SwaRon SS:- Never Say Never UPDATED. - Page 20

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sachi123


I am soo soo happy that you liked it! Honestly, I was tensed as I knew the kiss could spoil the whole story and its flow, if not handled properly. But Yes! I did it! Thank You Kajal for your encouraging comments😊! Result ke tension main Vacation bhi enjoy nahi ho pa rahi😕! Will try to UPDATE soon if possible! Thanx again!

hey chill , results will surely good and secondly next moment ki tension me aaj ka moment kharab nahi karna chahiye 😉
Bindass hoke vacatio enjoy karo varna result bura man jayega 😆
Have fun ..don't take so much tension..
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb update...
loved swaron convo and understanding...
and swayam's reaction after the kiss 😆
i'm happy they confess liking each other
update soon
thanks for the pm😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sachi123

Thank You Jiana😊! Par sirf fine laga justification? I hope ye Sarcastic comment nahi tha😭!
I am glad that you like reading such stuff!
Love you soo soo much!
P.S:- Tujhe sachme accha laga na?


Arey sweetie... It's a way of saying how much I liked it... I was not sarcy!! Its a genuine comment... I said it because I did!!!
P.S. Mujhe sach me accha laga!!😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sachi123

"Effortlessly" - Thank You for this!
Yup, I didnt wanted it to be the typical one! So, got everything settled one!
You are absolutely right accepting feelings is not the end. There is lot more to come. Twists, Up and Downs and ofcourse our Never List!
Your comment always challenges me and pushes me behind the limits!
Thanx would be an understatement!
Keep giving comments and also your Honest Suggestions! Love you soo much😃

One thing is for sure.. I would always give out my comments.. honest opinions and suggestions..

And I loved it because of its mature way of handling issues..

Its great to know that my comment has that power to challenge and push you..

Love you too :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
Brilliant update
You justified the kiss perfectly
the confusion yet maturity shown by Swayam and Sharon
Thanks for the PM
Waiting for the update continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

Chapter Six:- The Beginnings.


Everyone was seating the same way as they were earlier. Everyone was silent, happy and somewhere felt complete with their newfound partners. They all had that smile, the blush, the red cheeks which made them think that "Everything in this World is perfect". Simmi and Nilesh were all cozy and were enjoying their last day of Courtship period.

Raghav and Raina were fast asleep. Sharon was looking outside the window and thinking about the events which took place during their Mini-vacation whereas Swayam was busy admiring her. Sharon smiled as she understood that Swayam's gaze was on her. This attention was overwhelming for her. Not that She didn't get any attention before but this was different, she knew this was forever and Swayam is a genuine person. She had some insecurities about the new found liking but she avoided it because as of now Living the moment was more important.

Swayam:- Sharon

Sharon:- Ah, ya?

Swayam:- Are you happy with this?

Sharon:- Ya, I am. But I am bit scared as we don't know each other much and this should not end on the name of Infatuation, as I know there is much more. And she smiled a bit.

Swayam took Sharon's hand and gripped it tightly as never letting her go.

Swayam:- I understand, But I surely know I won't let us break. What feels so right cannot be wrong!

Sharon:- You are quite Philosophical ha.

Swayam:- Actually, I love to read books . Thus, I get philosophical sometimes. You can tell me if you get bored though.

Sharon:- No, no. I love it. I am fond of books but I can't read them , I will fall asleep while reading it or something will happen. But I appreciate everyone who read Books and I am glad that I have a knowledgeable boyfriend and Sharon bit her lip as she realised what she said.

Swayam:- Mahh Girlfriend, I ..I ..I like you soo much for this and he gave a side-hug to Sharon.

Sharon smiled and playfully hit Swayam's shoulder.

Swayam:- Chalo now sleep..We have a long day tomorrow.

Sharon:- Ya.

They slept for a while.

Mumbai was just a few hours distance.

They reached Mumbai at around 1:00 am.

Swayam:- Guys, everyone wake up. We are Home.

Simmi:- Ya.

Raina:- Bro, to whom are we dropping first?

Swayam:- Raghav, You, Simmi, Sharon and than Nilesh and Me.

Sharon:- Ohkay

Raghav bid bye to everyone and promised that He will make Simmi's wedding a memorable one amd also to keep in touch with everyone especially Raina.

Next was Raina.

Raina:- Sharon, bro meet you tomorrow . Bye. She hugged everyone and went.

Nilesh hugged Simmi and murmured a I love you to her.

Now, it was just Swayam, Sharon and Nilesh.

Sharon:- Bye Nilesh. Meet you tomorrow.

Nilesh:- Bye Shar.

Sharon:- Swayam

Swayam could not control and he hugged her without thinking of Nilesh's reaction.

Swayam:- Good night Shar! Meet you asap.

Sharon:- Ya, take care.

And they got free from each other's embrace.

Nilesh:- Ahem, Ahem

Sharon:- Bye guys and she went inside the home.

Nilesh:- What's cooking between you and Sharon?

Swayam:- What? Nothing.

Nilesh:- Now come on speak up.

Swayam:- We just, ah, we just like each other.

Nilesh:- Just like each other? OH MY GOD! Look at you, The Swayam Shekhawat is blushing for the first time in his life. You both like each other and you have already confessed. That is fast.

Swayam:- Ya. I mean it just happened.

Nilesh:- Its good yaar. Me Simmi ane Masi ne batavis , voh log khush ho jayege ki finally Swayam has found someone and he is not gay.

Swayam:- Nilesh!

Nilesh:- Just Kidding!

Swayam:- Nilesh, we like each other and we have to know a lot about each other before making it official. So, please understand bhai.

Nilesh:- I understand Swayam. Chill. Everything will workout.

Swayam:- Ya, now lets go home. We have to face Baa.

Swayam and Nilesh sneaked into the house and slept peacefully.

Next morning everything was a mess. Half the relatives were in the Resort where the weddings gonna take place and rest were at home managing things.

Swayam and Nilesh woke up around 8:30 am and went to Dining to have a coffee as it was their ritual. They did not realised that they wear in their Nightwear among so many people.

Baa:- SWAYAM. NILESH.

Swayam-Nilesh:- Ji Baa.

Baa:- Aa kya kapda pera che? Nilesh, kale savare Lagan che aur ye sab nahi chalega. Swayam, mujhe laga tu sabse samajhdar hai iss ghar me , par ye kya laga rakha hai? Kabhi Goa? Kabhi late uthna?

Swayam:- Baa,voh neend me the toh pata nahi chala. Maaf karido Baa please.

Baa:- Ha. Thik hai. Jao, office se 2 phone aa gye. Meeting hai na tumhari?

Swayam:- Aree ha me toh bhuli gyo tho. Abhi ready hoke aata hu. Jai Shri Krishna and Swayam left to get ready and eventually go to Office.

Baa:- Aur tum Nilesh, Jao aur Haldi ke function ke liye ready ho jao.

Nilesh:- Ji Baa.

Nilesh's Mom:- Beta, voh Event Manager Sharon bhi kuch minute me aati hi hogi. Go fast, get ready. Your clothes are kept on the couch.

Nilesh:- Yes Mom.

Nilesh went to Swayam's room first to inform him about Sharon's arrival.

Swayam was leaving from the Mansion in his Formal attire and at the same time Sharon entered in the Traditional Attire.

Sharon:- Good Morning Swayam.

Swayam:- Good Morning and he left.

Sharon(to herself):- Ye Swayam ko pata nahi kya hua? Kal tak toh thik tha. He must have got late for office. But agar kuch aur baat hui toh? Sharon. Relax. He will call or text me if something is up. With that thought she moved towards the Hall for arrangements.

A/N:- Guys, this one is for all of you who waited for the UPDATE so badly. As I had promised 3 or 4 UPDATES together, I am gonna UPDATE rest of them in next 48 hours. And also I will be ending this SS soon probably in a week as I have a lot to study and my college is starting Next week. Don't be sad as I am not sure about ending it soon. But if I end, I will definitely make this SS the memorable one. Atleast I will try. Please.Please review it.

Cheers,

Sachi😛👍🏼.

Edited by sachi123 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
plzzz pm me part 6 and part 7
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Posted: 11 years ago
res...
unres...
ch6...
swaron convo in bus is very well penned down dear...
yup this is for sure dt it is not just infatuation...
swayam just said good morning to sharon..sad...
bt sharon knew him so well...
she won't b angry...
update soon..
thanks 4 d pm dear
Edited by Rockingbhardwaj - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
page 28 me update kaha hai..???? 😕
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Posted: 11 years ago
This is 2500th post!
Sho now pls UPDATEEE my loving di

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