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meera30

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Posted: 11 years ago

#381

Yes!

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What I said here doesn't seem right anymore. So shifting that comment here

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There are very few things in life that can be worse than what Arnav and Lavanya have faced. The loss of a child is irreparable. And while there is so much emotion in the rest of the chapter, love even, for me personally - everything pales in comparison. So I will say nothing escept send up a prayer for Aarav and...

This one is for all those who have lost a piece of their hearts. God bless them with every joy, every ouce of strength, faith and love there is to live in the wake of that loss.

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vgedin

@vgedin

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Posted: 11 years ago

#382

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I cannot imagine how much (and Lavanya!) must be suffering.. the loss of a child? Their little baby? *Shudder* No one deserves to see such days. No one at all.

Their turmoil, the internal conflict over simple texts - to reply or not to reply: that is is question 😛 It was so beautifully narrated, Jenny. A fight between their feelings and morality, between the wish to reach out to their love and doing the right thing.. sigh. But then when you start to understand what the other says in his/her silence.. we know there is love 😳

But I am glad he is back in the Saffron fields! Yay! Now I am waiting for them to be amidst the blooming saffron flowers on a moonlit night 😃

Beautiful update :)

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sban

@sban

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Posted: 11 years ago

#383

wow.. looking forward to it :)

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kushiarnav1

@kushiarnav1

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#384

lovely chapter...soo many emotions,oh jenny its indeed a very long chapter...the way u written arnavs grief👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏...bravo...

liked the texting conversation between arnav and kushi , very short but unique...they understand each other completely with out talking...kushi she is fully in love with arnav and arnav also the same...

so arnav is back to kashmir...hoping htis time kushi will listen to arnav about his marriage...

i want to say this u have an art of writng about natural beauty..well written about saffron fields...

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1chilly

@1chilly

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Posted: 11 years ago

#385

I'd love to be there in the Saffron fields on a moonlit night.

How beautiful the scene must be!

Now I can't wait to have Arnav and Khushi together in this setting.

Arnav is back in Kashmir.

And Khushi can feel his presence.

If this isn't love, what is?

I do he now Arnav tells her story and Khushi listens to him.

She needs to know what really happened between Arnav and Lavanya and what happened to Aarav.

Wonderful update, as ever.

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shutter

@shutter

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Posted: 11 years ago

#386

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The pain that Arnav and Lavanya had to go through was tragic and no one should go through that trauma, ever!!!!!

But, other than the overwhelming pain at their loss, I was quite mesmerised by the imagery you created Jen!!!! I was literally enraptured by the colors and the season!!!! Sorry for digressing but what to do, the beauty of the tale had me looking past the sadness and finding happiness at seeing Arnav by the lakeside with Khushi...

Ohh... Now that the saffron fields are in full bloom and Arnav is also in Kashmir, we can expect some romance in the valley, right?????😉

P.S: Apologies for the super late Unres!!!!!

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Arnima

@Eternalallure

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Posted: 11 years ago

#387

Beautiful update, Jenny...👏

The contrasting emotions, Khushi's war between her innate values and beliefs and the urge to throw caution to the winds and to reach out to her love, Arnav's grief and vulnerability, the unadulterated pain of losing a child and the gaping void left in the wake- perfectly portrayed.

But I am glad Dr. Raizada is back in the Kashmir valley. It's high time the saffron fields saw some romance in a moonlit night between the two love-struck souls...😳

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Polkadots78

@Polkadots78

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Posted: 11 years ago

#388

Sense and Sensibility... I like that!!

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ranogill

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Posted: 11 years ago

#389

what a connection...without telling she understood that his son no more ...want to read more about his past ...just can not wait for this story to continue

Edited by ranogill - 11 years ago