AvRaj SS: Melodious Tunes(Updtd) Part 9 on pg18 - Page 7

Originally posted by: SONAMB404

so nicely written 😃
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Originally posted by: jaya2904

nice one. when is d next update?

Originally posted by: ShivinkiJas

aree yrr main bhi apan SS nikloon matlab search karoon ..pata ni kahan pe dabba padha hai 😆

Originally posted by: Princyz_Belle

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ab mil gaya na?? Mujhe bhi itna hi search karna parta hain..😆

Originally posted by: Princyz_Belle

Part-3

Avni is sitting on her garden n looking at her phone..There r some pics of her with Raj. She remembers those days..

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It has been two days since Avni met Raj..n she's very eager to meet him again..Avni is sitting on the canteen n waiting for Devika..she sees that Raj was sitting there with some of his friends. Avni was looking at him for some tym..bcoz she can't get enough of him..She was smiling..Suddenly Raj sees him..He also smiles..Avni looks other side. Raj gets up n comes to her.

Raj: Hi..Avni.

Avni: Hello.

Raj: why r u sitting here alone?

Avni: Oh..actually I was waiting for my friend..but I guess she's busy.

Raj: May b we were destined to b together today..

Avni: umm..what?

Raj: I mean...may I sit with u?

Avni: Oh..sure.

Avni was really happy in her deep heart..but she cudn't express it. Raj again starts the talk.

Raj: Avni...

Avni: Hmm..

Raj: What r u thinking...if u have problem with sitting me here..thn I can go.,.

Avni (In hurry): Arree..no no plz...I was just...

Raj (Laughs): I know..no girl can say no to me..n tht too u.

Avni: Means?

Raj: Nothing lyk that..leave it..anyways u r in 1^st year right?

Avni: Yeah.

Raj: Hm...that's what I think...or else such a beautiful girl was in my batch I didn't see..!!!!

Avni (Blushing) : umm...u say anything..stop joking..

Raj: What? Raj Purohit never jokes.

Avni: Yeah..i'm seeing tht.

Raj: Girls die for these jokes dear.

Avni : But I'm not tht types of girl.

Raj : I know..u r already dead.

Avni(Shocked): What?

Raj: u understand very less..u r very nave.

Avni : I think it's the nice way.

Raj: May b..i lyk it this way.

Avni: Raj...from when u started playing violin?

Raj: From childhood..

Avni: Really? Who taught u?

Raj's smile fades..his face beams with disappointment..he tries to cover it up.

Raj: People can b taught by the environment..n in many more ways.

Avni understands that Raj wants to cover up..so she ignores the topic.

Avni: Ya..u r right..will u take coffee?

Raj: No..no...I'll b going now. Have lectures to attend.

Just then Devika arrives there n Raj sees her.

Raj: Look..ur friend is here..i'm going now thn..bye..will definitely meet u later.

Raj winks at Avni..Avni is surprised n blushed..She slightly smiles.

Avni : Ok bye.

Devika comes n sees Raj going..

Devika: hayyee..Avni..u r very lucky tht u were sitting with Raj..

Avni: I too think so..

Devika: Every girl of college dreams of spending tym with him..n u did it..congrtz.

Avni smiles..She thinks to herself tht she cannot understand this guy..he seems to b very fun loving n sweet guy but what happened to him all of a sudden..n the way he talks...but she's happy tht she talked to him again.

The next day Avni was walking through the college garden..Suddenly Raj appears there.

Raj: Hey,Avni..

Avni (Shocked): oh..hello.

Raj: Meet u at 4.30pm on college lake side.

Avni: But..

Raj: plz yaar..no if no but.U r coming n that's it.

Raj goes from there n Avni is in surprise..

Avni(In her mind): what shud I do..i really want to meet him..But..no I'll go.

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Avni is thinking that it was a very beautiful surprise for her..a beautiful afternoon..She was very happy that day..Her heart started to beat more for Raj from thn..She cud never forget these memories.

Avni goes to her cupboard n opens the drawer...there is a chocolate packet...she kept it safely as it was the first gift Raj gave her.

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It's 5.10 n Avni goes to lakeside running..she founds no one there..Avni looks at the watch n thinks tht she's late...may b Raj went from there. Avni feels sad..she tried to come on tym..but stuck with some work...Avni was about to go from there suddenly she hears Violin..She can feel it...she can recognize it..it's Raj's violin. Avni truns to the other side...She sees Raj's shadow..The sun is setting n Raj's shadow of playing violin is seen..n the tone is making the scene more serene.

Raj completed his tune n came to Avni with a big smile...Avni was also smiling..

Raj: how's tht?

Avni: Mesmerizing..

Raj:thnx.

Avni: but why u called me here?

Raj comes near Avni..he was very close to her..he moves his hands through her face..he removes the hairs on her face n whispers in her ears...

Raj: to do something special for someone special. I called u here to propose u.

Avni was shocked n blushing...she cudn't believe that Raj was telling this to her!!

Avni(Smiling): Raj...?

Raj(Laughs): arre..i was kidding..nothing lyk that...just wanted to gift u something.

Avni(Confused): But why?

Raj: yeah..u know I've seen many fans of my violin...but u r someone special..u connect very deepy with my violin..i don't want to lose someone lyk tht..so wanted to gift u something.

Avni: u knw Raj..u r someone very special to me too..i can't forget u..i mean ur violin.

Raj(Smiles): thnk u so much Avni..here take ur another gift...chocolate..After all violin tune will not fill ur stomach.(laughs)

Avni: but tht tune can fill my heart...

Raj looks at Avni..Avni smiles n takes the chocolate.

Avni takes her hand forward..

Avni: Raj..friends?

Raj gets a big smile on his face...he shakes his hand with her

Raj: friends..but b prepared..i'm a dangerous friend..(laughs)

Avni (also laughs): ok...I'm prepared..anything for u.

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Avni holds the chocolate packet n says to herself

Avni: I was so happy that day Raj...I was more falling for u...Even I treasured ur chocolate packet...but...I didn't know that these will give me pain now.

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Originally posted by: tina_sre

Shru, Mind blowing, awesum, superb...I loved everything 4rm start to end...All those lovely Avraj moments...d way u've written...4rm d dialogues to scenes...it'z incredible👏 and wat I love d most abt. ur SS is u've made it a musical love story which makes it completely diff. 4rm others and d title 'Melodious Tunes' is so apt 4 d story...and I more thing I like is u made Avni fall 4 Raj which is totally opposit 4rm d real story...believe me I had a big smile on my face when i wz reading it...u made my day...Thank u so much🤗

Part-5

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Avni is in college n sitting on a bench n looking a bit tensed.Raj comes there n sees her.

Raj: Hey Avni..what happened?? U r looking upset..

Avni: Nothing Raj..

Raj: See..i'm ur friend n u can share it wid me.

Avni: Actually Raj..Sir gave us an assignment..n he said us to submit it tomorrow as college is closing for 1 week..

Raj: Hmm..so..

Avni: Raj..i don't know how to do it..new subject n I hate it..how can I do it in today??

Raj: Oh that's the problem..it's a very minor one..

Avni: For it's not one Raj...How I'll do it.??

Raj: I'm here na...Don't worry..may b u r forgetting tht I'm on 2^nd year..n I know thm.I'll help u.

Avni: oh ya...!!!!ok..so today after college?

Raj: Avni..after college I've some work..i can meet u at evening..

Avni: ok..give me ur address I'll come.

Raj: No..no..

Avni: what?

Raj: I mean..why u'll take the trouble? I'll come to ur house..see u at 7 pm.

Avni: Ok..see u..n yeah..Thnx a lot Raj.

Raj smiles n leaves.

Avni was waiting eagerly for Raj's arrival..she was feeling very happy...finally doorbell rang n Avni ran to open the door...It was Raj with a bright smile on his face.

Avni: Hi..

Raj: Hello..

Avni: come in na..

Raj: Yeah..

Avni takes Raj in Bhawna-Suket -Arpita n all meet him n thn Avni takes him to her room.

Avni gives Raj the books n she keeps looking at him..Raj looks at her n asks what happened..but avni nods nothing.

Raj starts helping avni n making her understand how to do it..Avni is understanding but she's a bit tired...Suddenly raj sees outside through the window..

Raj: Avni..let's go.

Avni: Where??

Raj: Let's go naa..

Raj holds Avni's hand n takes the books n takes her with him..

Raj: Avni..Where is the way of roof?

Avni: What?

Raj: Take me plzz..

Avni: But...Ok..let's go..

They both reach at the roof..

Avni: Raj..what happened?Why u brought me here?

Raj: Shhh...look around..

Avni looks around n sees that the atmosphere is very beautiful..A gentle cold breeze is blowing..the moon is shining..she smiles.

Raj: Look avni..this is my secret..i love to read under open sky..it's the most beautiful way yaar..today I'm sharing it wid u..i'm sure u'll love it.

Avni: Really Raj..the feeling is very nice.

Raj: Did u see? U're liking it..now let's start..

They both sit n start working on the assignment again..After some tym Avni brings coffee for her n Raj..hey both drink together..

Avni: Raj..really reading under the sky is such a peaceful thing..it looks so serene.

Raj: Yeah Avni..from the childhood I read like this..whn u don't understand anything the atmosphere teaches u..

Avni: U live life so beautifully Raj..

Raj smiles..suddenly he gets up n asks Avni too to get up..

Raj: Avni..let me teach u another trick..it's quite tym we r doing this..now we need some entertainment..

Avni: What?

Raj: oh..u ask a lot of ques..Just listen to me..

Raj asks Avni's hand for dance..Avni hesitantly gives it..AvRaj starts dancing..

[BG=Kuch khaas hain kuch paas hain...kuch ajnabi ehsaas hain]

They both dance hand in hand..Both have a big smile on their face..Avni is just lost in Raj's eyes..Raj too is looking very deeply in Avni's eyes..just lyk they have forgotten the world..
Avni: Thank u so much Raj

Raj: Thnx for what?

Avni: For making me feel so special..today is a best day of my life.

Raj: Hmm..if u r with Raj Purohit..u r bound to feel special..n they both laugh.

They stop dancing n sits again..They complete the assignment n talk sitting with each other..[BG going on] n they fell asleep on the small table with books.

In the morning when Avni wakes up she sees raj is not there..She is very surprised..she runs down stairs n sees bhawna n Arpita there..

Avni: Maa..Raj...???

Bhawna: Oh Raj..he went home dear..i told him to have breakfast but he said he have some work.

Avni: Oh..i go n take bath..thn have to go to college also.

Avni goes to her room n is very happy..She thinks of last night..it was very special for her..now she thinks that Raj also has some feelings for her..Avni is feeling out of the world.

Avni goes to college..She is finding Raj..But alas..! It's class tym but still she cudn't find Raj..Avni goes to class n submits her Assignment n she got much praises from her teacher. Avni is very very happy.

Avni is standing in the college campus n thinking to thnk Raj..suddenly someone pats her from behind.She looks behind but finds no one..someone again pats her from other side..avni again looks behind but again it's no one...again someone is abt to pat her but Avni holds his hand ..n it's none other than Raj.

Avni: Raj...!!! Where were u?? I was searching for u for such a long tym.

Raj: yeah..i saw.

Avni: u saw??? But still u were hiding!!

Raj: bcoz I wanted to see the smile on ur face..which came after ur teachers praise.

Avni(smiling): Raj...

Raj: what?

Avni: thnx for everything..

Avni(In mind): u care for me a lot na...I know u also feel for me..i'm waiting for d day when we'll confess to each other.

Raj(shaking Avni): hey...what happened??

Avni shakes her head as nothing. Avni remembers that she have to go for violin practice...

Avni: bye..raj.i've to go.

Raj: but Avni...

Avni runs towards the music rooms..Raj is surprised.Raj goes behind her.

Avni is playing violin..Raj comes to d door..he sees her playing violin..he's as well as happy n shocked..

Avni didn't notice Raj n she goes on playing..Raj stands behind n listens to her..she has some problems while playing but still she plays with all her heart.

Raj is very touched by her playing n her honest effort..Raj thinks to enter but thinks it's not good to disturb her.Raj goes from there.

Avni completes her playing n goes to the college garden..there she sees Raj is standing n waiting for her.

Raj: I was waiting for u so long..

Avni: why?

Raj: where were u?

Avni: I...i..ac...tuall...y...

Raj: Say..

Avni: I was with Devika..in the library.

Raj: Really ?? I saw Devika going to the caf.

Avni: oh...Ah...leave all this..U wanted to say something na..tell..

Raj: let me drop u to ur home by walking..

Avni: but..ok..

AvRaj starts walking towards Avni's home..

Raj: Avni..u know..It's a li'l tym..but u became one of my closest person.

Avni(Smiling): u too raj..(In Mind):...more than anything Raj..

Raj: U know Avni..friendship is about trust..no one can win anyone's trust easily.

Avni: ya..

Raj: U have become my close as u never hide anything from me..right??i believe whn someone hides their things from his/her close person..he/she's all fake...they r not trust worthy.

Avni(in her mind): have raj seen me playing violin..?? May b that's why he's talking lyk that..I hid this from him..it's not good..may b he's feeling bad bcoz of this.i shud tell him everything.

Avni was abt to tell ..but they reach Avni's home..

Raj: see ur home is here...ok..thn bye..meet u later.

Avni goes home.

It's night n avni is feelin g very bad that she hid abt her violin playing from Raj..she calls him..but he cuts the call...Avni again calls but he again cuts. Avni is tensed.After some tym Avni falls asleep..

In the morning Avni is very tensed..she again calls Raj..but he doesn't pick it up.

In the noon Avni cudn't resist at all..She sends Raj an email.

"Raj...I'm really sorry..i know u r hurt tht I hid from u tht I learn violin..but it's nothing lyk tht u r thinking..i'm just learning it n u r a master of it..so I was shy to tell u tht...Raj believe me...I didn't mean to hurt u or something..So plz forgive me..now tht u know abt my violin playing I wud lyk to learn more from u..but I shud tell before tht I got the best violin teacher..she's my idol..n u know what..?? there's a lot which matches with u n her in playing violin...she's d well known violin player from past...she's Ms. Reema Kapoor.

I hope u'll forgive me..Bye"

Avni sends it...she gets a Sms on her phone n it's from Raj..

"Avni...I want to tell u something special..that's very imp. I can't stop myself now..plz meet me at 8.o o'clock at Rose restaurant.plz b there."

Avni is very happy..she thinks tht Raj after seeing the e-mail has forgiven her..n he's going to confess to her..she runs downstairs..

But the E-mail is not sent yet..it's loading.n after some tym..it's sent...!!

P.s>> friends this FB will go for a while n it'll b continued in the nxt updts too..to build up the story it's needed.