Saffron Fields #4(Arshi FF)/// Index & link to next thread on pg 1 - Page 52

the words, ambiance were so beautifully set.

Their yearning for each other...the wordless conversation...everything was beautiful

The loss of child is something unimaginable ...i cant fathom it !

Hope...with khushi , Arnav has the anchor to

lean on

Coming to the update it was brilliant. The way you describe arnav and Khushi's pain is remarkable.

Both of them are fighting their demons.

What ever happen with his son is really very sad that is why he become like this when Khushi first saw him. But after meeting Khushi something change in him. But he should be very honest about revealing every thing about his past life including his son. Due to which Khushi is feeling more bad about herself. This points really hurts me. But lot of his past life is yet to come and I want to know if he really loves lavanya or not if yes then where that love lost and what is with Khushi? If lavanya is not a bad woman then I will feel more sad about every one. And I really don't want Khushi to be second in his love life. I love Khushi way too much. And she deserve every thing.

Even after this Khushi can't stop her self from falling for him yet again. She started listening his silence.

She lost light in her eyes and colour in her life. I cried seeing her like this. Poor girl trying every thing so that she don't forget she has to maintain distance from him. But that too back fire her and she reach him to comfort him after she asked about his son.

The little message exchange between them was so sweet. But I don't know why I am not enjoying their togetherness. May be till lavanya's chapter is not cleared from his life, I will keep on feeling like this.

But there is no doubt that you wrote every thing so beaututifully. Thanks for wonderful chapter and pm.

loved it

thanks for the pm