SanDhir FF : *Along Came 'She'* ~~THREAD 1 - Complete~~ Chapter 1-10 - Page 75

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Posted: 11 years ago
Update soon Anu... 😲 😲
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sparkling_gems

waiting.. reserving my seat. Unres

One thing is for sure that Randhir's enemy is someone his close by but who? Sometimes I think its Dr. D.S. (Randhir's uncle) sometimes Dr. Mittal (Ishita's dad) even Ishita's mysterious behaviour gives support to my doubt on her dad or may be someone else or maybe they all are responsible for Randhir's miseries.. and now the secret letter, who is the person who wants to help Randhir to find his parents and Ramu kaka's murderer? Mystery is engulfing very deeply.. Not just here even Randhir's behaviour towards Sanyukta.. On one side he helped her twice earlier but on the other side he does or says stuff to hurt her...to insult her... Is it because of what she said during that fresher party or something else behind it? Is it because as he said she is intruding his territory, he is somewhere felt attracted towards her and he is afraid he may get distracted from his goal if he gave attention to her. But little did he know that he cant avoid the destiny, he is bound to be with Sanyukta. Doesn't he? And now Sanyukta got the hold of letter which may provide information to him about his parents' murderer, will she give him the letter or will she keep to choose mum to avoid his wrath. And if she choose former then how will she give it to him what excuse will she make esp when she had opened the cover too?

Btw just curious did Vardhaan realize that Randhir trick Sanyukta in giving wrong answers? Yes, he did.

sparky!!
so many questions!!!
Time shall provide answer to all of them!!!
And yes Vardhan sir realized it was Randhir's doing!!!!
Sanyu...well what she does with the letter...u'll see...This is where it gets interesting!
But one thing is for sure...RD can't evade herno matter how much he tries!! fate!!!!
Love ya and thanks a lot!!!
BTW, our OS just became OS of the week...Thank u for the idea...The award goes to u as much as it goes to me!
Always and forever your friend,
Anu!!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Anamika1309

Anu di...y did u give a short update dis time😕 its okie atleast u gave d update yesterday😛
di tell me one thing r u gng to philosophy classes huh??? coz u jus sound like a philosopher to me when i read dat quotes👏..they r too gud👍🏼
omg i really hate such type of situations di..i wonder how much Randhir is gng through right now😒
n all those malicious people r there too😲 ofc y wudn't they after all they need to cover up wat they did right😡...i jus can't believe it how cud they pretend like ntn has happened😲
n i m very sure dat d person in last part was d one who killed Ramu chacha...actually in d last part he kinda apologized to Randhir which means he planned dis murder no??? Im more dan glad dat Vardhan is here wid Randhir😊 n yayay Randhir is putting all d pieces together though he didn't find anything out...he figured out dat d murderer was a surgeon😳 i hope he will find out abt their evil plans soon n wts dat envelope???who placed it there n strangely didn't some one notice dat letter other dan Randhir😕..i think Ishita's dad wated Randhir to find dis envelope so he didn't allow d forensic team to take away d body😳...thank god he understood dat its professional rivalry
now all those monsters dnt hav much time to escape coz its Randhir after all😳
n whozz dat??? well frankly i m surprised dat u mentioned "one out of them"...coz all of dem r culprits aren't they😡 so y wud nly one of them be afraid????
hmmm sanyukta's time has come to face Vardhan finally😕 acha Randhir is also there but wt d hell huh Vardhan literally spared Randhir even when he knows dat Randhir was behind it😡
i hate dis..Vardhan plz watch out ur tongue..u hav no idea wt Sanyukta Agarwal is😈
okie i was shell shocked reading dis part di..slap???
did she actually slap him😲...di no offense but i think Randhir crossed his limits too👎🏼
coz speaking to Sanyukta as if she has come to d college to woo him😡 was really bad on Randhir's part😔...di i hav to tell u smthng i used to hate vidushi but when it comes to Ishita n Vidushi..i ll pick dat vidushi as a villain in Sandhir's life rather dan dat *****
wat does she think of herself huh😡...some one has to teacher her some manners
n also have to make her realize dat all her dramas r not gng to last long😈
Randhir plz plz plz dnt get senti abt dat *****.dnt u understand,shezz jus acting,she is a hell of an actor...shezz afraid dat she might be exposed ntn more dan dat so now she trying to persuade Randhir to give his revenge agenda..n poor Randhir he is being manipulated by dat ******
ohhh god now wat???? ofc he will not find dat letter in d lab then wt is he gonna do???
barge into sanyukta's room (partly im happy for dat)😉
arey sanyu dnt open it baby...ufff u opened it hmm ofc u didn't do it deliberately na..but u tore d envelope right now atleast try to stick it girl..Randhir's gng to gush forth into ur room any minute😲...diii i desperately wanna know who wrote dat letter n wat happens next plz update ASAP


Harita baby,
Ur hatred towards ishita I increasing by the day!!!
Truck ready ho gya?? Let's effing kill her :D
The letter...dekh aagey kya hota hain!!!!!
Sanyu is very persistant,,,M sure she will get to the bottom of this mystery!!!!
Btw thank u again!!!
I love u little angel😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: federized2210

Ritu!
Thank you!!!
I will update on Wednesday...
I'm under tremendous stress these few days..
Registration for final sem exam is on + counselling for MSc started...
But you my friend are too kind with all ur praises!!!
Makes me all gooey and happy!!!!
Big hug to u!!!
And yup, Goldie at last and now winner of FF & OS of the week!
Seems like my stars are shining bright these days!!!
Thanks again!
love u ❤️


So U R Real Busy These days Haan...No Prblm...Anything Related 2 Sttudies always Come First...Update whenever u r free...

Hearty Congratulations 4 winning FF n OS of the week...U simply deserve those accolades...

All The Very best wid Counselling n other "Study" matters...Hope u end up doing everything Properly...

love
Ritu
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: anyania

anu di..u were fabulous...
everything is getting more clearer now..murder, rivalry, everything..
randhir just by seeing and investigating on his own found out the reason and how ramu chacha was murdered..
nd the long awaited slap which I think sanyukta should have done earlier was quite shocking..
and yeah! randhir went rude on ishita..I was wating for this day..
and the envelope with only a one liner was quite mysterious..
want to find out soon..eagerly waiting for the next chapter. ..
update soon. .waiting. ..

Thank u so much!!!😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Sunshine_Ami

Last night read it, but was reading it from phone so couldn't able to give reply... Cuz my phone is a DABBA... 🤣

Pain, Suspense, Mystery, Betray, Backstabbing... This FF has it all...

What hurts the most is that those person whom he trust blindly is behind his misery... They snatched away his all happiness just because of power & property... Those persons whom he thought as his biggest support >> HIS FRIENDS... They are nothing but jerks...

At-last he lost his only support, his beloved care taker...

Honest may be in FF also I just can't see him in pain & that's hurting me the most...

Here, she is trying to co-operate him, but he is hurting her constantly... She slapped him, but honestly he deserves it, in my opinion...

At-last she got to know about the letters truth, don't know what she ll do now... Maybe she too will involve herself in this matter... What matters for her is RANDHIR's HAPPINESS...; nothing else...

This story is proceeding amazingly... But just one wish at-least they become friends soon... completely my wish...

I know am crazy... 🤣


Poulami,
thanks a lot!!!!
will update on Wednesday!
Love ya!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: SanDhirFanatic

Anu this Comment is Not from Me bt from someone else

So Few days Back i was having a chat wid a Twitter frnd of mine abt Sadda Haq Ofcourse.Her name is Sakshi...we were talking abt FFs n Os of IF too...while talking i came to know tht She has already read ur first FF "Meant To Be" 4 times...yes 4 times she has read ur first fic...bt she couldnt comment in any of d parts since she s facing some technical prblms in logging here...

So Being a Huge FanGirl of Ur Writings I shared the link of Ths Fic too wid her...n not to my Surprise She is Bowled over once again by ur work...infact today mrng we chatted 4 almost 30mins abt ur works only...she told me that being d silly girl she is, she sobbed reading d part where Ishita kissed Randhir...she gets emotionally hooked 2 d parts n feels lyk everything is happening right infront of her eyes...

After hearing so much from her i decided tht i shd defo tell u abt her...s this rpl actually is frm her...she ll keeep on reading d parts n tell me how she liked thm...n i shall convey tht to u...

Btw i hv become a kind of PR Agent 4 ur Works...nowadays suggesting it to all who loves to read on SanDhir...n trust me i m really loving it when all r praising u n ur work...

Great going Girl...

Ritu!!!!
Omg!!! U are actually advertising my FF???
I love u girl!
Tell me her twitter ID...I will thank her...I am on twitter!
Btw in case I can't, u tell her I really appreciate it and a biggie thank u to sakshi!!!!
I'm really blessed!!!
Love u and her loads!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: starart

Awesome... it was sooo Awesome. U hav no idea how much i love this.

Am somewhat addicted to your story. I Actually keep thinking what wl happen next and acquire my own story😛😆😆😛
I think i hav guessed who the Mystery man/the Murderer is!!!😉😉 The One who is vry vry Close to Randhir!!!😭
Just loved when VARDHAN SIR said i dont take preferences!! wowww.. he actually made RANDHIR realise wat he has done.
Vardhan Sir was reminded of Two ppl from past. I guess its himself & his close frnd😳 (or girlfrnd,is Niharika too there??? i Suppose yes!!!)😊
Sanyukta Slapped Randhir that was unexpected😲 But i think what Randhir said made her lose her sanity. Justified... She also got the letter and she read it.😒 Great.. Randhir wl be soo Pissed off if he comes to knw that she read it. How wl she give him back now???
Eagerly Waiting for the next part..
Lotss of Loveeesss❤️

Thank u so much!!!!
Means a lot!
Love ya :)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ArSha_TillIDie

Anu Di!!!
What is this?! 😲

Just 8 chapters down and over a 100 pages?! 😲
WOW!!! 🤗
Broke MTB records already! Uff! ⭐️

Now, I'm sorry I couldn't comment on the last chapter, was a lil' too busy! :/ But again, that was one hell of a chapter, really. Man, jaw dropped since the start. I wanted to quote so many things, but if I did, I'd have ended up quoting the whole chapter. Brilliant work the previous one. All kinds of emotions. Fab work.

Now coming to chapter 8. Honestly, how do you do this?!
What, you may ask? Get your readers to to wait on hinges, stalk you and get them so impatient to read you work?! 😲 And then after they read the update, they go *sit for some time and take in what you read*
*Breathe out and go "WHAT DID I JUST READ?!"*

This was yet again a fantastic chapter. Starting with quote, beautiful. :)

The way he inspected the body, how easily he understood the involvement of a surgeon, how he is finally moving ahead in solving the mystery, how he addressed the media and how he so easily he took control of the media. OH GOD! 😲 *sits dumbstruck for a while*

Hmm, who could that someone be? Who could possibly have sent that envelope and who possibly want to meet him? I stopped jumping into conclusions though, because I feel stupid with the very next update. 😆

And as usual Sanyu-Randhir! ❤️ You make the look even better than in the show! *Eeep!!!* ☺️ They love attacking each other so much! ☺️

I hope she follows him when he goes to Masjid Road and that she will soon start involving herself in solving the mystery. 😃

That's it, I'll stop here for now. Just one more thing though, Anu Di, you are an inspirational writer, truly. Wanted to say this a long time. Genius you are. 😳

So yes, kudos!
Keep up the great work,
Love always,
Nivs. :)

Oh God!!! Nivs!!!
Ur comments are seriously my drugs!!!!
How kind of u!!
Thannks a lot!!!!
Love u loads :*
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: nafees5

"They say that nature creates a balance, always.

If there is crime, then there is also justice.

God sees the truth, but waits!

And we are all, but puppets in His hands!"
idar he clean bold..toh aagaay kya bolun 😉 par bolna toh padega he..iss update main sab kuch tha..mystery..anger...thapad wala romance..pain...i loved it.. this chapter really took this awesome story to another level all together..rsandhir conversation rather arguement was bang on!! ..slap was much needed ...apne letter sanyu k hath de dia..shbasssh!..ab ayega maza next chappy k intezar main..😉..bas mai aur kuch bol he nai sakti..i am at short of words..phenomenal anu👏...

Thank u sooo much naira!!!!
Love you!!😳

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