SanDhir FF : *Along Came 'She'* ~~THREAD 1 - Complete~~ Chapter 1-10 - Page 69

Anu di...y did u give a short update dis time😕 its okie atleast u gave d update yesterday😛
di tell me one thing r u gng to philosophy classes huh??? coz u jus sound like a philosopher to me when i read dat quotes👏..they r too gud👍🏼
omg i really hate such type of situations di..i wonder how much Randhir is gng through right now😒
n all those malicious people r there too😲 ofc y wudn't they after all they need to cover up wat they did right😡...i jus can't believe it how cud they pretend like ntn has happened😲
n i m very sure dat d person in last part was d one who killed Ramu chacha...actually in d last part he kinda apologized to Randhir which means he planned dis murder no??? Im more dan glad dat Vardhan is here wid Randhir😊 n yayay Randhir is putting all d pieces together though he didn't find anything out...he figured out dat d murderer was a surgeon😳 i hope he will find out abt their evil plans soon n wts dat envelope???who placed it there n strangely didn't some one notice dat letter other dan Randhir😕..i think Ishita's dad wated Randhir to find dis envelope so he didn't allow d forensic team to take away d body😳...thank god he understood dat its professional rivalry
now all those monsters dnt hav much time to escape coz its Randhir after all😳
n whozz dat??? well frankly i m surprised dat u mentioned "one out of them"...coz all of dem r culprits aren't they😡 so y wud nly one of them be afraid????
hmmm sanyukta's time has come to face Vardhan finally😕 acha Randhir is also there but wt d hell huh Vardhan literally spared Randhir even when he knows dat Randhir was behind it😡
i hate dis..Vardhan plz watch out ur tongue..u hav no idea wt Sanyukta Agarwal is😈
okie i was shell shocked reading dis part di..slap???
did she actually slap him😲...di no offense but i think Randhir crossed his limits too👎🏼
coz speaking to Sanyukta as if she has come to d college to woo him😡 was really bad on Randhir's part😔...di i hav to tell u smthng i used to hate vidushi but when it comes to Ishita n Vidushi..i ll pick dat vidushi as a villain in Sandhir's life rather dan dat *****
wat does she think of herself huh😡...some one has to teacher her some manners
n also have to make her realize dat all her dramas r not gng to last long😈
Randhir plz plz plz dnt get senti abt dat *****.dnt u understand,shezz jus acting,she is a hell of an actor...shezz afraid dat she might be exposed ntn more dan dat so now she trying to persuade Randhir to give his revenge agenda..n poor Randhir he is being manipulated by dat ******
ohhh god now wat???? ofc he will not find dat letter in d lab then wt is he gonna do???
barge into sanyukta's room (partly im happy for dat)😉
arey sanyu dnt open it baby...ufff u opened it hmm ofc u didn't do it deliberately na..but u tore d envelope right now atleast try to stick it girl..Randhir's gng to gush forth into ur room any minute😲...diii i desperately wanna know who wrote dat letter n wat happens next plz update ASAP

Res. :-(

unressd on page 97

My instincts told me , u'd update today!

Originally posted by: themockingblue.

I came here for something else :P and I go for Page 81 assuming it's the chapter I reserved on and 😳😲

You're just so awesome 😎🤗

This chapter is just perfect I'm not saying the other ones aren't (which they're are, legitly).

A huge, massive clap for you for a few scenes ⭐️

The first one was the apology scene. It's written so freaking brilliantly. It's absolutely synced with with them. Sanyukta didn't say anything when he shouted or taunted her, which is how she should have reacted. And Randhir shouted and taunted exactly how he would, and I could hate on him for that but that's just how he is. He didn't get emo over her tears or had a sweet flashback of her confession or anything .. 🥱

Yeah I can see the Randhir here playing a horrible trick like that It'll also be exactly like him but then if you ask me, I think Sanyukta's being a little .. off? blindly going for what he says after everything 😛

Ramu chacha died 🤔 I was expecting this? Randhir's outburst and the whole gang's reaction, brilliant work done! I'm always saying how amazing you are at building up your characters and this just proves that :) Ishita-Sanyukta scene was so damn good. Specially Ishita's dialogue there 😳

And our girl is back 😆

Edited btw :)

Originally posted by: keertikitty

i'm new on this forum but i was a silent reader on all ur FFs 👏

pls update asap i'm missing your FF very much

love

keerti

P.s i loved your work "meant to be" but from now i will comment

love you 😳

The flow of Res's you must have to go through :P

Originally posted by: TashaForever

My instincts told me , u'd update today!

Which is why I was waiting despite having a school test tom.

Res :D

---Unres------

Moi is angry with you!!

You did not scrap me before updating :/ Dts why Imma late :(

And why a cliffhanger re? Why did you leave it here?

At such an intriguing point of the story.

I still wonder how do u manage to write so damn well!

The words, and the entire write up...how does it manage to be so gripping?

ARghh...I am done buttering my di yaar. Im running out of compliments for you :/

And I will NOT comment long cause u left d story at such an intriguing point.

I dont understand how ur so creative...The line u added about one of the friend's thought while going to the dorm. How long are they gonna b out of radar? It peaks r curiousity re!

The slap. The emotions you portrayed on both, Randhir and Sanyukta's behalf, was absolutely commendable!

The little scene you added, about Vidu and Sanyu's fall and both their thoughts/feelings.

Gawd..u r too good at expressing emotions :)

The envelope being opened by Sanyu ws a good move. Intriguing.

And now all I can do is wait for the next update. Imma failing tom pakkah! Cause i will be writing about ur fics nd the possibilities for next chapter, in my FA exam :/

Anywya. Keep writing re :* And update soon.

I mean, really SOON!

~Chutki

PS. I said I wont comment long...ptaa nahi kya hogaya xP

Chutki,
U were gone for a week and I missed u the most...I updated 3 chapters that week and I was missing my two fav soul sisters on IF...Aru & u!!!!
I am so glad u are back!
But yeh kya? Kal exam? Ja jaldi se so ja!!!!
But really sis!!! How sweet of u!!!
Thank uuu :*
I love u loads!!!
Will update asap only for u!!!
All the best swthrt!!
Ciao!

Suprb update 😊
every whr mystry mystry...
I'm hopng tat in nxt part v wil get to read abt more sandhir scens bt gud scens nt fight