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seeta naipaul

@seeta_naips

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Posted: 11 years ago

#481

just read the last 2 updates

did Aarav die?

what went wrong in La and Arnav marriage to make La so b*t*hy and manipulative and Arnav with a don't hate her but certainly don't love her attitude?

ah so Arnav is back to Kashmir, hope he tells Khushi all about his past

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preethi.saseeda

@preethi.saseeda

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#482

Hey Jen, that was a very very emotional update. You had done complete justice is bringing out the depth of grief that the situation demanded there. I would like to say a lot here but my teary eyes has just not blurred my vision but my brains too. When I finished reading the update, I felt numb. There is no exaggeration here. The child's loss was not a surprise to me. There were hints all along. I knew that the man was devastated inside out and he was not just a victim of a failed marriage. I was prepared, yet you failed me once again. My preparation to keep a strong heart dint have a chance with the way you had written this out. It was soulfully touching and heart wrenching.

That was a very hopeful texting session between Dr Raizada and Dr Gupta. I have had my doubts for these people. I had felt that things were being rushed up there with talks of love. They had not known anything about each other and he was obviously going through a very rough patch in his life. So when we had her take the first step, I was not sure if that was realistic. But with these last two chapters, we were able to relate completely with what this women has been going through ever since she laid her eyes on him. Your writing just leaves me no choice but to believe in concept of soulmates where words might fail but the hearts would have communicated what they wanted to in its own sweet way.

I am not judging Lavanya. I am sure there is more to her side and I prefer waiting to know her more rather than jumping into analysations now. She is equally broken and lost.

I loved your take on setting your love free. It was beautiful and a more thoughtful saying than the original version.

Loved it Jen.

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Arshi67

@Arshi67

Sparkler

+ 13

Posted: 11 years ago

#483

Am loving the subtlety of this story.

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IPK007

@IPK007

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#484

Originally posted by: canapoem
Jenny, when will Arnav's past come into picture? This suspense is literally killing!!!!

Everything will be out in the open in the next update, setting the stage for the next phase of the story.

Loving your thoughtful analyses :)

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kushikumari

@kushikumari

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#485

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MAS_5253

@MAS_5253

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#486

Emotional yaa but brilliantly written loved it ..
P.s hey jenny i know m leavin short comments but dear i rwad ur update but m so caught up wid my lil 1 dat i lytrally need to squeeze tym to cmmnt sumtyms i cmmnt aft 1-2 updates butdat doesnt mean idnt read it.. I do read n i love ur story
Thanx for d pm