Making Khushi Mine II ~ (THREAD 26)

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praseetha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#681

Hope khushi is fine.

Awesome update.

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shubhi7

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Posted: 11 years ago

#682

Just wanna say I'm waiting for next update... I want bo yrouble in Arshi's relationship pleasee

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Anjali

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Posted: 11 years ago

#683

Emotional part...I liked it...supppeeerrr

Why did you do this?...not again...so much pain?????????????? I want them together...Please dont make them suffer more...

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dilectus

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Hello Anonymous ji!!!

First of all sorry for being so so sooo late. I just read last 5-6 updates together, and MY GOD!!! The graph of their relationship can put any physicist to go mad trying to decipher the next curve it will take. Its beyond any, any equation normally known to human beings. Needless to say, its still the last update which has clouded my mind right now. I was constantly thinking only one thing, are they doomed to be a victim of bad timings all the time, and the last part!! Shit man!! I am unable to re-read the update, I am so agitated, otherwise I normally read the update atleast 2 times, first time hastily to know all what has happened and then leisurely to enjoy the writing, the words and expressions. I guess you are already feeling all the agitated vibes from your readers all over the IF , prompting you to let us know asap, what happens now?? I know I should not ask this, given I am myself unable to update my story from past 5 months, but still, I am asking.

You might think that I don't go into critical assesment of sentences and expressions and dialogues and characters and so on. And you are right. As a reader, I let go of myself into the writers' hands. I just follow the writer, wherever he/she takes me. But I cal always tell , who all keep me on tether, biting my nails and hiding my face in pillow because I am unable to calm down the excitement which the journey makes me go through. Any guesses?? 😉

Brilliant one Anonymous ji, as always!! 😊👏👏

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amaypranay

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Posted: 11 years ago

#685

Those words, Just get lost...

They probably are going to be playing in his mind fir quite a bit, what a series of events have occurred in just few minutes, things that can change your life!

This update was nail- biting and you penned it flawlessly!

Amazing work!!! Hope Khushi will fine...waiting eagerly for the next chapter!!!

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raniluvsasr

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Posted: 11 years ago

#686

hey thanks for the pm,loved d update and was awaiting one eagerly

like alwayzz u hav really written well. Fantastic. Arnav and khushi relationship though confusing but is very progressive. Arnav has to over come his fears to maintain a balanced relationship with khushi only khushi perseverance and patience will not help. He has to let go of doubting khushi and understand her. He shud give her a chance to xlplain.

. khushi has to for once has to be firm and xplain Arnav not always can she be d sacrificing goat. Her behaviour is justified of being very patient with,Arnav. But it will do no good in the future. Fantastic update soon nd I mean it by all terms.

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nimshika

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Posted: 11 years ago

#687

bad timing for khushi.i hope arnav will understand his mistake.will she have memory loss and forget arnav.

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maizis

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Posted: 11 years ago

#688

Hey sorry l couldn't comment oon the last two updates
Reason: exams
But the story changed completely in these two to three episodes
Khushi leaving for mumbai and then thia rishab thing
Rishab shouldn't have forced her to say such stuff a because Khushi is an emotional person and she can't even hurt a fly.
Arnav's anger on the other hand is justified because it's the second time he has seen such a scene infront of his eyes, so this plus his insecurities combined led to such a harsh response but the accident changes everything
I hope arnav doesn't start keeping distance from khushhi after this and doesn't consider himself unworthy of her love
Waiting eagerly for the next update