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A_BA

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Posted: 11 years ago

#281

Jenny, you are weaving an absolutely brilliant story with twists and turns that are making me anxious with how the story is going to unfold.

It was absolutely heartbreaking to read about Khushi's plight after finding out about Arnav's marriage. And I commend her about having the willpower to stay away and for sticking with her moral conscience. However, I'm a little scared of what's going to happen next considering that fact that Arnav is still married and this divorce process definitely doesn't seem like it will end quickly. You mentioned that you will try something different with this story - is it that Khushi will pursue this relationship with a still-married Arnav??

The equation between Arnav and Lavanya seems interesting. There's obviously a lot of deep emotions for both of them, and I'm looking forward to finding out how things went so wrong. I can only guess that something happened to their child and because of which, the two parents drifted away?? Again, I'm looking forward to finding out.

As usual, your description of the setting of the story is absolutely brilliant and so dreamy - really wish to be able to visit Kashmir one day in my life!!

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.ButterCup.

@.ButterCup.

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#282

khushi jab tum mere pas hoti ho toh tumhare dil ki dharkno ki tarah mere dil ki dharknein bhi tezz ho jati hain...or hamare dil ki dharknein ekk ho jati hain...Awesome teaer.. :)) can't wait to read this chapter..

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MoonlightAura

@MoonlightAura

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#283

Hello dear Author,

I have been reading this story for a while now and its high time I comment on it. You do bring about tangled human emotions to forefront. A third woman angle are not the stories I enjoy, I would not like to touch the topic with a ten footed pole, but your stories compel me to keep going, keep bringing me back here. It would have been so easy to dismiss this third woman if she was lacking in some way, but you have given us just characters that make us sympathise with them too.

I do not know where this story is heading, especially now that you have introduced a kid in the mix. He may me no more, the reason for strain on Arnav's face. Its nice the way you are showing us the jumble of emotions Khushi is going through. If she would have come to know his past in a different way, her reactions would have been different. Now that she is discovering slowly each new faucet of his past slowly and that too not completely revealed by him to her is very natural for her to be on her guard.

I have read your other stories too, on a funny side -> Does Arnav needs to be married to woman other than Khushi at the beginning, is it a prerequisite condition of yours? This is a third story where the same condition is being applied.. Generally these tangled emotions take me from the good old MBs to 'Danielle Steel' There was this book of hers long back - 'Lone Eagle' though it was correct on many fronts, I could not assimilate few facts. Another attractive feature of your writing style is the way you recreate whole environment, be it a late era story, pre independence Bengal or our beautiful north. I really enjoy these parts. Yours 'A Bride with a Doll' will always remain one of my favourites..

Do continue with this exquisite story, Thanking you for your PMs and providing us with such beautiful poignant stories...

Take Care

regards,

MoonlightAura

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sulu_123

@sulu_123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#284

Very intriguing chapter Jenny ! My curiosity is at its peak.

I mean, I always expected Lavanya to be beautiful , but here she sounded almost vicious. What made her change ? Or was she always like this ? Apparently, from ARnav's email, it seems she isn't a very straightforward person and has arm twisted him a great deal in their relation.

Well,,, just very very anxious to know more...

As for Khushi..poor thing. She is really weighed down by her conflicting, confusing thoughts and emotions...

Waiting for the next update...

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IPK007

@IPK007

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#285

Originally posted by: MoonlightAura
Hello dear Author,
I have been reading this story for a while now and its high time I comment on it. You do bring about tangled human emotions to forefront. A third woman angle are not the stories I enjoy, I would not like to touch the topic with a ten footed pole, but your stories compel me to keep going, keep bringing me back here. It would have been so easy to dismiss this third woman if she was lacking in some way, but you have given us just characters that make us sympathise with them too.

I do not know where this story is heading, especially now that you have introduced a kid in the mix. He may me no more, the reason for strain on Arnav's face. Its nice the way you are showing us the jumble of emotions Khushi is going through. If she would have come to know his past in a different way, her reactions would have been different. Now that she is discovering slowly each new faucet of his past slowly and that too not completely revealed by him to her is very natural for her to be on her guard.

I have read your other stories too, on a funny side -> Does Arnav needs to be married to woman other than Khushi at the beginning, is it a prerequisite condition of yours? This is a third story where the same condition is being applied.. Generally these tangled emotions take me from the good old MBs to 'Danielle Steel' There was this book of hers long back - 'Lone Eagle' though it was correct on many fronts, I could not assimilate few facts. Another attractive feature of your writing style is the way you recreate whole environment, be it a late era story, pre independence Bengal or our beautiful north. I really enjoy these parts. Yours 'A Bride with a Doll' will always remain one of my favourites..

Do continue with this exquisite story, Thanking you for your PMs and providing us with such beautiful poignant stories...

Take Care

regards,

MoonlightAura

Thanks for being 'silent no more'...😃

Truly appreciate your generous feedback !

Have read a couple of books by DS, but not the one you mentioned.

And..man, you're right...TKADN, Intoxication, TBWAD...Arnavs had been married before...!! And in ALS...when Arnav wasn't, Khushi was...

Would you believe me if I say, I've only just realized it !!

As one of my readers put it, (excuse my language), why do my stories always have to have some kind of mindf*ckery?😳

I really don't know..!!

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rulama

@rulama

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#286

Lovely teaser.

The song says quite a bit even though it says don't say anything!

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faffy

@faffy

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#287

Your stories are so 'unbelievably' real that they often give me goosebumps! They are alive and pulsating - one can sense and feel every character, every emotion, every event - so much so that the immersed reader forgets reality from fiction!

The Arnav and Khushi you have created in Saffron Fields are irresistibly complex and captivating...no wonder we are hooked!