SS : Jab Se Tere Naina! COMPLETED! Link to Sequel on first page! - Page 21

part 11
awesome dear...
hahaha Arnav's grumbling was so funny...
but hes getting all his secret desires fulfilled...
and Khushi's cute anger was funny...
he knows how to provocate her...
cont soon dear...

PS - honey whats this Aakashi Maiyya? hehehe change to DEVi Maiyya dear...always check this ctrl F...

Originally posted by: spvd

part 11
awesome dear...
hahaha Arnav's grumbling was so funny...
but hes getting all his secret desires fulfilled...
and Khushi's cute anger was funny...
he knows how to provocate her...
cont soon dear...

PS - honey whats this Aakashi Maiyya? hehehe change to DEVi Maiyya dear...always check this ctrl F...

Originally posted by: crazyforsarun

awesome update!

LOL yeh Arnav bhi na he loves to annoy Khushi

It's been 2 years already it's high time that he realizes that he is in love with Khushi.

Thanks for the PM!

Update soon!

Originally posted by: mayurisb80

he is such a manipulative creature ASR kahika...

he loves to rile her up.. hope Khushi realizes this and implements this technique on him too..

Originally posted by: shalini_s

he loves to rile her up.. hope Khushi realizes this and implements this technique on him too..

Read all the parts... it was amazing. .. just loved it. .. waiting for the next part. .

Originally posted by: magss24

Read all the parts... it was amazing. .. just loved it. .. waiting for the next part. .

Originally posted by: Kalpana_Writer

OMG! 😆😳 I cannot believe I missed that! I generally change the names manually but yesterday was feeling so lethargic that I did it automatically and that also after editing half of the update manually! Yeh sab uska nateeja hai! Never thought that Devi mein bhi Dev hai!😆

And what is more funnier? No one noticed except you!🤣

Thanks for noticing and thanks for the review!

Changed it to Devi!😆

i knew it u wouldnt cross checked it...else i never ahve found any kinda mistakes in any of the updates till now...this time and this one made me to laugh so much and this very same thought came to me too...Dev is in Devi too...🤣 since i read both versions it had me in splits...and one more things dear, in the show they showed Anjali to be the meddling, naughty, teasing one...so with Aakash and Paayal include her too...with Naaniji shes seems like the strict one...so party change for her...of course she was strict and controlling but the naughty side she only has...

Awesome dear
Loved it 👏