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AquaSandhya

@AquaSandhya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#771

Fabulous one, Jen 👍🏼

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DMGFan-2b-not2b

@DMGFan-2b-not2b

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Posted: 11 years ago

#772

Sometimes choices we make come back to bite us! And more than those choices it's the lack of communication that gets to most relationships.

Lovely update! Loved the description of the forests, Arnav's frustration at the team smuggling & his flashback.

I must say that all the writers for this Ff - it's incredible how your styles are similar. One update to another you don't feel that it's different people writing them. Incredible!

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pinkly

@pinkly

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Posted: 11 years ago

#773

Beautifully written. If I read all chapters in one go, I will never feel each chapter was written by a different writer. The story is continued nicely from the last chapter.

Jenny, I felt I was reading a suspense thriller while reading this chapter. Arnav's anger towards the teakwood smugglers felt so real. Arnav seemed desperate to talk and justify his previous actions. Khushi is still not ready to listen to Arnav. I feel soon he will get this chance. Very nicely written.

Sami, I will wait for your update. It has been a long time since I read your stories (not after Mr and Mrs Naughty Raizada). I am looking forward to the next chapter here. Will you give us a teaser? That would be awesome.

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1likeNoOther

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Posted: 11 years ago

#774

Great update!! Arnav truly does love Khushi and even back then he loved her. Wonder what he'll do to win her back???? 😊

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arshi_lover1

@arshi_lover1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#775

Loved it! plz continue soon!!!! Hope you continue soon!

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Mirabell

@Mirabell

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Posted: 11 years ago

#776

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First, apologies for posting my response so late in the day. But here are a few of my thoughts..

I see that the plot thickens and it is a conversation that is one too late for one of them. Sigh. But I also see that Arnav is all too aware of his role in this, 'an arrogant fool'. Now my curiosity is piqued - why did he break away from this relationship?

Again - I see a continuation of a consistent theme albeit with different writers - How do all of you manage to evoke a similar sentiment through out the story? Its a great example of collaboration - you keep the tone so consistent. The air heavy with rain, humidity. The frustration in your characters' inability to nab the villains.. all these are held together so coherently with different authors.. I congratulate you all once again! :)

Will be reading your next update in a few minutes.. :)

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-silentbang-

@-silentbang-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#777

nice update
i m loving this mysetry of smuggling
and arnav needs to apologise first for his mistakes
update soon😊

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Auchi

@Auchi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#778

Thanks for the PM & Nice update... really its too late for Arnav but hoping that kushi at least give Arnav a chance for explanation.

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Raila1014

@Raila1014

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Posted: 11 years ago

#779

Poor Arnav babu, must be so frustrating with the poachers in his professional life and not being able to get what he so easily gave up many years ago in his personal life. It does feel like it was a hard decision as he was obviously very much in love back then and still has a memento from those days as a constant reminder in his life to this day. If only Khushi can see this but she was obviously very hurt when he made that decision so selfishly by himself. I am sure she would have stood by him no matter what he decided to do if he had so much as talked to her about it. Let us how it is not too late for these 2 to communicate now. Btw missy, all the heat and no action huh? Raat baki hain, so hopefully there will be more to this heat of the night for these 2 . . .