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ASRphanki

@ASRphanki

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#511

extremely beautiful chapter :)

the words, ambiance were so beautifully set.

Their yearning for each other...the wordless conversation...everything was beautiful

The loss of child is something unimaginable ...i cant fathom it !

Hope...with khushi , Arnav has the anchor to

lean on

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incandescent

@incandescent

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#512

Hi Jenny,

Sorry for not commenting for the last 2-3 chapters.

Been very busy since the last few weeks...and I also have a sprained wrist. Will catch up with the updates and comment soon.

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sunitikapoor

@sunitikapoor

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#513

Beautiful chapter Jenny...as always...it is indeed a long chapter which has so many emotions...you have penned very well all his sorrows...loved the texting conversation between Arnav and Khushi...last one is really good...when he wrote...accidentally called you ...I am fine...so many emotions are there in his text. I am so happy, he back in Kashmir...when are going to hear his story. Waiting dear.

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Archna

@archnahardik123

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#514

I am back again.

Coming to the update it was brilliant. The way you describe arnav and Khushi's pain is remarkable.

Both of them are fighting their demons.

What ever happen with his son is really very sad that is why he become like this when Khushi first saw him. But after meeting Khushi something change in him. But he should be very honest about revealing every thing about his past life including his son. Due to which Khushi is feeling more bad about herself. This points really hurts me. But lot of his past life is yet to come and I want to know if he really loves lavanya or not if yes then where that love lost and what is with Khushi? If lavanya is not a bad woman then I will feel more sad about every one. And I really don't want Khushi to be second in his love life. I love Khushi way too much. And she deserve every thing.

Even after this Khushi can't stop her self from falling for him yet again. She started listening his silence.

She lost light in her eyes and colour in her life. I cried seeing her like this. Poor girl trying every thing so that she don't forget she has to maintain distance from him. But that too back fire her and she reach him to comfort him after she asked about his son.

The little message exchange between them was so sweet. But I don't know why I am not enjoying their togetherness. May be till lavanya's chapter is not cleared from his life, I will keep on feeling like this.

But there is no doubt that you wrote every thing so beaututifully. Thanks for wonderful chapter and pm.

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Archna

@archnahardik123

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#515

But jenny why you always bring teaser at the end it's feel like the actual chapter is yet to come. Please don't do like this. Now again I have to wait for whole week to read what happen when they meet again.

Edited by archnahardik123 - 11 years ago

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sulu_123

@sulu_123

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#516

Nice update.

The text messages between arnav & Khushi were so touching... Conveyed much more than the actual words.

They are really cued on to each other.

Now that Arnav is back , wish they bot have a heart to heart talk where Arnav unburdens himself and shares his past with her. Khsushi need to know about his relationship with LA, why it failed .

Ofcourse so far , you have kept this as a suspense. Only thing we know is that La is selfish and cunning. (cud deduce that from arnav's mail to her).

As it is, La is going to give Arnav a diffi time and will not agree for the divorce. So with Arnav not wanting to make it messy, he is going to have a tough and trying time ahead. I hope Khushi is there to provide moral support. But if the divorce drags, khushi will suffer too.

Either way, both ARnav & khusi are in for a testing time ahead, I guess.

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KBS

@oKBSo

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#517

My heart went away for Lavanya

I love Arnav and Khushi convo

do update soonish

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HIPKKND

@HIPKKND

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#518

You are leaving us with a cliffhanger again..not fair!...waiting for the next update...so beautifully written..

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Happytwinkle

@Happytwinkle

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#519

wonderful part

loved it

thanks for the pm

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Jessie

@jessjazz

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#520

Their communication via sms is so cute... and a few words conveys a lot.

So now, officially, 18 months separation will put him back in the single status... but we still don't know why they separated and how the son died! Sorry... being a pest here.

Her one question brought about so much grief... hai.