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A/N: Hellooo!!!! *Waves frantically*

*Looks right, looks left*

*Sees no one*

*Waits for sometime*

*Sees a reader passing by and drags her over*

Me : Hey!! I know u...You are a reader of ACS, right?

Reader (baffled) : ACS?? What's that?

Me (rolling eyes) : 'Along Came She' of course...Arey, haven't u recognized me? I am federized2210...That FF writer!! Ring any bells?

Reader (realization dawning) : Ooohhh...You!!! Achha...woh wali ACS. What about that?

Me (taken aback) : What do u mean 'what about that'? I have my update ready...but where are all my readers?

Reader (laughing aloud) : Readers? Update? Seriously? U think that updating a 'murder mystery' after 'god-knows-how-many-days' will still keep anyone interested? Huh! Forget it!

Me (pouting) : But...but...I have typed a long chapter...don't u atleast want to glance at it? I was having exams u know *makes sad face*

Reader (considering) : Fine...may be I'll read...But what do I get in return?

Me (eyes narrowing) : Abbey...I am giving u the update...what else do u want?

Reader (pulling face) : Listen miss, don't think so highly of urself. The fact that we are still here should mean a lot to you! So stop with your ego! -_- And fine, we'll read, but don't expect too many comments and likes this time.

Me (mellowing) : Okie! Sorry I got late. Here you go *hands over the update*

*Reader takes the update and goes away saying "Be sure to update the next one on time*

*Me smirking like Vidushi and thinking "Update toh mein tab karungi jab aap logo ke sarey 'Res-ed' comments 'Un-res' ho jaye" *

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Shiya1206, Happy Birthday!!! This one's for u and anyone else whose birthday it might be today! God bless u :*

Excuse the typos! Read & Review

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CHAPTER 14 : The Departed

"Not all love stories are conventional. Sometimes you lose something to realize the value of some other thing. But each one has it's own lessons to teach!"

-Anuradha

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She stood rigid, her fists curled into balls and clutching his shirt. She didn't dare meet his eyes. She had experienced this proximity before as well, but it still never failed to unnerve her. Her face was flushed, ears burning hot and her legs felt like they would give away any second!

He had his right hand on her face, caressing slightly, drawing smooth patterns. His left hand was snaked around her waist, holding her in a tight embrace.

Sanyukta Agarwal and Randhir Shekhawat didn't need to speak to express what they felt. Their silence was the key to their soul.

He was the first one to step away, slowing letting go of her waist and taking a stride back. She raised her eyes and in a fleeting glance caught the expression on his face. His eyes held a certain hesitation...an anticipation...an unspoken plea.

"Randhir" her voice came out in a barely audible whisper. Her lips felt dry, her throat felt unused!

He took another step backwards. She suddenly felt alarmed. Guilt was one emotion she didn't want him to feel. Panicking, she caught his wrist and spoke, "Randhir...I..."

But she couldn't go on. What was she supposed to say? They had just shared their first kiss. What next? She was novice when it came to matters of romance. And to make it worse, he had a girlfriend who had no idea of any of this.

"Your dad will get well Sanyukta. Don't worry", he said, not looking at her.

And with a jolt Sanyukta remembered her father and reason she and Randhir were talking in the first place. The kiss had momentarily made her forget everything.

"Yeah" she uttered, "You know...For a second I...I forgot where we were...It was just you...me and you..."

He looked at her as she spoke those words, his eyes going soft. He took a step towards her, cupped her face gently in his hands and planted a soft kiss on her temple. He then left wordlessly.

Sanyukta looked on as he walked away, her hand unmindfully touching the spot where he had kissed her. And she smiled, a genuine smile, for the first time since her parents had left.

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After a lot of thought, Ishita decided that the best place to hide the book for the time-being would be an abandoned store or something...a place rarely visited by anyone! So she decided to place it the abadoned store near the lab. She carefully sidetracked everyone and proceeded towards the room. She was about to enter it when a voice called out, "Arey Ishita...What are u doing here?"

Ishita stopped dead in her tracks and quickly stuffed the book in her bag. She turned around to come face-to-face with Dr Dinesh Shekhawat. She heaved a sigh of relief.

"Ohh, hey uncle. I was just wondering around...Looking for spare instruments if any..."

Dr DS smiled and replied, "Spare instruments are in the lab. This room is abandoned.."

"Yeah uncle , i hadn't realized it!" said Ishita sheepishly, trying to act innocent.

Dr DS however didn't stick around and left soon. As soon as he left, Ishita took out the book and entered the room. She hid it carefully beneathe a shelf and left quietly. Unbeknownest to her, a pair of eyes followed her every move. And as soon as she left the store, Dr DS entered it, a frown on his face.

Dr DS looked around the store. He was sure Ishita was upto something. She definately had looked jittery when he confronted her. He scanned the room, looked in the shelves, behind the racks of instruments and in the drawers. That's when his eyes fell on a book under one of the shelves. He took it out carefully and opened the first page.

"Belongs to : Randhir Shekhawat" it read.

Dr DS turned the pages of the book and his mouth fell open.

"This is it...this is the book...The guide to the experiments..." he said to himself, "So it had been them...The Mittals...it had been the Mittals all along...Randhir must have had this book with him and Ishita must have stolen it from him...Mittals..."

He fished out his phone and quickly dialed a number. The call got picked on the third ring.

"It's the Mittals...Ishita has the book...she just hid it and it's with me now...This is bad...We have to do something quick and we have to keep Ishita away from Randhir..." said Dr DS.

The person at the other end replied something and Dr DS agreed saying, "Yes, sounds fullproof. I will see what I can do!"

And they hung up.

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Parth, Karan and Smriti were studying in one of the empty classrooms for their upcoming exams.

"Where are Ishi and RD?" Smriti asked.

"I don't know yaar...Ishi wasn't there in class as well...and Randhir...God knows where he has disappeared to!" came Karan's reply.

Parth smiled and said, "Maybe those two are romancing somewhere without us interfering..."

The other two laughed at this and Smriti said, "Typical of them to take off without informing any of us!"

As Karan and Smriti joked about Randhir and Ishita, Parth's thoughts drifted off to Sanyukta. He became a bit sad thinking about how she didn't even text him after their conversation in the canteen.

"Kahan kho gyaa?" Smriti called out to him and he snapped out of his reverie.

"Nothing...just thinking about exams!" he lied, "Listen guys, I will catch up with u both a bit later...Ok?"

The other two nodded and Karan said, "Randhir aur Ishi dikhe toh bol diyo hum yahan hain..."

Parth nodded and left.

He wanted to talk to Sanyukta and ask her if she was avoiding him.

He searched for Sanyukta and found her in the corridor, pacing towards the staff-lobby.

"Sanyukta.." he called out and she halted.

Sanyukta turned to see Parth and her face faltered slightly. Yet she managed a smile.

"Hey" she said.

"Sanyukta, are u avoiding me?" Parth asked bluntly.

Sanyukta was taken aback and replied, "No no...nothing like that. I am in a hurry. I have been called by Prof DS for some scholarship related work...I will see u later ok?"

Parth was disappointed, but hid it and smiled instead, "Ok! Go ahead! Catch u later"

Sanyukta hurried away. She reached the professor's lounge and peeped inside Dr DS's room. But the doctor wasn't there. She decided to wait for him and wondered why she had been sent for so urgently. She looked around the room and that's when her eyes fell on the professor's desk.

It was her book...The specimen copy that Randhir had given her.

"What the..." she muttered as she closed in on the desk and took a better look. She turned the pages and her doubt was cleared. It was her book!

"What in the seven hells is my book doing here?? How did it land up in DS sir's room?" she thought. And she decided that she must have left the book in the lab or something and it was found by the prof!

"Guess that's why he called me" she thought. She was about to take back the book when something stopped her. She wondered if she would be reprimanded for taking the book without permission. And so she decided to wait for the professor to arrive!

She kept waiting for half an hour, but the professor never showed. Finally, Sanyukta decided that she would visit Dr DS some other time and left his chamber.

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Ishita Mittal had just got off the phone with her parents, assuring them that the book was safely hidden and that she'ld visit them the next day and bring it over. She hung up and was about to put the phone away when it buzzed again. This time it was a text, from an anonymous number.

"We know you have the book. If you want answers then come to 'Sanjeevani Complex' within an hour."

Ishita Mittal's heart skipped a beat on seeing the text. The book!

She rushed towards the abadoned store and searched frantically. But the book was nowhere to be found!

"How? How did they know?" her brain couldn't process the situation. No one knew about the book. Not a soul.

"No...she knew...it's her book...Sanyukta...she must have realized the book is missing...she must have followed me here...and the text...OH MY GOD! Sanyukta...Sanyukta Agarwal...she is related to it all...No wonder she wants to get close to Randhir...She wants to know my secret and now she has it! " Ishita's thoughts ran wild. It all fitted perfectly - Sanyukta getting close to Randhir, Sanyukta going to Masjid Road, sanyukta having the book and now the book going MIA!

"What do I do?" she thought feeling helpless, "What am I going to tell mom and dad? Oh goddd...I will have to deal with this myself...I can't tell dad that I lost the book...No I won't do that. I will go to Sanjeevani Complex and see for myself as to who's behind it all. Sanyukta Agarwal, I will crush you!"

Ishita steeled herself. Her sub-consciousness told her that she should be scared, but her heart told her to go ahead. Deep in thought, she started to proceed towards the FMC exit when she bumped into someone.

"Ouch...What the-.." she paused as she came face-to-face with Randhir.

One look at his face was enough to tell her that he was guilty about something. His face was flushed and he was suddenly stammering.

"Is-ishita...Where were u? Everyone was worried..." he said.

Ishita rolled here eyes and replied, "I am not a kid Randhir. I was just busy with some stuff! So how's my hero?" she asked him smirking.

Randhir smiled, but it didn't reach his eyes. Ishita saw how fidgety he was.

Randhir, on the other hand, was feeling awkward after the whole Sanyukta-thing. He knew he should tell Ishita the truth. He knew he shouldn't drag the relationship anymore. He knew Ishita too, like him, was barely in it for time-pass. And yet, that didn't make it any easier.

He was about to tell her something when he got called.

Sayukta had just arrived there and said, "Randhir woh-...ohhh...ohh...M sorry..." she paused seeing the two of them.

Ishita was glaring at Sanyukta, her eyes filled with disgust and spite. Randhir however, didn't turn around. He was still looking at Ishita. Sanyukta took the cue and started leaving. But not before making a backward glance to see if Randhir turned or not. But he didn't.

"He's not your boyfriend Sanyu...Sure you kissed...But he still has to explain to Ishita...But...will he confess to her? What if he feels guilty now?" the thoughts clogged her cranium and made her heart squeeze! She willed herself to move forward and not turn back to watch the couple.

"Ishi..." Randhir started. Ishita, whose eyes were fixated on sanyukta's retreating figure, suddenly felt weak. She didn't want to hear what Randhir was about to say. She knew what he would say.

"Not today...please Randhir...Not today..." she pleaded.

He started at her in shock. How did she know? But the pained look on her face told him to keep mum and not break her heart. Not today atleast!

"Okay...shhh...Come here..." he said and pulled her into a hug, "What's wrong? U seem fatigued."

But Ishita didn't reply. She merely buried her face in his chest and stayed there for sometime. Randhir soothed her hair and back, while she remained unmoving.

After what seemed like ages, she finally withdrew herself, got to her toes and kissed his cheek.

Randhir smiled and gave her a piggy-nose! She giggled.

"There's my girl" he said, as she giggled some more.

"Randhir..."

"Hmm..."

"You are really special" she said and waved at him, "I will see you later ok?"

He smiled at her, a bright smile, "Okay!" he replied.

And Ishita walked out of the FMC campus and towards 'sanjeevani complex'.

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Sanyukta was leaning onto the railing when she saw Ishita walking out of the main gate. She observed her carefully and realized that Ishita was looking rather nervous. She was glancing here and there and kept checking her phone. Sanyukta, on an impulse, came downstairs and went towards the exit as well. To her utter surprise, she saw Ishita boarding an auto and going somewhere.

"What the...Ishita and auto? She never goes anywhere without her audi! This is strange..." thought Sanyukta. She went to the auto stand and asked a driver to follow Ishita's auto. Sanyukta was suddenly having a bad feeling about all this.

"What's this girl upto? Surely can't be anything good..."

After about 20 minutes, Ishita's auto halted outside of a huge complex that read "Sanjeevani".

Sanyukta too boarded off her auto and followed Ishita from a safe distance. Ishita entered the building. It looked like no one was inside. Sanyukta followed suit. The building was just like the warehouse in Masjid Road. It was a mini lab with skeletons and cadavers and scalpels and other chemicals. Sanyukta saw Ishita take a turn and disappear and took quick strides to catch up with her. As she neared the area that read "Level 1", Sanyukta could hear voices. She saw Ishita take the stairs and quietly tiptoe up. She waited till Ishita was on the 1st floor and followed her. Once on the first floor, Sanyukta saw an entire lab full of doctors, working away briskily.

"What is this place? And why is Ishita here?" thought sanyukta.

Ishita paused outside the lab and peeped inside. Sanyukta decided to hide behind a wall and watch what ishita was upto. Suddenly, ishita jerked and jumped backwards. Sanyukta's heartbeat paced wondering what was wrong.

She saw Ishita hiding behind a shelf and fiddling with her phone.

"Shit! No network" she heard Ishita murmer.

The words made Sanyukta panic. No network meant no connection with anyone. She quickly took out her own phone and found that there was no network coverage. Sanyukta stood rooted to the spot behind the wall, afraid of drawing attention and giving herself up!

As she hid, she saw a doctor come out of the lab. Sanyukta gasped. It was one of the same doctors whom she had seen in the warehouse and who had ran after her while she tried to escape.

"OH.MY.GOD...It's them...the murderers...Ishita...is she a part of this?" Sanyukta felt fear grip her. Where had she landed herself?

She remained glued to her spot as she watched ishita now come out of her hiding place and try to peek as to where the doctor was headed.

"You're here" a voice said.

Sanyukta froze. Ishita had been discovered. The man who had just spoken was the same doctor with a kind face whom Sanyukta had seen in the warehouse.

Ishita froze and looked petrified.

"Uncle...You?" she said, her throat dry.

The bespectacled doctor however didn't reply, but merely looked on with cold eyes, disdain and hatred etched in every lining of his visage.

And before sanyukta or Ishita could process anything, the doctor took out a revolver and fired a shot straight at Ishita. Sanyukta watched in horror as the bullet punctured Ishita's heart, blood spilling onto the floor while Ishita clutched her chest in shock, her eyes bulging, her face going pale. She stumbled backwards and hit the floor as she tried to breathe, but in vain. A few seconds of struggle and Ishita Mittal moved nomore. She lay in a pool of blood, becoming the first victim in Randhir's gang of friends who got involved in his past.

The doctor merely took her pulse to ensure her death and left the place.

"We are done here...Let's go..." he called out to the lab workers, all of whom immediately started scrambling out.

Sanyukta Agarwal still stood leaning on the wall where she had hidden. Ishita's limp form lay right before her eyes and there was nothing she could do about it.

"She gave up her life for Randhir...Or did she?" choked Sanyukta in utter disbelief.

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Love,

Anuradha.

Edited by federized2210 - 11 years ago
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I...S..H..I..T..A D.E.A.D???
Sorry wrong emoticon used.
It should be Ishita Dead? --> :'(
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*Tries to control uncontrollable flow of Hassiii*
*Fails miserably*
*Tries to sit properly*
*Fails miserably yet again*
*Decides to give the review while ROBLing*
I'm ok..I'm ok...I'm ok
But seriously Ishita umm..dead???????
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Ohh Myy God!!!
I know I'm behaving like a jerk ROFL-ing on someones death...but what do I do?
You know how much I loved Ishita...and her all of a sudden death has got me moonstruck 🤣
*Pinches herself*
*Slowly slowly breathes in*
*Slowly slowly breathes out*
*Tries Pranayam*
I'm Normal.
*Tries to write a sensible comment*
Phewww!
First of all tell me who that reader was?
Itni corruption waale atmosphere mein bhi bina bribe ke maan gaya??? Great!!! 🤣
Ohh but I liked this hillarious convo between you and reader. Very innovative of you.
Then title was. "SO APT" 🤣
Phirr Ishita yaad aa gayi
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Awesome title!
The quote was amazing as always.
Chapter::
I was actually wondering.. how you will write RD's reaction after this ahem ahem kiss bliss. ^_^
I'm so glad that you nailed this part. I absolutely loved it.
Whole chapter was captivating.
Without wasting any more time Let's come to my fav. part.
That was totally UNEXPECTED.
I read that part thrice (not kiddin) to digest the fact that you made someone kill Ishita? Hawww!!! :O :O :O
Btw Ishita is pakka dead???
I mean don't ya be like Ekta Kapoor. Dobara zinda mat karna usko.
Btw Was she innocent? If she was I'm sorry to use these ROFL icons :'(
I want next chapter really jaldiii
Please try to update soon.
Love,
Samaira ( I dunno why I write my name 🤣 Ab tak toh yaad ho gya hoga na mera naam?
PS- one last time...Is Ishita really dead??? 🤣

Edited by iraa_parsh - 11 years ago
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Ch 13 :

Ishita robbed that book! 😲
N she sneaked inside Sanyukta's room while they were asleep!
She is defo upto something big...
N the Mittals! Why is RD still with this bitch! 😡
Then...then...then...
That..omg...omg...that...
KISS!!!!!!
It still keeps playing in my mind... 😳
Superb update! 👏

Ch 14 :

Kitna wait karvaya! 😡 😭
But it was worth the wait! Really! 👍🏼
The title...n the end of the chapter... I couldn't even guess it would happen! I thought it was related to RD's past or maybe RD n Sanyu n but u just bowled it over again! Hats off seriously! Im so awestruck!
I really thought you would hafta think before you actually wrote down about Randhir's feelings n the way he would react after that kiss but that just went effortlessly! Kudos to u* 👏 👏
Dinesh Shekawat! I already mentioned in my comment in the previous chapter that though he is Rd's uncle he ain't that good man types he potrays to be! I told u hez the partial criminal or may be full idk about this part! 😎
N Sanyu as usual she followed Ishita!
N Ishita got killed????
KILLED!!???!!!!
I thought u loved her Anu di so much so that uski aur RD ki kiss karvadi woh bhi hum sabke saamne! 😡 Yeah I didn't forget it! 🤣 🤣
But u did kill her right???!!! I mean u made someone kill her! 🤣
You aren't going to use some medical tricks n bring her back to life are you?
Dont plz dont!!!!
But shez killed!?!? Its an undigestable fact for me! 🤣
Love the update to the core!
Enigmatic n beyond words! 👏
I really think u hafta hurry up with ur next Anu di! We are holding our breaths tight here! 😆

Love,
Nikitha 😃
Edited by barauni - 11 years ago
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this chapter left me flabbergastd.
I tho8 u wil b showing some lovy dovy thngs btwn sandhir.
N even i dnt want him to feel regret.
Ishi is childhud frnd r8?
Dats y she knws so much about randhir.
Ki bina bole hi sb smjh jati h. 🤣
generally it happns ki
when ppl r going, they dnt cum bck.
Bt whn i read that ds came thr.
It was hilarious. 🤣 🤣
m really nt gettng now kaun kis se mila hua h.
N ur a/n was awsm.
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dnt wry. Hume yad h acs...
We wont forgt this soon.
Reader bohot chalak tha.
Usne jan bujh k aisa kaha. Taki aap jaldi updates do. 🤣
smart...
N goshh
wat was dat?

ISHITA DEAD?
MAR GYI? O.o

Jisko humne, sbse bada kaanta smjha. Wo actually do din ki mehmaan nikli. 🤣
ok fine.
Yeah m feeling bad for her. N last time randhir ki baat bhi ni sun pai.
P.s only if she wasnt involvd.
Poor girl.
Sandhir ko sath me dkhne se pehle hi, chal basi.
Di...
Wat r u upto?
Kitne or surprises? O.o
agar dubara kisi ko marna ho toh parth ko utha lena.
Plz bhagwan k liye use utha lo.
Chalo atleast hum readers k liye hi. 🤣
i guess the man whom ishita told uncle was none othr than parth' s or karan's dad. Coz he cant b ds.
Kyuki sanyukta had already seen ds.
Now just fingers crossd.
Eagerly waiting for next update.
Thnk u so much anu di.
For dat copy paste wala thng. 🤣
it really means a lot.
Aur nhi likh skti, my hnds r paining. :P
n
yeah hv u noticd. M giving colourd cmmnts. 🤣
mob se forum code daal k seekh lia h maine. 🤣
N i knw u love blue colour.
Love ya
😳
*priyanka*

Edited by FaRzI_McP - 11 years ago
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Another Res. Promise, will unres for both chappies soon:*
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This time my A/N will have a message for all u people! Dekh lena! 🤣
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Anu di apka a/n aane se pehle, mai sare res unres kr dungi. Pakka. 🤣
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**RES**
**UNRES**

I wasn't Unressing at first, I was so angry that you didn't said that you are going to res on Page 60! See, Anu, Mein seedha bolne mein bishwaas rakti hoon, apun ko ab se pehle se hi information chahiye jab tum update karega, so that I can RES, at least on the same Page! Otherwise, tumko mehnga padega! *raising eybrow*Mind It!

I have an interesting post to make u read, do read it on Page 63!

And by the way, how were your exams, hope went well!!! You were born GENIUS!
Waise Anu, I have another reason to be angry on you, I was so desperately waiting for your chapter that I missed FIFA and watched later on Net! And then i came to know that you too were watching! This wasn't fair!!!

So, enough of my bak-bak! Finally coming to the update!!!
It was a Bang On!!!
After a romantic sequence, this update was needed in the Murder Mystery FF!!!

CHAPTER 14 : The Departed

"Not all love stories are conventional. Sometimes you lose something to realize the value of some other thing. But each one has it's own lessons to teach!"


The Title send a shiver down my spine! The Departed! Meaning someone going to another world! *finger crossed*
Those lines again made me think too deep! I pondered over those lines!!!
God knows, how you get these lines! I so envy you!

I was relieved that Randhir didn't left Sanyukta after the kiss immediately! He talked and even kissed her on her temple! This shows that there wasn't any guilt of kissing Sanyukta! :)

Dinesh Shekawat! WOW! Ishita ki pol khul gai *doing bhangra*
After a long time Anu, instead of hugging you, I am feeling to hug that Dr!
Finally someone knows that these Mittals aren't innocents!

Now this Parth is being too clingy to my Sanyukta!
Someone please tell him that SanDhir had just kissed!!!

Sanyukta was called by Dr.DS! He must have called her for returning that book! If Dr.DS called her, then where was he? Did that Ishita Mittal did something! Hopefully no!

What the! Ishita got a message! No one knows about the book except Dr.DS! Maybe now Ishita would be blackmailed!

Randhir didn't even glanced once at Sanyukta! Uff! He drives me crazy!
"Not today...please Randhir...Not today..." she pleaded.
So, Ishita is pleading! Never saw this sight of her!
She said he is really special! My Foot! Liar!😡

Oh God! Why on earth Sanyukta needs to take agenda of everything!
Things are so messy, and she is following Ishita, god, this girl would definitely make herself fall in trucks of troubles!

Those murders called Ishita! This is so interesting! Now, she will get a taste for her deeds! *moi with evil smile*😈

UNCLE! Is the murderer was Dr.DS? No, he can't be that! I was eager to hug him, I think I should better delete that line! :P

The bespectacled doctor however didn't reply, but merely looked on with cold eyes, disdain and hatred etched in every lining of his visage.
Anu! You can describe such small things so perfectly!

What The F***!!! Ishita Mittal got murdered! She was the one who DEPARTED!No doubt, I loathed her so much, but I would have never wanted that! She is effing dead! I hated her, but imagining that she is dead!I am literally shivered!

This all was seen by Sanyukta! Maybe things would go more crazy and messy for SanDhir Now!!!
Randhir would be now shattered! And, maybe it would affect SanDhir!
Ufff! this is called a Suspense Thriller!!! Anu, you did it Man! Thumbs Up For You!👍🏼 You are going too good!!! 👏
She lay in a pool of blood, becoming the first victim in Randhir's gang of friends who got involved in his past.
This Line appealed a lottt! This line has a devil sensation indeed!

Anu, you won't believe I am all alone in my room, and I am thinking if someone is staring at me!!! Yaar, tune toh mujhey darra ke rakh diya!!!😕 Me chanting Gayatri Mantra Now! From now on, no reading at nights, would read and comment in Morning only!!!*promise*

Anu, you are heading in a right direction! I think the next update would take time, as you said you won't update till everyone UNRES, which seems kinda time-taking! But still, I would like to read the Chapter soon!!!

With Tons Of Love
Sanju❤️

Edited by SweetSassy - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Looking at the clock...11.00...11.05...11.10... 'Argh..mayb the clock stopped working...😕'
12.00...'Anu di offline... 😭Did Anu di sleep after the tiring exams...? No she won't do that... She had told that she would update...'
12.15 'Maybe she won't do it today..She didn't even accept my buddy request???😭 '
1.30 'I should sleep now.. Mom will kill u nams...🤢 mmm... Will wait till 2 am😊'
1.37 'New pm.. Chapter updated.. Really ??? yahooo...🥳'

Poor Ishi.. Felt sorry for her when Randhir was about to break up with her...Ishi died???😲 For Randhir? She was involved in their murder? Poor Sanyu... Eye witness.. Ab kya hoga???
As usual it was awesome👏 Loved it... 😃
When will u update the next chapter?? Waiting eagerly... Please update asap... 😃
Love u di...❤️
Edited by namsmk - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
RES
moi late 😆
I donno how many others are waiting for me to unres in their works🤣 and i pity them that i chose YOU to unres first🤣🤣
Woh kya hai na.. Padhne ke baad moi bhi Sam ki tarah 'flow mein likhne' ke mood mein aa gayi🤣 Lagta hai aaj record todke rahungi🤣
ishwar ki kripa se saare unres kar dungi🤣🤣
STATUTORY WARNING: Abse i want QUICK updates. NO BAHANA🤣 Inn do hafto mein bhar do updates se. Pleash. AFter 2 weeks moi college will start and then ill be busy with the studies😭
Eh wait! Why am i talking about studies?🤣🤣
*Jumps back to the update* *Safe landing*🤣
Ya.. SO till now, for so many days i was chipkooed to the kiss.
And now, a NEW update. With new Mysteries.
Pehli wali toh solve kari nai, bheje mein aur confusion daal diya🤣
And then...
Wait, did you just KILL Ishita?
*Daily soap Dramatic tune*
*Kya?*
*Kya?*
*Kya?*
so this was that "Ill-Leave-you-gasping-at-the-end" wala ending?
This is serious yaar.🤣 aise kaise maar diya🤣 hum RTI file karenge🤣
On the funnier side[ vaise pehle wala bhi mazak hee tha🤣🤣]
Its good she's gone🤣 no kebab mein haddi-ness🤣
Parth ka bhi yehi haal hoga kya?🤣
Vaise meri memory itti bhi achhi noi hai🤣 so i guess ive to read previous chaps again🤣 to get thru this mystery part🤣 but as u know🤣 moi too lazy🤣🤣
Aha- Im feeling fresh now.
Itti subeh subeh itte saare rollies - What a Combination!🤣🤣
Thankyou re🤣

Love,
Annie.🤣🤣🤣

PS- Kuchh zyada hee likh diya 'flow' mein🤣🤣
Edited by angel_anisha - 11 years ago

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