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Posted: 11 years ago
A Looong Sigh...
Finally I got time to comment... Sorry Deepu... out of house whole day...I read half of the story while having lunch and other half I just completed...

Coming to the chapter...

Khushi is such a strong and courageous woman. She is saving woman and helping then to come out of their past troubled life and helping them to gain confidence. I should really appreciate Arnav to make her do this.

How can a man who is waiting his entire life for someone he can name as his, will react to this situation... Deepu, my eyes teared up while reading this line... Her, Just her That's all I wished Ever in my life... Arnav, with his horrible childhood... abandoned by every single being on earth... grown up without knowing the meaning of love.. Wished for only one in his entire life... only one... that is Khushi. .. His Khuhsi... But Fate played a very cruel game with his bruised heart in the form of Adi. I loathe Adi even more now... he doen't deserve to be on this earth... (Sorry I am being emotional)

Arnav or ASR, it doesnt matter, he knows nothing but loving Khushi. He can never hate Khuhsi. He tried two months to hate her, because he didn't see her for two months. Now it makes perfect sense. Looking at her and into her eyes for first time after that horrible night he figured out there is something amiss. Talking to her and reading her eyes he realized that there is something seriously wrong about abusing her.

This line directly reached my heart... Deepu...His cynical eyes believed her eyes more than his eyes... Wow,... No one in this damn world can believe others than his own eyes... We believe what we see. Period. But here Arnav although he believed what he saw until now... but one simple fact...One simple realization... "she never lied to him"... made him believe her than his own eyes... Arnav loves Khushi... more than himself... more than his life... more than his heart... Sorry he doesn't have a heart now... he lost it long time back...to Khushi...
Is there a way to get back his heart... Definitely not... How can he... he loves Khuhsi forever... no matter what happens... His every action speaks his heart out. His every caring gesture speaks his love. He was literally drowning in pain... His every nerve is screaming his pain... His every move is shpwing how badly he misses her. His every passing secong he is wishing to undo that horrible night ... His every breath is wishing to bring his life to normal... with his Khushi next to him... planning for their beautiful family with Ashu and Rahul...

Reacting like a betrayed husband to his loving wife... fighting with his inner turmoil... stuck in between what's wrong and what's right... Whether to believe his own eyes or her never lied to him eyes. Oh man only you can create this kind of intensity ... Deepu...

Well he doubted himself than her... can Arnav be anything more damn good than this...I doubt it...

"Was she assuming someone else as me", Directly he came to the point. Now mu curious brain is trying to sketch all possible algorithms, hoe he will find out it is indeed the truth...

He went to her inside after he burst out on her core cruelly... after so many doubtful realizations hit him... which are indeed true... and stopped her to ...Oh my God... I said you are not cruel but an angel last night Deepthi... But I am changing my mind now... you are a cruel angel Deepu ... to stop the story right at this point... Please someone save my over thinking brain... Ok ... don't worry... you can easily please me... by updating soon Deepu... see I gave the solution too...

Finally Arnav is coming as a Valiant Knight... the journey I am awaiting since so long... with the double bonanza the maha update... If Arnav is Valiant Knight for her... what Khuhsi will be for him...He doesn't need anything .. he needs Just Khushi... his Khushi...



Edited by lovedrops - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Perfect Lala...damn perfect
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Posted: 11 years ago
amazing update loved it
loved strong khushi
loved arnav's realizations scene
finally arnav knows something is wrong
glad he stopped her wonder what's going to happen when the truth comes out
cant wait to read more
thanks for the pm
Edited by drunkiiebabe - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Loved the description of what Khushi has done in the past 2years . She wishes that he realizes his mistake in a way has Arnav has committed a mistake but not in true sense , the mistake he has done is he never confronted Khushi nor tried to reach the depth he just believed what he saw , in a state of fury he forgot that what ever we see might not be true even out eyes can deceive us.

Coming to Khushi I love her optimistic approach towards the life. She is a shattered woman but she is trying to boost up and improve the lives of other women she has become the pillar for them she is providing them shelter when she herself lost her shelter she is trying to provide them work when her own business was smashed down to earth , she is asking them to dream when her own dreams were shattered. I really salute her and yes she is the women power.

If you really love a person with your heart and soul then you really cannot hate that person even when they are wrong for a spur of a moment you might loose your cool and say the things which you are not suppose to say but you really cannot hate them. This is what exactly happening with Arnav. He loves Khushi with his heart and soul and that is the reason he is not able to neither hate her nor ignore her and it is the same with Khushi too.

"Relate his Khushi to the one standing in front of him" Arnav your Khushi never left you the Khushi you are seeing is new but if you extend your hand and grab hers she will be again your's for good.

Yes I was expecting it I must say Mr. Raizada you priced me better than the 1000 rupees. I will now be officially called as the highest paid Pro*titute. I have been waiting for this one dialogue from the start of the FF because this is the most important and crucial one. All her life she was trying hard to prove that she is not the one and today her husband who once told her that she is priceless had once again proved her she is worth few bills according to Khushi and that is what hurt her the most. This statement will again play an important role when Arnav comes to know the truth wont this statement hurt him to the core.

Arnav's state is very bad he cannot hear what ever Khushi is saying and she is hell bent on striking him again and again with the same words.


Coming to the confrontation between Arnav and Khushi I am happy that Arnav atleast now did not ignore his caution that has been warning him that he is missing something and some where something went wrong. Atleast now he will try to find out what went wrong and where so that he can again mend things between him and Khushi because he is nothing with out Khushi and Khushi needs him.


Yes he is right if he does not stop Khushi today and take her with him then he will loose her for ever.

Deepthi you are a wonderful writer and you always make me think deep. When ever I read your update I think a lot of thing just not about the story it makes me realize my duties towards the society what I can do for the society it might be as small as donating a dollar.

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: canapoem

I had one question Deepthi, what is Adi doing in these 2 months. Is he partying thinking he ruined their lives? Does he keep tab on Khushi?

I hope he does not try to harm Khushi again in the future.


Hey dear, Adi will come soon, very soon..I am not really missing him right now to bring him in the picture..LOL

Ofcourse he is enjoying as ASR is ruined for last 2 months and he is having blissful life...Soon everything be changed :)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: RealityTruth

Awesome update. Loved the way you brought out the thoughts in Arnav to realize that Khushi must be telling truth and he needs to dig further...At that instance he made up his mind not to let her go now, otherwise she wil lnot be back in his life. He is intended to take her home, I'm pretty sure that she will not go with him now.. He will have to wow her and gain the trust he lost, waiting to see how you are going to reunite now, when he has made up his made to not let go of her, and to unravel the mystery.

Deepti, I'm disheartened to see that you didn't update this in two parts...I'm so addicted to this that I eagerly wait for updates to see whats going to happen next.😊


Awweee, I think it came down to one part as I didnt give my lambiii lecture on things..With author note, I am sure IF would have kicked into 2 posts..

I am sure u dont want to listen to my boring lectures..

Next is maha-update with 3 parts, hope u will enjoy that...😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: deepthiya


Hey dear, Adi will come soon, very soon..I am not really missing him right now to bring him in the picture..LOL

Ofcourse he is enjoying as ASR is ruined for last 2 months and he is having blissful life...Soon everything be changed :)


This is not fair Deepthi you are not missing Adi 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Srilathalolla


This is not fair Deepthi you are not missing Adi 😆


Yes Deepthi, I too wonder, you are not missing Adi... But I am terribly missing Adi... I want to see how happy he is after ruining Arnav by destroying Khushi... Then only I can hate him even more... 😈
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Posted: 11 years ago
hope the MU is cleared and the truth is out... then the repentance can start..
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: lovedrops


Yes Deepthi, I too wonder, you are not missing Adi... But I am terribly missing Adi... I want to see how happy he is after ruining Arnav by destroying Khushi... Then only I can hate him even more... 😈


Kiran I want to give him Chappal and jooti wala love 😛

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