AvRaj SS: Melodious Tunes(Updtd) Part 9 on pg18 - Page 5

Originally posted by: Sammy11

Wow! Super AWESOME and entertaining! 👏I visualized the complete update! It was spectacular! Brilliant! I just loved the lake side scene! 😳Hmm something is up with Raj's past? Its getting very interesting and gripping.. please continue.. i'm eagerly waitin for next update! Lol...😉

Thanks again.. a big thumbs up for your work!👍🏼

//SammyExpress!!

Originally posted by: ShivinkiJas

awesome hai shru... loved it ...
cute ...romantic ...innocent sa...

raj becomes sad it means something is dere...

AvRaj togethr just woww...
wait fr next update

Originally posted by: tina_sre

Shru, Thnx 4 d update...m so very excited but lil busy now...wil defo. read n comment later...sorry!

Res!

Part-4

Arpita comes to Avni's room..She sees Avni upset n goes to her

Arpita: Avni...

Avni: Bhabi...U here? Do u need something?

Arpita: Why? Can't I come here to meet my sweet Avni?

Avni: Nothing's lyk tht...plz sit na..

Arpita: Avni..why r u so upset?

Avni: no bhabi..i'm not upset.

Arpita: U want to hide it from me?? I knw everything Avni..u can't hide it from me..i can feel ur pain..but plz don't b upset..U have to prove urself today..thn only ur pain will over.

Avni: Bhabi..i don't know..but I'm feeling lyk today everything will b over..all that what started a month before will end today.

Arpita: It's good na that everything will b over today..u'll b free from ur pain..u can start ur lyf afreash

Avni: ya..i'll b released from d pain? But can I b happy again..? Can I feel those feelings again?

Avni has tears in her eyes...seeing this Arpita also got tears in her eyes..She hugged Avni.

Arpita: plz don't cry Avni..everything will b alright.

Avni: Bhabi..why this happened to me..i loved someone so much but...

Arpita: Shh...Avni..plz don't remember all this..But I can feel tht after today u'll b able to smile..u have to smile.

Avni is silent...she wipes her tears.

Avni: Thnx bhabi..for being there for me every time.

Arpita again hugs Avni n leaves from there.

Avni again gets lost in her days of happiness.

********************************FLASHBACK****************************

It has been few days since Raj-Avni r friends. Avni is at her home in her terrace..

Avni(In her mind): for these few days I'm just the most luckiest girl on the earth...Raj is such a sweet person..i've fallen for him more n more..He just makes me feel so special..he loves to bring smile in my face..But still I couldn't understand him...sometime he talks so strangely n double meaning words...God knws what he tries to tell...

Avni gets a call from Devika who reminds her to come college.

In College

Avni attends her class n thn she goes to Canteen as she knws that Raj always waits for her there at this tym..so she can't wait to go there.Avni reaches there n sees that again she's late..Raj is already there.

Raj: Welcome miss late..

Avni: raj..i'm so sorry..i was..

Raj: No..today only sorry will not work..yaar..u'r always late..i'll not talk to u today.\

Avni holds her ears n makes a puppy face.

Avni: I'm really very very sorry..from next I'll never b late...promise.

Raj laughs seeing Avni lyk tht

Avni: What? U r smiling? I wanted to pacify u n u r laughing...I'll not talk to u..go.

Raj; Aree...miss late..oh sorry...Avni...Don't b angry..i was just laughing tht u were looking so cutee..Sorry na.

Avni slightly smiles

Raj: I knew it..u can't b angry with me.

AvRaj were talking suddenly a waiter comes n gives Avni a letter n a rose.

Avni: who gave this?

Waiter: A boy came n gave this letter.he told to give this to u.

Avni: Ok..thnx.

The waiter goes..Avni is confused..she was just abt to open the letter..but Raj takes ti from her hand.

Raj: Oh...letter...I'm sure this is a love letter...I'm going to read it first ok..?

Avni(Shocked): Love letter?Hey Raj..give it to me,..now..

Raj: No..no..i'm gonna read it..

Avni: No give me..

Avni gets up..n Raj runs..Avni runs behind him.

Background tone: Aur Pyaar Ho Gaya title song..

Raj goes around the college n Avni follows him..Avni tries to get the letter back but Raj is not going to give it...They runs around the whole college...AvRaj comes very close during all this running n all...Avni forgets the Letter n she's lost in Raj's eyes..n Raj is also feeling something ..a slight smile is on her face...

After sometym..again raj runs..n avni behind him...but this tym Avni trips n falls..

Avni: ooouch...

Raj sees Avni n comes running towards her.

Raj: Avni...r u ok...how u fell? Can't u see? How much u got hurt? Is it hurting very much?

Avni: Raj...

Raj: why I'm scolding u...? It's all my fault..why I was running lyk a fool..? See u got hurt..i'm sooo sorry Avni..u..

Avni(Holding Raj's Hand): Raj...i'm ok...completely ok..don't panick..it's just a little pain..it'll reduce soon.

Raj: r u serious?

Avni: yeah..i'm ok..

Avni smiles n Raj also..

Avni: now help me to get up.

Raj: yeah..give me ur hand.

Avni tries to get up..but she again falls.

Raj : Ok..now stop giving urself more pain.Raj takes Avni in his arms n takes her to sick room.Raj makes her sit on the bed n sprays medicine...Avni is smiling.

Avni(in mind): Raj...u care for me so much..It has been just a few days since we met but u became so close to me. I love u raj...n I want u to love me too...But I don't know what u feel abt me...

Raj: Avni...

Avni:Ya.

Raj:Thn let's go..I'll drop u home.

Avni:No..it's ok Raj..I'll go on my own.

Raj: No..Let's go..i can't let u go alone.

Raj takes avni home..outside khanderwal house there was Arpita standing.Arpita saw Avni n Raj..Avni told her everything n introduced her with Raj..Arpita forced Raj n took him inside.

There Raj met Bhawna n Suket..who were very thankful to raj.

Bhawna: Thnk u Raj..u saved my daughter...Go..Avni..take some rest.

Avni: but Raj..

Raj: Don't orry..i'll b going now.

Avni goes upstairs.

Suket: Come Raj..let's sit.

Raj: Uncle..

Suket: plz..u have to sit n have a coffee with me.come

They both sit.

Suket: I'm very thankful to u son.U cared for my Avni..u knw she's very dear to me.

Raj: No need for thanks uncle..it's my duty as a friend.

Suket: I must say that Avni is very lucky to have u as her friends..be with her always.

Raj:Of course unle.

Suket: Tell me abt ur family..ur parents.

Raj looks somewhat disturbed.

Raj: My dad is in Australia..he's a businessman.

Suket: N ur mom?

Raj(upset): Uncle..i'm getting late..i've an important work..i've to go..sorry..nice to meet u.

Raj leaves in hurry.Avni sees this from upstairs..she is confused abt his behavior.

Arpita sees this n comes to her.

Arpita: Avni..let's go to ur room.

Arpita takes Avni to her room.

Arpita: what happened Avni? U look tensed.

Avni: I don't knw bhabi..but Raj seems very upset sometimes.

Arpita: Avni..Raj is ur best friend right?

Avni: He's more than tht..he's the most precious person I've ever met..I can't lie to u bhabi..I love him..But don't know abt him..

Arpita(Smiles): I knew it..wenever u talk abt him..u become so happy..i'm sure Raj will also love u soon.

Avni hugs Arpita.

************************FLASHBACK ENDS***********************

Avni thinks those were her sweetest memories...She was so happy...but she didn't know that thses happiness won't last long.

Originally posted by: tina_sre

Shru, mujhe pata hai tum mujhe petoge😆 lekin mein tayar hoon aus ke liye...so sorry maine itna insist ke tume update dene ke liye aur abhi tak nahi pari...give me sum more tym...m badly stuck wid sum other stuff...bahut kuch pending hai yaar...tumare yeh FF, Jas ka aur Sammy ka bhi hai...aur maine abhi tak aunka question ka pura ans bhi nahi diya hai...Tina philal behal gari me baithi hai🤣

@Shru,Jas,SammyExpress, Vishi: give me sum more tym...I'll b back wid a bang😊