ArSh TS ~ 'Brutal Hearts' ~ Last Part - Pg 16

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harshiakshi

@harshiakshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#91

unres

im sho sho sholly for commenting,late

firsltly i was sp proud of shilpa, she is such a strong human bieng 😊

i liked the fact that riddhima cared for her

armaan ko akal aayi tootne -phootne ke baad shilpa ke paas pahuncha😆

n aww she so loved him so much that she forgets anything😳 and ohh the way he make her understand

I LOVE U oi di

ab jaldi jaldi baaki sab bhi update karo😆

m waiting😡 from a long time

Edited by harshiakshi - 11 years ago

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Shweta Gupta

@ll_megha_ll

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#92

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Unres---

First sorry for unresing my comment late..

Now come to update...

And as usual it's awesome, blossom, amazing, fantastic, fabulous, super duper, block buster, rocking, outstanding, marvelous, tempting, breathtaking, freaking and mind blowing update dear...

Just loved it..

It's just marvelous...

I am just speechless...

You wrote each and every emotions very beautifully...

Sahi kahawat hain hindi main "sabra ka fal hamesha meetha hota hain"

Seriously its amazing update...

Tumhe mera shashtang dandwat pranam...

Beautiful..

Each and every shilpa emotions you wrote awesome...

So shilpa reached her house and arman called her and even message her but she didn't respond...

So riddhima also called her and concerns for her..

Lovely...

So arman reached shlipa house but he have many wonds...

Loved arsh talk and shilpa outburst...

Loved the way how shilpa stand strong for herself..

Loved arman dialogue that he didn't own riddhima to explain himself in front of him...

Finally arsh confession...

You wrote each and everything beautifully...

And there kiss also.

Thanks for giving us such a wonderful shot..

I really gona miss this..

Thanks for the pm..

P.S.-you rock sweetheart!!!...

Edited by ll_megha_ll - 11 years ago

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Shweta Gupta

@ll_megha_ll

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Posted: 11 years ago

#93

today is satuday..

please update this

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Appu

@A.Kh_20

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#94

Chalo koi ni.. Good night!!:)

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Mrinalini

@minakrish

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+ 46

Posted: 11 years ago

#95

Okay. 😳 I'm so sorry for the super late comments. I just didn't get the time for reading my PMs.

Coming to the last chapter. It was beyond brilliant. Shilpa's feelings and her swearing to herself that she would be cold to Armaan and think that he is non-existent, ignoring his calls and texts was obvious. Any girl seeing the scene that she saw in the fire escape would have broken her to no extent.

She expected Armaan to defend himself in front of Riddhima which he did not and that's what hurt her.

And coming to Mr. Armaan Mallik. The most confused soul I have ever come across! 😕 He is a complete wacko in the head. Seeing him at her door step in such a condition would have surely given her a shocker. What if something happened to him? 😡

Shilpa's allegations on Armaan were fantastic. I loved the sherni power! ❤️ And Armaan and his explanations! 👏 Indeed he does not owe any explanations to Riddhima. 😳

Yay! A Happy Ending with a hot kiss! ❤️

Achha, ek request hai. Please could you write a chhotu sa part of Riddhima's reaction to see them making out in the fire escape post confession. 😳 *pretty please* batting eyelashes

Edited by -Mrinalini- - 11 years ago

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Nikki

@desire_nikki

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#96

Wow...! wonderful...!!

It was amazing..!!

& Armaan moved on m soo happy..! he deserved to be happy..!!

Awsumm concept..!]do pm me for all ur works di..!

i would love to read ur ff..!

Thanks.!

take care

Edited by desire_nikki - 11 years ago

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manjiri

@m4manju

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Posted: 11 years ago

#97

nice update...i loved shilpa's character here...she was show so strong and even armaan's feelings particularly in this update were so clear for her.. loved how he really loved her, cared for her and made it sure to let her know this (minus the accident part) 😳😛 😆 do update other stories asap