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Arshidrishti thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb update
very brave of khushi of defending her marriage 😉

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Posted: 11 years ago
superb update..
both are back together..im soo happy..without unnecessary draggings nd more misunderstandings.
totally loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
God U know Wat I will be damn waiting for ur update and finally enwen u updated I won't be reading in one shot
I will be reading in spits for a couple of days...to feel and reduce the time for next update...

Hmm let's come to update..
It is not khushi with limp definetly it is arnav...mentally totally fractured in fact...
Gosh the way he interprets one situating totally tells his condition ...all credit goes to go is his oh so called mom..
Seriously he need to be repaired and treated ..

And khushi she is one god fragment ..the maturity the thinking and the heart she has is incomparable... I am falling in more for this crazy gal cum women...

One sec I will be in deep love with khushi and the next sec I will be incredibly loving arnav

That is the thing u created...my arshi ..our arshi ..

The way she she came to him and told him her opinion and lend her mind and heart to make their relation ship stable is just fascination..

And their moments In The flat is omg.

The way he told her the truth abt the marriage
The way he was desperate to c and be with her
The way he suddenly shocked at her surprise visit ..
The way he asked her for guest room..seriously arnav ..
The way he want hug her and lent out his sorrow.

Omg all these re just wow..
And khushi she frankly
boldly
truely
Told her feeling once again for him is amazing
She is one brave lady I must say...

U know Wat ism falling for this gal again and again

And the pics she is seeing and the thought of him loving her is wow and waiting for that ..
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Posted: 11 years ago
This was a power packed update!
You my Dear, have outdone yourself once again, this was by far one of best updates of MKM, just flawless!

Khushi you are a person to admire, your inspiration and zest towards life is just amazing!


Arnav is so lucky to have you in his life!


Loved how you ended the update, so waiting for the next...


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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow its was really superb and Beautiful update
Loved the whole update too much and read it three time in one go
Arnav's point of view was very much needed here
Loved the way Arnav was shocked to see Khushi there in his apartment
Their feeling in first view of other was very beautifully written
Khushi's arguments for Arnav's points were very brilliantly and well shown👍🏼
Loved the way Khushi fight back for Arnav's every excuse
And after their agreement in carry on with their marriage she choose to live with him in same room...was superb👏

He Love Khushi too much that he put her pictures in a whole wall
And choose to see her over spellbinding view of city from his room
And by pictures Khushi come to know he liked her from to long before their marriage something that he wont confessed himself
As mostly everything is clear between them so they will try to make their marriage work once again
Hope we will get some romance in next update
Waiting for next chapter eagerly already
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely update!!!!!!!!!!
Loved your portrayal of Khushi here bold and taking her stand!!!!!!!!!!!
She was a true heroine here 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
Arnav was made to give clear replies whether he wants her in his life or not...KUDOS dear girl!!!!!
Looking forward to their relationship picking up from here especially now that Khushi has seen her photographs that Arnav had taken long back...
Want to see whether he confesses his feelings for her and the important question is HOW????????
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update..
loved every bit of it
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Posted: 11 years ago
Do i need to write anything ? There is alot !!

While reading all i felt was guilt, pain, longing and the most of all..LOVE !

According to Arnav, his apartment was the best thing as he had got it from his own hard earned money and nothing to do with his family. Arnav Singh Raizada lived in style, in the best location possible in New York.

Khushi's memories though haunted him alot, he missed her. But at the same time hated her for what she had done. DRUGS AND ALCHOHOL JUST TO REMOVE KHUSHI's memories and live in peace ! Whats wrong with him ? Comparing Khushi to Sujata Mathur and in the same breath refuting it himself. Guess he was confussed.

Knock knock...and there stood the person he always thought about... Khushi. Flabbergasted tongue tied Arnav stood... There Khushi stood infront of him, in flesh, but he still thought he was imagining her... Arnavji !... and Arnav still didnt respond. Poor Khushi, she thought Arnav didnt want to meet her and was angry.

Aman, Arnavji is not here... That broke his silence, his trance. Khushi , tum yahan ?..No,no, Arnav you are seeing a ghost of Khushi's standing infront of you ! If Khushi rang the bell, stood there and said his name, then obviously shes there !!!

Arnavji can i come inside ? Arnav nodded a yes and bombards her with questions...lol... No Aman i was wrong, Arnavji is here. Where is your luggage ? You have brought lugagge with you ?... Arnavji can i stay here ?... Ofcourse, this is yo...and he stopped himself before he could say ' your house.' and changed the topic.

Khushi had actually waited to hear him for past 133 days + 2 hrs in India and the travelling time to reach his apartment and the extra 4 mins which she spent standing outside for Arnav to let her in ?! Damn, she really loved him alot. Otherwise who does such a lot now a days ? As Arnav thought he would be getting divorce papers by now !

Here is Khushi for you, she started talking about Aman and his families little details, living in New Jersey and thats why Bade papa had allowed her to travel... Arnav realizing how much he missed that chatter.

Arnav wanted to hug Khushi ?!? While getting water he was stealing glances to see what she was doing.. Haaye ! How much for the past 4 months he had dreamt of her being in his house and now she was.

Hey Bhagwan !*banging forehead on the wall* Phir se Lawyers and Divorce issues entered his mind, Alimony and had she come here to talk about it face to face ? Cant he just let it go for sometime ? Let her relax, shez just travelled and come ! Thank god he waited but after half an hour and after having hot chocolate, Arnav couldnt wait to talk. First question... Why Are You Here Khushi ?...lol.. The expression on Khushi's face and her thoughts were crazy. To talk about the Divorce papers, Arnavji ! She said *me confused*

Now starts MAHABHARAT ! Sometimes hez stunned, sometimes she is. Sometimes he thinks she is naive, sometimes she thinks he is a child. Though the convo between them was much needed. It was a vent out of emotions, clarifications, questions, answers, priorities, thoughts, anger. Arnav and Khushi needed that.

So, Khushi was here so that she could break Arnav's head, put brains into it to make him understand and tell him straight that it was him and only him whom she loved. Not Rishabh.

Inspite of reminding him that he had sent the Divorce papers and not her, and the fact that she hadnt signed it, and if he wanted her to sign them then she would and take the next flight out. Here he thought she was blaming him, accusing him for everything !

Khushi was trying her level best to make Arnav understand, by taking a stubborn stance that she would tell him everthing. That she knew everything about him and before their marriage maybe she had started liking him ! In the end he walks out on her... My god again Arnav thought that she was blaming him for everything.

Jeez whats wrong with him ?!? Being such a big business man couldnt he just get it into his thick head, that she wasnt blaming him for anything ! All the time thinking negative.

The lecture or the straight forwardness of Khushi was needed. Especially when she shouted at him saying I LOVE YOU ! Do you want me in your life ? Yippeee ! Arnav said YES ! tears, tears rolling down

Living arrangement was the best part.. Guest room.. Hehe... Flatmates !..No your room.. We have shared bedroom, its a death do us apart thing.

Wow! Arnav told her where his bedroom was before attending a call...lol... A wife after all ! Whose calling you up at 2am ? No Dubai. They work at this hour...Khushi marveling at the details of the house reached his room. The Recliner was there exactly where it was in India.

Shock evident, obvious when she saw a wall full of her photographs in frames of different sizes and in the middle her photo of trying on an earring which she had in Surajkund craft mela, a close-up that too ! Now she was in shock thinking how long he had liked her ?

100% i havent commented properly but tried.


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Posted: 11 years ago
read 2 time chap
love it
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Posted: 11 years ago
I don't knw how many times I have read the update...but still it's not enough...it's beautiful( can't find the actual word to express it)...after the last update I was furious with Arnav ...but now u made me understand his stand ..I may not accept his reasons but can understand his situation ...and Khushi I guess has came a long way...becoming the wife Arnav needs...this is the best chapter in this story for me...and last part melted my heart- a wall full of her photo...can't ask for more...
But plz plz don't end it soon...just now the happy days started..plz give us some happy memory to savour ...

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