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Posted: 11 years ago
oh no...why always the mu develops bw arshi...and that rishab...i hate him...oh god now khushi's accident...hope she will be fine
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey devi meiya khushi? Accident? Is the second chance u were talking about, for arnav to redeem his untrusting self?


today's update was quite action packed, starting from rishabh and khushi's confrontation to the fall one to rival dumbledore's fall from the astronomy tower. I am really not liking rishabh right now, I know he is also human and a heartbroken one at that, but still. Arnav is in so much pain, just when he had started basking in the warmth of khushi's love n affection he comes to know that he is not first and theonly reciepient of that and his reaction was quite predictable though this episode was not. I did not see this coming, but highly interesting turn of events.

awesome anon though I hope that khushi will be fine( ofcourse she will be) and they can finally have some balm applied to their aching hearts.

If it was arnav who pushed her in harm's way he is gonna have a verrry tough time forgiving himself.
Edited by alex1906 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
His ego of the size of Jupiter 😆
I back you up on that !

I pity Rishabh .Poor Guy .He genuinely Loved Khushi, isn't it?
Or Am I wrong .may be ..
Hmmm Hope He gets someone good If he did love her.


The fact that Khushi dint pay any heed to rishabh (when he asked her to join him for Lunch) and just chose to stare at that cruel piece of last hope called Cell Phone waiting to hear that one voice which would change her world!



So Finally Arnav had the time for her!
He is such an Egoistic man ! Can't he just see how much she cares for him!
So what if She once loved Rishabh ! That was just childish love ..



Atleast he could have listened to her ...
Now as if this wasnt enough , he started doubting her love and calling it False love out of Pity! Yaa it was her pitying him when She waited for Him when he used to be late , It was her pitying him when She confessed her love in front of a Monster who is ready to eat her alive every passing second!


What is up with this Guy!
I think he must take a 1 trip or 2 or 100 to Anger Management Classes! He really needs it ..
He knew he said those words out of anger which he surely gonna regret!


And "Divorce"! Like hell he would survive after separating from her!
He heard that one sentence and he went out to make decisions !


I loved the way how you twisted the story .Like I thought now they would be at two different ends crying in buckets thinking about each other..And Khushi would be on taking different Vows to get her Arnav back by Hook or by Crook.. And ASR would be hell adamant of divorcing her ..Even though his inner conscience is hell bent on hugging it out but still he would prefer away from 'His Life'!




But The accident Twist was amazing.
I must say its an achingly new twist but much needed.
He needs to be bombarded with the fact that Khushi doesnt only love him but hell respects him or his past too!
And that her love never was ,is and will be fake !!




Though I have to admit that what he did to Khushi and my sympathies to her of course, was creepy.
But then again, he is still interesting and hot and Hurt too.
God Help This Both!
And My Heart always skips a beat imagining him like this-


But again I can't always tolerate khushi sad too !






P.S-
~One Piece Of Advice for you: Publish. You are a serious talent..
[I Know you must be really really irked by this One continuous advice by me. But hell I can't resist myself by looking out for atleast One single mistake (gramatical or theoretical) in every chapter , but everytime I m left with no success !]


~You are far and away above that crowd of formatted plots and vanilla romance, which is sometimes too sickeningly sweet to read seriously!.
I ain't saying those authors are bad or something But sometimes they forget the thing that We fell in love with the ever Rude "The ASR" .So along with Romance,there has to be The Anger,The Guilt too which really remains the essence of ASR and Khushi's Love!
And Your Story covers all in all!!

Really a Pleasure to read!

P.P.S-
~Continue with Due Respect
~Cheers for the PM
Edited by Destinyhope0305 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
what the f**k...
rihabh genuinly love khushi..
thats why he back stabbed her

oh yeah people in love destroys ur love's life without knowing whole story...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing chapter but shocking why arnav always enter on wrong time this rishav realy pissed me of feel bad for khushi n nw i think arnav shud left his insecurity n see khushi lov thanx for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
That's so cruel! You shouldn't have ended it there.

Now how m i supposed to continue living without knowing what happens next!

Please please update the next part soon. Pretty please.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: shruti46

what the f**k...

rihabh genuinly love khushi..
thats why he back stabbed her

oh yeah people in love destroys ur love's life without knowing whole story...


i think more than proving his position in khushi's life to arnav
more than back stabbing khushi n insulting her faith in gd n the frndship she shared with him

rishabh has insulted n disrespected his so called feelings fr khushi... if he really cared fr her... knwing fully well tht this revelation wud cause probs between khushi n arnav, ... he was seeking only a saddistic revenge..

i m sure he knew khushi is nt coming to him, nt even if her marriage breaks..
he had doubts tht arnav cant keep her happy... so he cant say he had no clue khushi wud b hurt... i mean ok accident he cudnt knw... bt he clearly knew they wud end up fighting over this, n khushi wud b hurt emotionally.. since hse loves arnav nw.

so more than anythg else.. rishabh proves hw selfish his love is...
i m nt against selfish love... bt selfish to the extent of harming the peace in the life of ur loved one... is below the basic decency levels fr me.

i m really disappointed in rishabh... abhi to i dont even want to knw ki use koi ladki mili ya nahi... 😡
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Posted: 11 years ago
vaise is this is the second chance as said in prologue??
many people are writing about memory loss.is this even possible??
no i dont want that
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Posted: 11 years ago
Actually a nice chapter... Action packed!!!! Waiting to c how u r going to turn Arnav's attitude around..
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Posted: 11 years ago
datz awesome
loved iut
feel sry fr khushi
thanx fr d pm

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