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Posted: 11 years ago
Ooohh. ..I. missd the updats. ...:((((((((((((
Pls add me.. ..I already sent u buddy requst but didn't gt any PM'.
It was really a heartwrenchg update.. .whenvr I complts readg ur updats. ..I couldnt evn stop cryg.
I can't evn explain hw I'm feelg now.. .hatsoff for creatg such charectrs.. .
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Posted: 11 years ago
OMG I forgot to mention the song you posted... It is just awesome totally fitting on their situation rigt now:-))
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: poojasidd123

❤️ this update made my day. loved it to bits. reading ur note i thought it will consist of mostly the prologue, but then it revealed much much more!! i've finally got a clear understanding behind the emotional upheavals n pains of both the characters, especially arnav's. the pain he went through when he knew abt khushi's pregnancy couldnt be brought out more brilliantly. his every pore n every drop of blood was burning in pain, turmoil, disbelieve, betrayal, grievance, hatred,as well as strong love. khushi is gathering my respect with every update. the way she creates the home for the women with so much meticulous planning, planning abt their every day to day aspect so that they dont feel left out, simply made me wonder if only i could be that strong like her. its commendable how every time she starts out her life frm the scratch, and that too in such a determined way. the way she silently hopes for arnav to realize his mistakes...considers him responsible for the immense courage he gave birth in her..for the love he gave her n made her feel like a beautiful women worthy of reverence...the way she silently hopes for him to accept her baby in the hospital..the way she didnt flinch even a bit when he lashed out at her, didnt show even a bit of fear in her stance wen he grips her throat,..confidence oozing out of her every being when she declares herself single...hats off to her man!! she is the epitome of a brave woman.and hats off to u too for creating this character... and lastly when she walks in a defeated n heartbroken way, shoulders drooped, left me hoping for her to be strong again. somehow, i felt pain seeing her like that.

so finally the valiant knight has arised. haha he is now ready to take n endure all of her slaps that he thinks he deserve! when he felt he couldnt let her go at that instant, as it'll make him lose her forever, just made me skip some of my heartbeats!! now dont ever let her go arnav! she is all yours to protect n care for!

the last phrase abt eyes being the real mirrors to our faith n love, taking us to the soul of our loved ones, was just too beautiful. just made my day.


badly craving for the mahaupdate now! can i request u to please please give us that sooner. maybe in 2 days??!!😳


Nice post. I loved the sentence in bold the most.
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Posted: 11 years ago
I had one question Deepthi, what is Adi doing in these 2 months. Is he partying thinking he ruined their lives? Does he keep tab on Khushi?
I hope he does not try to harm Khushi again in the future.

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Posted: 11 years ago
A wonderful and beautifully written as usual. Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update. Loved the way you brought out the thoughts in Arnav to realize that Khushi must be telling truth and he needs to dig further...At that instance he made up his mind not to let her go now, otherwise she wil lnot be back in his life. He is intended to take her home, I'm pretty sure that she will not go with him now.. He will have to wow her and gain the trust he lost, waiting to see how you are going to reunite now, when he has made up his made to not let go of her, and to unravel the mystery.

Deepti, I'm disheartened to see that you didn't update this in two parts...I'm so addicted to this that I eagerly wait for updates to see whats going to happen next.😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Love u, Love, Love u Love u loads deepthi, what an update I didnt thought that this much awaited confrontation which was apart of prologue too will come so soon.
But u have done it, Iam so glad you didnt drag it and everything is crystal and clear now.

Thank god, arnav put some sense in his brain and realized the truth in khush's eyes, a girl like khushi will never tell lie about the father of her child and this made him suspective too good👏

Now he will be able to see the truth I guess, but will khushi be ready for explanation I doubt, I don t think she will answer any of his questions after so much of humiliation.

Iam so excited about the next update, cant wait dear, adi's true face should come in front of everyone but I guess after all this arshi's relation will never be like before.







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Posted: 11 years ago

Wow... superb is the word for this update.

What Khushi has done for those women is really commendable. I appreciate NK so much for supporting Khushi. At least now those women have secure place to stay and learn something to make their life bearable. Even while doing this Khushi thought about Arnav and how much he will appreciate this good deed. That was very nice.

While reading the portions of the prologue, now that we know what happened in the past, it made absolute sense. Both were not backing down. But the last part when Arnav realizes the truth was excellent. He really stops and thinks Khushi never lied to him before and she will never lie about the father of her child. How he trusted Khushi's version of truth rather than his version of the truth was so nicely written. Hats off to you for penning down this story...

Now that Arnav has stopped Khushi... I can not wait to know what happens next.

Oh no, Tuesday is too far away. If possible, please give the maha update sooner, please...

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Posted: 11 years ago
thank goddd...n thank youuu dear...finally..per my wish ommn last update..atleast one of dem shud gt to knw d truth happend...my lovely shweetu arnav...fell in love wth him all over again..he listend to his heart n trustd khushi...i m relieved...if my arshi are togethr...dey can face d worst in world...valiant knight...i love you sooo mch... :)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Never expected this, always thought that Arnav will find something about Adi and then trust her, but then he loves her soo much that just by her words he knew something was amiss.. indeed his is a true love.

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