ArShi FF: Like Never Before #1 - Thread 2 added (20.07.14)

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mahrusweety

@mahrusweety

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Posted: 11 years ago

#281

PART B

wow super awesome and marvellous part

the way u wrote the feeling ,nervousness and describe the emotions arnav and khushi going through was amazing and very beautiful

Aman and lav were the stress busters and the humour added by them at that intense scene was very lovely and heart warming😆😊

loved how beautifully and fabously u describe the first moment arshi saw each other😊

and how from nervousness and fearness they fell into the comfort zone with each other😳

thanks for updating❤️ such fab parts

really it's true

SABR KA PHAL MEETHA HOTA HAI

and we readers got that in the way of such super awesome updates by u.👏

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mahrusweety

@mahrusweety

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#282

PART C

thank u

thank u Chavera

for writing and giving us such a lovely and heart warming part

loved reading and again reading it😲

already read it twice but want to do again

😆

the essence of humor u add now after such heart touching updates made the ff more awesome and lovely

the comfort which arshi are feeling with each other

the way Akhilesh and Garima talk with khushi and arnav was very beautiful

and the dialogue

MY BUNCH OF MONKEYS TEAMED UP WITH URS

was the most fab🤣

😆

loved the parts

thanks for updating

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Bhool gayi.

@Sanaya.Barun

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#283

Aww how much i loved this chapter! How from strangers they formed such beautiful relationship..

Then scene when he ruffled her hair, like a younger brother, was so damn adorable! This makes him seem like an innocent man 😳

I love how supportive he is for her!

Im just loving it! That was an AMAZING update! <3

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Sutapa Sarbabhom

@sutapasarbabhom

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#284

Thanx for long updt dear i realy lov this concpt enjoy our arshi mariage lets c hw our belov couple lead their maried life

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littlemissstar

@littlemissstar

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#285

Superb..
Loved it..
Waiting fr their journey to begin..
Pls update soon.. 😊

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sarozz

@sarozz

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#286

Awesome...beautifully written...loved it...the start of a new journey...

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1987Trisha

@1987Trisha

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#287

Ohhh i so loved all the parts...

they ARE meant to be together...

loved the way they are trying to make the other comfortable...

loveddd it...

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 11 years ago

#288

Commenting on Chapter 3 (B & C) - the update simply awesome...really very well written...the story is progressing very nicely..keep up the good work going..Arnav and Khushi meeting, their comfort level, their wedding all this was perfectly portrayed..job well done...please do update soon..waiting eagerly to read the next update..😊

Edited by MysticRiver - 11 years ago