AvRaj SS: Melodious Tunes(Updtd) Part 9 on pg18 - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Oh teri!!!! Yeh toh maine abhi tak nai pada😭
aaj raat se pehle pakka padhloongi
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Princyz_Belle



awww...thnk u so much Tina🤗...u all r so inspiring...yeah i made Avni fall for Raj..he deserves it right?😉...Thnx again..ya.will continue soon...😃



and u inspire me...In fact, Jas, SammyExpress, Bittu,Vishi all my pinkqueens inspire me...if I cud do even 10% of wat u al do...mere to lyf ban jayege😃

Ya, plez. do continue...m in love wid ur story🤗


Sorry again...I culdn't send u d link of d Avraj scenes...but wil defo. try to make it asap😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: tina_sre

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and u inspire me...In fact, Jas, SammyExpress, Bittu,Vishi all my pinkqueens inspire me...if I cud do even 10% of wat u al do...mere to lyf ban jayege😃

Ya, plez. do continue...m in love wid ur story🤗


Sorry again...I culdn't send u d link of d Avraj scenes...but wil defo. try to make it asap😭


Oh..!! So sweet of u..😳
ya...we all r special..as we'r pinkqueens...😉

N it's ok dear...i said na..u can do whenever u r free...no worries...i don't have hurry.😆

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Posted: 11 years ago
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res
will read & comment tomorrow 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow!!!!! It's so refreshing, so soft, awesome it is!!!!!👏 Loved it to the core Shruthi😃
You are such a good writer! I've enjoyed it alot and looking forward for more😃😃
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Originally posted by: ..Breeze..

Wow!!!!! It's so refreshing, so soft, awesome it is!!!!!👏 Loved it to the core Shruthi😃

You are such a good writer! I've enjoyed it alot and looking forward for more😃😃



Thnx a lottt Bittu...😃
I'm glad tht u liked it.

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Part-2

Avni is lying on her bed..again lost in thoughts...thinking what happened after that day..

************************FLASHBACK***********************

Avni comes down to hall where Suket,Bhavna n bauji was sitting...they were taking tea..Avni goes to thm

Avni: Good morning everyone.

Bhavna: Wow..u're looking so happy today..

Avni: Ya maa..gotta go..

Bhavna: but why so fast..

Avni: just lyk tht..mom today I'll b late while coming home..

Suket: it's ok..but why?

Avni: just have some work with Devika after college..okkk..bye..

Suket(Smiling): ok dear..bye..but take care.

Avni goes to College..n attends the classes but feels restless..she's waiting for the college to end. She can't wait to meet Raj. Finally the college ends..Avni runs to the canteen but sees no one there. She goes to Devika n asks her where Raj's performance is going to happen..Devika takes her outside the college.There r many students all r very excited to hear Raj their Superstar.Avni tries to find raj but she's very behind. Thn suddenly Raj's violin starts. Everywhere is silence..all r mesmerized by the tune.Avni slowly goes inside the crowd..n stands on the first row.She is looking at Raj...How he's playing...He looks lost in his tunes world..he is not with thm..he's in other world..he's playing so beautifully...Avni is just looking at him with a smile on her face.

Raj's playing ends..everyone claps n cheers for him..Raj thnks everyone n hugs some of his buddies. People starts leaving...Devika comes to Avni

Devika: let's go now Avni...his performance has eneded.

Avni is not listening to anything..her heart is not allowing her to go.

Avni: Devika..u go..i'm coming..

Devika: But Avni..

Avni: plz devika go..i'm coming na..

Devika goes..there is almost no one..Raj is packing his violin..Avni goes to him..Raj looks at her..Avni smiles.Raj smiles back.this one is unique smile.

Avni: Hello Raj...I'm Avni.

Raj: Oh..Hi Avni...nice to meet you.

Avni: Raj...u r an awesome violin player.

Raj: Thnx..

Avni: U knw really ur violin touches heart.

Raj smiles..he comes near to Avni ..Avni's heart starts beating..

Raj(In a whispering voice): Really??

Avni :Y...ya...eh..

Raj(Smiling): This means I touched ur heart. Right?

Avni(Shocked n blushing): i...i...me..an...ur..violin...

Raj laughs n steps back.

Raj: Ok..cool down..i was just kidding.thnx a lot..i'm glad tht u liked my work this much.

Avni(Relieved): Oh..! no need for thnx u deserve this.

Raj smiles.

Raj(with a mischievous smile) : Yeah...I think I deserve more...

Avni is shocked...Raj laughs...

Avni: B..ye...

Avni runs from there leaving a smiling Raj behind.

*********************FLASHBACK ENDS**********************

Avni thinks...that was the first tym we met..we talked...but I loved u from day 1..without talking to u..but ur behavior was new to me...my heart was beating fast as u came near to me..but still I cudn't stop thinking about u.Avni with a smile sleeps.

Next morning g Avni wakes up n sees it's already 9 am..she's shocked...she need to hurry...she has so many things to prepare..her dress..her pass..her introduction speech n most importantly..her Violin practice...she freshens up fastly n takes out her violin n cleans it once again..bhavna comes there.

Bhavna: what's this Avni?? Why have u skipped ur breakfast?

Avni: maa..i had so much to do..u knw na that today is my performance.

Bhavna: yes Avni..i know but why u r skipping ur meals..from where u'll get ur strength..n it's only a monthly function..so need not to worry.

Avni: Maa I'm performing on stage for the first tym..

Bhavna: I knw everything...but I have trust in our daughter..u'll rock in ur performance.take it easily.Now come downstairs n eat something.

Bhavna leaves.

Avni(In mind): No mom..u don't knw everything..Today is a very big day in my life...I've to prove myself today. Only thn I can b in peace.

Devika calls Avni.

Devika: Avni... u r ready na...u knw I'm very much excited for the program today.. N also I'm excited for Raj's performance..he's performing after 1 month..!!

Avni: Devika...u r my friend..u shud b excited for my performance..

Devika: U don't have to tell me tht yaar...I'm so excited about ur performance...I can't tell..moreover first tym u'll b performing on the same stage as Raj.

Avni: Devika..more people are going to perform also..why u r behind Raj?

Devika: Sorry avni..i knw tht u don't lyk to talk abt him..but..it's ok..Meet u in the college..u remember na come at 4 pm..u have to prepare n thn program will start form 6 pm.

Avni: ya..i remember..will come..bye.

Avni cuts the phone n thinks...those memories were so sweet...but why she's remembering thm..after today everything will come to an end.

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Hope u all will lyk it😊...n itne saare flashbacks se irritate mat hona😆..coz flashbacks r the main pillers of this story.😉

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank u Shru...wz eagerly waitin 4 diz...wil read and comment...

RES!

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