍🏼
The transition to this chapter is seamless and very effective.
Love how you have given a written visual of the forest, sunrise and the Park conditions and the difficulties the Park DCF faces.
Arnav has his job cut out for him. Smugglers, poachers, corrupt workers and the "Timber Mafia". He is surrounded by "snakes" of all kinds human and otherwise.
Add to this is the turmoil in his heart. The woman he loves is so close, but the rift from days gone by is still strong.
Flashback to the college days sheds more light on their closeness. Just enough to keep us guessing!! Waiting for more in the coming chapters.
Arnav is realizing that his "pushy" behavior is not going to work, so I see him backing off and coming up with a new game plan. 😊

Khushi on the other hand rightfully tries to maintain a distance showing that there is a deep hurt due to the breakup. She is strong but still drawn to him.
The two are so alike in their own way!!

Waiting for the next Chapter!!

Take care Jenny. Lot going on for you!! 😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
Loving the story. I truly appreciate the hardwork of every writer in the story. The story is flowing in seamless flow as that of a river.
*bows* and *claps*

The couple in question , as it are exciting and thrilling , no doubt. Add to it the backdrop of the jungle , makes the plot more thrilling and exciting. Even the details of the Sanctuary and the cases going on holds interest.
The raging hormones of the couple and their ( read: Khushi's[ ;) ] ) struggle to control it is so much fun to read and imagine !
Their past seems soo cute ! Would love to read more of it. As of now , I am eagerly awaiting for Khushi to give Arnav the much desired second chance to redeem himself in her eyes and the journey to that is what I am looking forward to ! I understand that what Arnav did was very wrong but now he does seem to regret that act of his truly ...but trust as we know is a one time thing , once broken hard to be redeemed. Hope he soon gets a chance to explain his side of the story.

Looking Forward to the next Installment of the story.

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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update loved it thank you for pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago


Will you update before i leave ??
M already getting "naughty" vibes ! 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update Loved it <3
Thanks for the pm

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