Making Khushi Mine II ~ (THREAD 26)

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Happytwinkle

@Happytwinkle

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#451

marvelous update

loved it

plz continue soon

thanks for the pm

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saschades

@saschades

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#452

omg!!!! 😲 That Rishabh is a trouble maker
NOOO Khushi had an accident!!! now the tables will turn to Arnav
lovely update
thanks for pm xx

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reeshree

@reeshree

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#453

Did the relation just go from being bad to worse, all in a matter of minutes? 😲

She walked away to prove her love and met with an accident? Arnav will sure be regretting his words and actions now.. it's gonna hurt bad..

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Lavanya

@lav.0301

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#454

WHAT THE... i m crying...seriously gal...i v nvr expectd dis twist...poor arnav, poor khushi...n even poor rishab..in d earlier chapters being dieheart arshi fan, i was nvr a person to like raichand..bt today i wantd to b in his shoes n think..really heart wrenchng..seeing ur love married to smeone n may b by looks not living happily definitely gives a slight scope or hope..may b dey l cum bck to us...bt please as khushi said..jst thnk dat dey r nt meant to be together n move on...

cmng to khushi...such a sweet gal bt had to facs so many tests to prove her love..its hard for any gal to justify her love at evry step of her life..jst the bad tymng..arnav was not present to hear when she was defendng ...bt be der at wrng tym to hear jst a partvof cnvrztn wer in he l b hrt n inturn hrt her...arnav...please cum out of ur past..try to undrstnd khushi...even he is nt to b blamed..his past, his insecurities...poor arnie..

finally wat a blast dear...u r one of d bst writers who can make d reader cry without der knowledge..please update d nxt part asap...jst cant wait to see arnav reactn past accident...

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amita

@star_fan1

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#455

Beautifull and Emotional update !!!!!!!!!!!!!

Khushi tried to do every possible thing to make Arnav believe in her love

But fate had other planning for them

That's why Khushi's declaration before Risshab was a bad timing

And Risshab is really a bed friend how could he do this to his best friend

He Know Arnav was there but didn't stop her

Poor Khushi why always she has to suffer

Now this accident... Arnav will not able to forgive himself for this

Arnav have to come out of his insecurities

Hope she will be fine and Arnav will understand her feelings

Very Beautifully and Brilliantly written

Loved the whole update to much

Eagerly waiting for next update

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 11 years ago

#456

that was a brilliant update..indeed very well written..from the start to the finish of this update I was literally biting my nails with anticipation thinking about what is to follow...Khushi is in turmoil..and her state of mind is understandable..Khushi's relationship with Arnav has just begun and all this is just new for Khushi...this relationship with Khushi is new for Arnav too..and I really feel all Arnav and Khushi need is some time with each other to understand each other and the intricacies of their relationship..on the other hand there is Rishabh..well Rishabh has lost his love and it is obvious that he holds a resentment against Arnav and still harbors the hope that Khushi will come back to him..but it is high time Rishabh understands Khushi can never be his..she was never meant to be his at all..at least for a little while the factor that Khushi limps held Rishabh back in the past..on the other hand there is Arnav who not even for a second thought about Khushi's limp, it does not matter to him at all but for Rishabh it did and this is why I say that Khushi was never meant to be with Rishabh..she was, is and will be Arnav's...hmmm.. Rishabh interfering attitude and Khushi and Rishabh's showdown, okkk...Khushi had feelings for Rishabh but that was in the past may be it was a crush because Rishabh was her only friend and not love..but today Arnav is Khushi's love, life and world...Arnav heard Khushi's confession...and Rishabh knew that Arnav was hearing everything...at times I feel it is better not to have a friend at all rather than having a friend like Rishabh in ones life...the final bit was heart wrenching.. Arnav being the impulsive one puts Khushi in the same pedestal as his mother...my heart went out to both Arnav and Khushi..and finally the last scene Khushi has met with a accident...I really hope Khushi is ok and sh gets better soon..and Arnav Khushi start afresh..a very impact-full update... the story is progressing well...keep up the good work going...please do update soon...waiting for the next update eagerly..😊

Edited by MysticRiver - 11 years ago

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jolybudy

@jolybudy

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#457

that was a superb update..

What a timing.. Khushi confessing to Rishab... hmm why did she have to do that.. oh no.. now unnecessarily issues..

but gud that Arnav didnt call Khushi too many names.. though she was definitely hurt completely..

but last part... what happened.. hope Khushi is alright... and this incident might bring out the caring Arnav out..

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smile1412

@smile1412

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#458

Oh no... I hope Khushi is ok... This makes you realise that however practically you may see it... Khushi n Rishab can never remain friends... Their past wd not allow them ... Hope this makes Arnav realize his folly in not trusting his wife ... But again his past hasn't been a good example for him to follow...

Hope Khushi recovers soon and they learn to trust each other along with their love for each other!!!!

N Anamika... After this cliffhanger , pls update sooner

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Anuradha

@lovebarun...

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#459

good update.. to make arnav realise his love for khushi, why are to doing this to us

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Sarikaa97

@Sarikaa97

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#460

Oh! I'm still reeling from the effect. The only thing that is going in my mind is that Arnav will make it all right, somehow, he has to!! God, it was all smooth but the END! Though you hinted about the twist I never expected something like this. I just assumed that it will be another misunderstanding..

Bravo! For writing such a heart wrenching scene with utmost perfection!

Loved it:)