ArShi FF: Like Never Before #1 - Thread 2 added (20.07.14) - Page 28

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Posted: 11 years ago
Chaverah, Did some body ever tell you that how wonderful magic weaver you are?
I read the pre-wedding part and thought it was perfect, but I read the wedding and post-wedding parts and now thinking it can not be any beautiful, though I know it will be, because you are gonna write it.
Khushi and Arnav's feeling after seeing each other, throughout the wedding process and after that so wonderful that I myself felt at peace and felt the pure bliss of their relation while reading.
J'ai ador ce serait bien peu de chose dire ...
Je l'ai aim ...
Je l'adore ...
et je vais savourer comme l'un des meilleurs chapitre de lecture de certains FF jusqu'ici ...
(courtesy Google translator😉)


Edited by Moumita_2014 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
this is such a beautiful story. love both arnav and khushi and their lovely friends😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing updates Loved it <33
Loved how aman was freaking out n going crazy
N loved the way you described their marriage
N their feelings n emotions
Loved the talk between Alikesh-Khushi n Garima-Arnav
N slowly they r taking baby steps into their relationship
Talking n being comfortable with each other
N their friends r a crazy bunch
Beautifully written
Cant wait for the next update
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb update...
Arshi's life has changed so much but they will make it...
Loved the update
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Posted: 11 years ago
Chaverah ... Awesome update.
The way you portrayed emotions,meetings and thought of Arnav and Khushi along with there well wishers, pre, during and post wedding was awesome.

In pre wedding the way Khushi is fighting with a the negative of past and trying to hold on to the thin thread of hope and trust she laid on Garima at the same time trying making NK and Anjali believe in the same was so unnerving. I loved how Ammi held Khushi and told her she believe in the trust she put in Garima and in case anything went wrong she is always there for Khushi.

At the other side Arnav was already formed respect and protectiveness towards his would be wife for the way she she being treated and agreed to wedding so quickly. He without knowing her already felt a connection with her a sign of true soul mates.

During the wedding part. Was hilarious as well as lovely. The way Aman and Lavanya showed there concern as well as support for Arnav was awesome.

Finally when they came face to face one what I have been waiting and you did not disappoint with there reaction or there friend. Loved it. Especially the way NK made a hyper Anjali quite.

The way they held there hand entwined with each other during the ceremony already tells their unbridled promise. The way Arnav was able to read Khushi was awesome.

Post wedding... The level of comfort and understanding both Arnav and Khushi showed already awesome.mthere friends a right they will get through it together. Loved the advice Ammi gave to both. As well as the comfort of Akhilesh words provided to Khushi along with an insight of Khushi's sacrificing nature provided by Garima to Arnav.

Another beautiful part of this update was Arnav's assuring and demanding words to Khushi to cummunicate along with telling her that he is not good with words. The way you wrote that unknowingly Arnav completed his promise of providing a should for support and to cry on and Khushi's wish also got filled of having someone of her own.

They finally got someone they belonged to with all the possessiveness soully and only there's... Like Never Before!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Fantastic update..That was such a long update...Love the way you describe arshi feelings nervousness and their before and post marriage moments..Beautifully penned it :) Thanks for pm :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely update. Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Such a nice and long update
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Posted: 11 years ago
Beautiful update . So glad that both of them want to make this marriage work and feel so strongly about each other's happiness . Cannot wait to read how their relationship will progress.
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Posted: 11 years ago
wonderful updates. very well written. their thoughts at seeing each other the first time were very well presented. also the advice they received from their elders was nicely portrayed

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