Making Khushi Mine II ~ (THREAD 27) - Page 112

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Posted: 11 years ago
Very nice chapter, it was good that Khushi took initiative to solve the issues btw them, while quarreling spouses may shout at each other or shove, but it was unfortunate that they were in the road and the accident happened. Arnav is always shying away from the discussion abt Rishabh, hope he believed Khushi's explanation. Always Khushi is running behind Arnav and pampering him, before this story ends I would like to see Arnav pampering her and make her feel precious and admired.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Such a beautiful chapter.Khushi barging in unannounced was the best thing she did.Arnav needed the jolt😆.But it was so beautifully described.As khushi says lack of communication is what led them here.The pictures of khushi was such a nice touch to the story.The mela picture should kickstart her mind into thinking about arnav's feelings towards her.Let's see aage aage hotha kya hain.Eagerly waiting to see how they will proceed further what beautiful changes are they going to encounter in each others presence.Once again very beautifully written.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow... That was a great chapter... Finally... They are talking... Communication is so imp in relationships... They were on the werge of divorce Cause of lack of communication... Great chapter with very satisfying talk between Arhi... Loved it like i love all your other Work... You are simply amazing... Thanks for the update and for the pm:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
what an awesome update...
lovely...
finally everything is going where it should be...
they are together:)
there patch up was mind blowing...
continue soon...
take care:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Another wonderful update... the whole chapter was mindblowing .. loved it the way you have written Arnav's emotion + khushi's anger +khushi's emotions + Arnav's anger...that was so well written👏 .. so happy that all misunderstandings have been cleared.. loved the way Khushi was strong and was very clear about whatever she said and what ever she wants... Now that they are ready to workout their relationship .. eagerly looking forward to read more... plz continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Now the time to talk about arnav's feeling... hope he'll try to voice it out...
Loved the update very much...

P.S. The visualisation of arnav's loft in NY is mesmerising. ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing update Loved it Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update...absolutely loved it...so happy that kushi fought for her love...arnav secrets are coming forward...loving it ...continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago

An exceptional chapter Vats by all accounts :)


It was a totally feel good chapter & I loved it to bits.


As always, what stood out again in this chapter like in all of them was the subtle nuances which just brings out that extra oomph in your writing... These subtle touches give your writing the X-factor. ;)


Salient among them were...


Arnav freezing at the sight of his charming wife showing up unexpectedly at the door was simply beautiful... Can't blame the poor guy if he thought he was hallucinating at that moment... His dreams generally never came true, but this once, it did... :)))


Arnav's near heart attack when he saw that Khushi had brought no luggage with her... Oblivious Khushi was clueless that her Arnavji's heart had almost stopped beating until she told him that Aman was sending it up... Phew! what a relief for Arnav knowing she wasn't just paying a visit to discuss their divorce rather had plans to stay with him at least for a while... :) ---- Very nicely done. 👏 👏


Arnav pocketing the small zip lock of marijuana, phew that was another close call... Luckily for him, his wifey is too much of an innocent to know what it was... Hope she never finds outs, or all hell will break lose for him... 😉


Him draining his drink discreetly at the sink... Would earn him no brownie points from wife dearest if she she saw how much he depended on that stuff...


Arnav wanting to hug her just once when he heard her chatter after a long drought... Any man who loves to hear his wife's inconsequential chatter, is undoubtedly one who is head over heals in love with her, period.


Arnav savoring the sight of his wife curiously taking in his apartment... What an incredible sight for sore eyes... Aww poor guy, he has every reason to feel overwhelmed at that moment... This really brought tears to my eyes...


Arnav closing his eyes in pain when Khushi asks him about her pronounced limp... The guy just died a thousand deaths again there for a moment... 😔


And last but not the least, Khushi gasping at the sight of her pictures on his wall, especially the large center portrait of her trying out earrings at the Surajkund Mela... That was such a revealing moment... 😳


Awesome chapter again Vats, but then nothing surprising about that ;)


Edited by pixiegirl - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome! This Khushi knows how to ensure transparency in her love for her man, the delusional character. Very brave, very mature and so deserving of a love returned in full measure.
Now that they are here away from the chaos in India, reassured of their feelings for each other, hope they use it to their advantage! Such a reassuring update...was so apprehensive that there will be a long separation for this couple!

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