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res.. 😊
unres... (i did dat for the first tym...yaay)
My first comment on your first, *gives a proudy smirk, in Randhir style* (as if I wrote those chap, uff heights of me...) 😲🤣🤣
At last u updated after barso baat...uff thnk god!!
Read the chap name...shit aap phirse alag kr doge Randhir Sanyukta ko...😭
(i understud the actual meaning later) 😉
Did i told you I jus love ur Randhir, such a real character he is..!!
Suspense at its peak...now you cnt take much tym to update...nahi toh kal aaj tak pe news aa jayega----
"Sansani- Gor se dekho iss insaan ko, jee haan iss bholi si shakal ke peeche haan ek shatir chehra hai, suspense thriller likhti hai...aur logon ko addict kr deti, issi ladki ke wajah se kch logon ne bechaini mein ki aatmahatya"
Ab aap hi soch lo... 🤣🤣 (dhaamki nhi tha)
Comin to the story...awesome tha!! The way you protrayd their situation was so fab...
Ok i want Ishita out of Randhir's life...but aapne toh maar hi dala usse...
And u killed her was ok, bt y made Sanyukta thnk dat she died for Randhir.😡...i know ab woh dur ho jayegi usse 😭😭😭 Ab toh cvs se kam nhi ho...haan bt unki tarah torture nhi krogi...aur jaldi update krogi na??? 😳😳
I love all the parts of this story, nd those titles and ur words above the chap are jus outstanding...!!
Its high tym...start writing novels...!!
Keep writing, nd update first 😉
*takes my gun, goes to shoot that reader, mission accomplished...like a boss😎 *
--lots of love, Sushmita
unres... (i did dat for the first tym...yaay)
My first comment on your first, *gives a proudy smirk, in Randhir style* (as if I wrote those chap, uff heights of me...) 😲🤣🤣
At last u updated after barso baat...uff thnk god!!
Read the chap name...shit aap phirse alag kr doge Randhir Sanyukta ko...😭
(i understud the actual meaning later) 😉
Did i told you I jus love ur Randhir, such a real character he is..!!
Suspense at its peak...now you cnt take much tym to update...nahi toh kal aaj tak pe news aa jayega----
"Sansani- Gor se dekho iss insaan ko, jee haan iss bholi si shakal ke peeche haan ek shatir chehra hai, suspense thriller likhti hai...aur logon ko addict kr deti, issi ladki ke wajah se kch logon ne bechaini mein ki aatmahatya"
Ab aap hi soch lo... 🤣🤣 (dhaamki nhi tha)
Comin to the story...awesome tha!! The way you protrayd their situation was so fab...
Ok i want Ishita out of Randhir's life...but aapne toh maar hi dala usse...
And u killed her was ok, bt y made Sanyukta thnk dat she died for Randhir.😡...i know ab woh dur ho jayegi usse 😭😭😭 Ab toh cvs se kam nhi ho...haan bt unki tarah torture nhi krogi...aur jaldi update krogi na??? 😳😳
I love all the parts of this story, nd those titles and ur words above the chap are jus outstanding...!!
Its high tym...start writing novels...!!
Keep writing, nd update first 😉
*takes my gun, goes to shoot that reader, mission accomplished...like a boss😎 *
--lots of love, Sushmita
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