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anjs

@anjs

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#401

picture is getting clearer...his son is no more...thats for sure...but is he holding LA responsible for it...well, that wud be sad and definitely put him in the wrong, in that case Khushi wud never go to him, i feel...

maybe even if LA is responsible, still, she has also lost her son, so that automatically reduces the blame, i feel...

i was expecting something like one-sided love from LA and forcefully marrying Arnav, a lill crap maybe, but still makes it easier to accept Arnav-Khushi love story...but in such a story where the enstranged wife isnt at fault, wont it make their love wrong...

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DDC1

@DDC1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#402

OH GOD! Jenny!
Midway through part 12 as things added up, I was going to say "DONT YOU DARE TO DO ANYTHING TO HIS BABY"

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mayurisb80

@mayurisb80

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#403

that was enchanting...i loved how they communicate without talking out loud..in spite of the distance how they understand their pain ...some losses bring you together and some drive you too a distance that can never be bridged...i guess lavanya and Arnav fall in to the latter ..but i doubt if it was the loss alone that drove them apart..

and the song is one of my very favorite...

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jg12

@jg12

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Posted: 11 years ago

#404

The way you have describes Arnav's pain is so real and so so sad . Oh the loss of a child - how can one recover from that ! But hope there is a twist somewhere & his son is fine .

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anu1017

@anu1017

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#405

Awesome update as usual Jenny!!!

Losing a child is never easy, can't even imagine what Lavanya must be going through!!! Please continue soon!!!

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NainaAlex

@NainaAlex

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#406

beautiful update
love the way u write

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rulama

@rulama

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#407

Super update Jenny!

Loved the way you have brought Arnav-Khushi reunion and the silence of Arnav that Khushi understands!

Without any confirmation verbally, she understands his turmoil.

Hum jaante hai!

So Aarav is no more and I wonder what happened!

Loved the update.

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KrishVeer

@KrishVeer

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#408

Did u know that I was eagerly waiting for this update? And now I can't even imagine how I would spend seven more days waiting for the next chapter, because to be honest, it would be pure torture😔

Update was a combination of joy and sorrow, which resulted in me being in tears due to both those emotions😊

The messages that were exchanged between Arnav and Khushi brought a genuine smile on my face. The level of understanding both share is amazing, and the fact that they truly behave like mature adults really impresses me beyond words. I must say, these two characters are much loved by me right now, and the credit goes to you for doing an excellent job in penning them as strong characters even with their teeny tiny flaws😃

I felt really bad when Arnav was reminded of his son due to the Halloween celebrations. It pinched my heart seeing the emotional turmoil he was going through at that particular moment. But what relieved me was the fact that he sought solace by dialing Khushi. And Khushi even without any exchange of words realizing that something was wrong was quite amazing😳

The words about saffron flowers unfurling during full moon nights made my heart yearn to actually experience it. I really wish if I could witness it one day

The last part was the most loved part of the whole update due to obvious reasons of course. The Herculean effort Khushi put in order to maintain distance from Arnav was left futile due to the question she forwards herself. And what followed by was so beautiful, even though it was a moment of sharing grief. You are truly amazing Jenny, and I don't think words would be enough to appreciate your this piece of work😊

I really loved the update a lot❤️

Thanks for sharing this beautiful update with us, and also for making sure that you stcik to your schedule no matter what🤗

Eagerly waiting for the next chapter

If possible can you please try squeeze in the next update a bit earlier😉

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1likeNoOther

@1likeNoOther

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Posted: 11 years ago

#409

The beginning part with Arnav was written so we ll. I could totally see the pictures in my head. 👏 Also loved the way you showed the separation and how slowly it it closed before finally ending with that hug in saffron fields on a moonlit night with those blooming flowers

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J P

@TwilightStar_JP

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#410

Here I kept scrolling down thinking the teaser would be here no it would be here and at last when I actually sight it I realize its at the fag end of the update! And what eh way to end it...as usual leaving us at the edge and wanting more of it...Jen oh Jen ..sigh..

Now to the update it was marvelous just wonderful man...how they connect to each other..its still got the IPK effect intact.. Lovely man...

And the way you expressed both their situations without being biased is just too good you definitely need an applause there..Kudos lady!!

Silent night ..love in the air emotions unleased hearts conveyed superb man...

Bliss man !

Cannot wait for the next one!!

Cheers