Deepu, yesterday night i couldn't be awake more than that, hence a short note, let me begin now:
i have been following your work from the time you started writing and let me tell you the nth time that your evolution as a writer has been amazing.. your strength is to make the readers feel the character and the story from their heart. it never goes above the head, but it always goes into to the head. especially, TVK..
coming to this story,
i totally agree with your note in the beginning of the thread.. sometimes even with one's own husband, if you are not in the mood for lovemaking, it becomes mechanical. think about the plight of these women who are treated like machines by men to take out their frustration. sometimes, i feel there is no God to save these ladies.. nobody willingly, to the most possible extent, will go into this profession out of their own choice.. what is the solution to this problem, is a big question mark.. this is just me cribbing about the society being unfair to ladies who are less privileged.
coming to khushi, i feel like hugging you again for maintaining her character.. i have had up to my neck of stories where khushi is portrayed as weak character.. this khushi, hats off to you.. though she thinks she has been betrayed by her love now, i was very sure that she will not go out of the line to make arnav feel miserable, do something that is totally not her. she first reaction to physical intimacy has always been a slap, whether to a common man or arnav. common, still i find people asking how she didn't recognize arnavs touch, resist, what crap.. in fact she is avenging for the whole of women by taking revenge from people who misuse them.. i like it.. only thing is that she may be in trouble from these lunatics at a later date. but i am sure by that time arnav will be with her to save her..
arnav dear, what to do with you.. if you think you are miserable now, then what will happen to you when to come to know that because of you khushi had to go through all the pain. how are you going to pull yourself out then.. many suggest that arnav may not let khushi know that she was raped by some other man, he will let her think that it is him.. i don't think so.. one thing about both of them is that they are honest in their feelings to their bones.. yes, there is a possibility that arnav knows how khushi will react and hence may stalk it for sometime, but eventually the truth has to come out for these two people to come closer.
why is there speculation as to if khushi or arnav will accept the child that is in khushi right now after knowing the paternity of it.. common guys, here we are talking about two selfless people who want to adopt unknown kids to give them shelter and names.. khushi will retain the kid even when she knows that she is raped and the child is a victim of it and arnav will love the child irrespective of adi being the father. they will always see the child as a soul that wants to be loved and not as a commodity.
i am waiting for the day when arnav will come to know that adi did this to khushi.. one good dhinkachikka dance is there when that happens..😆
Deepthi, after reading your stories, i have come to this conclusion.. henceforth i am going to completely, i mean it, trust to take the story forward.. i am sure you will do 200 % justice to story.. but on demand, i want some romance also, arhi means romance and you have a special way of writing about that ( i have the most unromantic husband who gave me a missing screw driver on valentines day) and lots and lots of update.
once again, a BIG THANK YOU from the bottom of the heart for writing this story as such.😊👏
love you
anuradha
Ps: see you are making me write longer comments these day.earlier i always used to like and write one or two sentences.
Ps: are you from chennai, i am. i thought you must be a telugu lady, the way you narrated the wedding
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