Saffron Fields #4(Arshi FF)/// Index & link to next thread on pg 1 - Page 20

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Posted: 11 years ago
U asked about chapter length ...so, the thing is length is okay, but problem is us...we too greedy, won't be satisfied with any length...so ya ...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: IPK007



Oh, they were just lines added in the end as Arnav's POV (instead of a song) I just make it clear in the update..:)

Sorry for the confusion
😕


Then whose message brought a smile on his lips ?

"he saw who it was from, and a tiny smile gradually curved his lips,
dispelling some of the shadows in his eyes..."
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Posted: 11 years ago
So... Jenny..
What do we have in this update...
First... That Khushi is struggling to get in terms with Arnav being married and she gets another shock of he having a kid with his wife...
Poor Khushi imagined Lavanya to be so many things...but found her warm n pretty...ofcourse in photoes...

My question.. What happened to the Kid...? Is he not alive...? Was that incident reason for the break up of Lavanya n Arnav...?

Lavanya undergoing some therapy ... Is it for DEPRESSION..?.looks like so..

My guess... Did Lavanya play some trick to make Arnav believe to be her Baby's father n marry her n later Arnav found out the truth... Hence he believes her to play games n be difficult in signing up DIVORCE... ,

My second Question... I am scared of the guessing games Khushi's mind is playing..( of course she is behaving mature enough n not giving into it...but for how long..?) will she ask details about Arnav's married life n about Lavanya a wrong person...? As in Astha who doesn't know the full truth..?

I read someone asking you the FLAWS of ur Charecters n u said Khushi trusts easily... Now who will she trust so easily that she shouldn't...?

I wish she should have ATLEAST heard Arnavs side of story even if she didnot want to judge..

My last question... Looks like Arnavs divorce is going to take long battle...will Khushi's parents n her wait till then..?
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb update...
khushi's mind totally confused clouded with emotion...
arnav have a son...😲
already lost it...sad,...
this lavanya what want?
update soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Jenny the master story teller loved every bit of the update. Life is full of greys and no one is evil or bad, it is sad when things don't work out. Makes me wonder are there truly Soulmates out there? what would one do if you meet the other person later in life. I am not a proponent of extra marital affairs but what if that person u thought was the one is not really the one ...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Kishmish



Then whose message brought a smile on his lips ?

"he saw who it was from, and a tiny smile gradually curved his lips,
dispelling some of the shadows in his eyes..."



He has just seen that he has a text from Khushi, hasn't read it yet.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jyothim78

So... Jenny..

What do we have in this update...
First... That Khushi is struggling to get in terms with Arnav being married and she gets another shock of he having a kid with his wife...
Poor Khushi imagined Lavanya to be so many things...but found her warm n pretty...ofcourse in photoes...

My question.. What happened to the Kid...? Is he not alive...? Was that incident reason for the break up of Lavanya n Arnav...?

Lavanya undergoing some therapy ... Is it for DEPRESSION..?.looks like so..

My guess... Did Lavanya play some trick to make Arnav believe to be her Baby's father n marry her n later Arnav found out the truth... Hence he believes her to play games n be difficult in signing up DIVORCE... ,

My second Question... I am scared of the guessing games Khushi's mind is playing..( of course she is behaving mature enough n not giving into it...but for how long..?) will she ask details about Arnav's married life n about Lavanya a wrong person...? As in Astha who doesn't know the full truth..?

I read someone asking you the FLAWS of ur Charecters n u said Khushi trusts easily... Now who will she trust so easily that she shouldn't...?

I wish she should have ATLEAST heard Arnavs side of story even if she didnot want to judge..

My last question... Looks like Arnavs divorce is going to take long battle...will Khushi's parents n her wait till then..?



All Lavanya and Arav related questions will be answered in the next two updates :)

After two updates, everything will be out in the open and the story will begin the new phase, I was talking about .

And the other questions I can't answer right now without giving the plot away..sorry!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome chapter...Arnav has a son...Khushi introspection about herself was superb...after seeing Arnav with his son...khushi would not even think about having a life with Arnav...looks like lavanya is not willing to give divorce and would want to put Arnav into misery...she wants Arnav back in her life...you have given a shock with introducing Arnav's son...thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi Jenny,
I came across saffron fields today. It's awesome and I like the way you narrate with feelings with honests. I mean you connect truly to the feelings of human. Nice job. Will see you index. Please pm me for the next updates.

Thanks
anu
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Posted: 11 years ago
Okay, i am going to hold my comment until the next update, because there are too many guesses that are running in mind right now and i don't want my own thoughts to make a judgment here.
But i do want to say something about khushi going through the photo album. If i were Khushi, that album is going to make a huge difference in my outlook towards the entire relationship or the lack of it. Lets see how Khushi handles it.

So that leaves me with telling how well you write. And what do i say that i have not already told or the others haven't said? You are an incredible writer and thats it.



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